New ABHINA FF::My Dark Angel::17 feb 12 pg112 - Page 66

Originally posted by: abhiyan_soni

superb update ayesha .

fight was amazing . abhay and sid was fight same side ... great . i always want this . alina here is strong and fighting with dapu and jey .pia part was awesome . now she have also some power . babby was cute . abhay and babby convo was very touchy .awww matz confuse his love for jey . well done job . now i want pia also in action . continue soon .

Its an intense moment and the penultimate update will shed light on the events ahead. There isn't much left to complete the FF. Its almost done and then i can rest a little bit. Pia will fight against Maithali but only just manage maybe. She'll need help from ABHAY and Sid to protect her. I always see ABHAY as a cute teddy bear in front of his child. U know the gentle warm lovable doting father.

Originally posted by: raichandroxx

sory for late reply ayesha actualy i startd readng dis ff 2 days ago only nd i found it realy amazng...thanx for d pm...

This FF isn't like my previous works coz this had an UNDERWORLD vibe to it. THANX for loving it babes

Originally posted by: anukrati

WOW
AYESHA SUPERB
DEAR.
fight getting really intresting
hey i like aaliyah 6 hour and can talk .abhay aaliyah convo is so sweet i really like the idea .great job dear
alina fight with jeh can't wait
really intresting
love the update
continue soon

Me too. Abhay and Aaliyah HAVE a BOND far exceeding this of any bonds he's had with anyone. Alina has used up all of her reserved strength on her MOTHER. The girl only gave birth a good 6 hours ago and to find the strength to finish of Jeh well its not an easy ask is it?

Originally posted by: Venesa44

Now this is one action packed update ,

Finally Alina found her bone ,

Dipu dead🤣

And jay after seeing metz and Pia🥺

He is a stupid after all cant even smell mettz a vamp,

Cont soon,

Hope abhina survives thrue night,

It took a long time but ALINA got there.

Pia running away to save the love child of Abhay. That is something I never expected. So in her escape is she going to encounter Maithli. That would be it thejn. Her two lovers trying to protect Pia would have her in splits.

Jai will he kill his own sister. Has he become such a lost case. But Deepus end was the best

Originally posted by: kuttu

Pia running away to save the love child of Abhay. That is something I never expected. So in her escape is she going to encounter Maithli. That would be it thejn. Her two lovers trying to protect Pia would have her in splits.

Jai will he kill his own sister. Has he become such a lost case. But Deepus end was the best

I decided it would be a hell of ask and show PIA'S PURITY to help a mere child without putting her needs first and Sid with ABHAY along for the ride would be EPIC.

awesum update...!!! So nw alina nd jay r ready fr d final battle...!! Maithli says she lovs abhay n thn attcks hm..all i cn say..she s a v.complctd chrctr...!! And ayesha r'u planning to end dis ff soon??
P.s..continue asap..thx fr d pm..tcr...

--indu

Originally posted by: lost_in_love

awesum update...!!! So nw alina nd jay r ready fr d final battle...!! Maithli says she lovs abhay n thn attcks hm..all i cn say..she s a v.complctd chrctr...!! And ayesha r'u planning to end dis ff soon??
P.s..continue asap..thx fr d pm..tcr...

--indu

Yeah i keep saying i'll end one FF then like the dizzy kind a person i am start another one. I hope U are enjoying the GROUP FF. Its a little dark and definitely never been done before.

Originally posted by: matwamango

Yeah i keep saying i'll end one FF then like the dizzy kind a person i am start another one. I hope U are enjoying the GROUP FF. Its a little dark and definitely never been done before.

haha...it proves ur crazinss abt abhay..!!! Bt good fr us..as we r alwz hungry fr abhaiya stry..no mattr hw much servd...!!! :-D
nd oh..ya..offcourse m lovng d group ff..!!! The concpt s fresh..nd d group thng s wrkng grt...!!! Special thanks to you fr dis amazng ff...!! :-)) nd glad tht u remembrd to pm me... :-D

-indu

superb update.. gr8 fight.. cont soon...