Fanfic: happily never after? alternate ending pg25

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Posted: 14 years ago

#141

Originally posted by: snitchseeker
Nice update.

thank u sooo much😊

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tamanna

@tamannamalik

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Posted: 14 years ago

#142

chapter 8
i opened my eyes, i looked around.. god.. it was a dream.. that part of it is true.. i have a brain tumor, i turned to face abhay, he was still sleeping, i smiled at him.. i didnt tell him yesterday about the other reason why i never was good to him.. i found about it long time ago.. but i couldnt tell him.. i know that he loves me more than i love him.. i know that he might not move on if im gone.. oh god, im having tears just imagining what he will go through.. i dont want to hurt him, i dont want him to live lonely.. and how stupid of me? to make up with him the last few days.. but i just cant resist his love.. its much stronger than me
i opened my eyes to look at her "piya?" i saw her tears "kya hua?"
i smiled wipping my tears away "i was remembering last night.."
i smiled "we didnt do anything last night"
"haan.. just sleeping next to each other.. i missed that.."
"hm" i kissed her head "main bhi.."
i looked down, i should start thinking about a way that he would let me go without hurting him.. i sighed "chalo" i said sitting on bed "work today na?"
i looked at her as she took the towels from her closet, she looked a bit nervous "are you ok hun?"
i looked back at him "yeah.. im fine" i smiled at him then went to take a shower. i went downstairs after i was ready for school, Abhay wasnt done yet, he probably slept for another 5 minutes "Abhay" i shouted
"COMING" its been a while since i heard her shout my name "good morning" i kissed her head
"good morning" i gave him his cup
"piya ji"
i grinned "yes ji?"
"how about we go out on a date today?"
i gasped "im married .."
"oh.." i nodded "that's awful.."
i laughed "no its not, he is a great man"
"im greater" i winked at her
"really?"
"haan"
"ok then"
i almost chocked with my coffe "alright what?"
"lets go out on a date" i winked at him getting up
"you serious?" i got up and walked towards her
"haan ji" i started walking to him slowly "he comes back at 6" i whispered kissing his cheek
"PIYA" i shouted, she was laughing at me "god!" i smiled looking at her laughing "ok you can stop laughing at me now"
"sorry , but you looked funny"
i rolled my eyes "yeah well, im a funny guy.." i hugged her "what time?"
"6.. here"
i looked at her "here?"
"uh huh" i held my bag "im going to cook something special for you"
i grinned like a kid "what?"
"no, cant tell you now" i kissed him softly "see you" i walked outside, got inside the car and sighed heavily.. i saw him coming out of the house, we smiled at each other then he left to work but i sat inside my car.. started to have tears.. i know i should go back to bad PIYA but i cant anymore.. i know my death will hurt him.. but what should i do? "Jeh." i whispered to myself.. i wipped my tears away and drove towards the school
"KABIR" i shouted as i saw him "how are you man?" i hugged him
"Abhay, you are hugging me.." he said looking around
"im sorry.. just HAPPY today" i grinned walking with him towards our patrol
"you know, happy means other things.." i looked at him confused "it means gay too" he whispered
i started laughing "yeah, we are not that" i stopped then shouted "WE ARE NOT GAYS"
"ABHAY!" he hit me
i laughed "sorry" i said getting inside the car
"what is wrong with you!?"
"im happy.. no, im not happy.. IM FLYING!!"
"okay?"
i sighed smiling "piyais back.. my piya is back" i grinned at him "remember the same old piya, jokes around.. dance around.. who's just perfect.."
he smiled at me "i remember her.."
"she's back.. and i will make sure she stays like that.. i will make sure she is the happiest woman on this earth.." i smiled

"jeh" i called out for him as he was walking towards his car "can i talk to you?"
"hey" he smiled at me "yeah, sure"
"well.. i was wondering.." i paused "if we could have lunch together?" i said softly
"i thought you and abhay were back together"
"yeah i thought the same.. but he's still a jerk" i looked down "its ok if you dont wan.."
"oh no" he grinned "no.. of course i want to go out with you.. chalo?"
"okay.. but i have to get back at 4:30"
"sure"
me and jeh went to have lunch.. i just wanted to get his trust back in me and maybe his love.. i sound like im using him.. i knw i hate myself for doing it, but anything for abhay... i will explain everything to jeh later... i went back home, started cooking abhay's special dish, then i heard him coming inside the house "im in the kitchen" i shouted
"hell.." he stopped "does it smell like chicken tandoori here?"
i looked around sniffing "does it?"
"NO YOU DID NOT!!" i walked towards her as she was holding a plate "please, let me take it.."
"oh you think so" i giggled as i was going towards the table then put the plate down "i'll go and bring.."
"no no no" i interrupted her, i was already drooling "sit, we will eat with our hands.. like we used to"
i laughed, then sat down and started to eat the chicken "you like it?"
"love it" i said eating another peice of my chicken
i smiled looking at him, my heart was aching me.. but, i guess i will have to be good to him.. just untill i pass away.. i looked down "Abhay.."
"hm" i looked at her
"im going to lay down.." i smiled at him
i blinked at her "are you ok?"
"yeah.. just a headache.. probably the flu is back again.."
i looked at her as she started walking towards the bathroom, i got up and followed her "piya?"
i looked at him as i was washing my hands "arre, you didnt finish it?"
"chalo, lets go to the doctor"
"no.. im okay.. ill lay down and ill be fine" i smiled at him
i looked at her as she walked pass me towards the stairs.. i back to the dining table.. i dont feel like eating anymore, put the chicken in the fridge, washed the plates, then went upstairs, washed my hands, put on my pjs then went towards her room "piya?"
i looked up at him, i knew he would come after me "yeah?"
"do you want my soup?"
"no.." i swallowed hard as i stopped myself from crying "i'll be fine.."
i sighed walking towards her, closing the door behind me, lied next to her then put my arms around her "are you sure?" "yes" i turned to face him "remember how i used to get headaches whenever we got in a fight?" he nodded looking worried "and i always told you that i want to lay down?"
yes."
"its the same kind of headache.. it will go away tomorrow.." i bit my lower lip
i kissed her forehead "how can i take away the headache?" i whispered
i started to have tears when i heard that, thank God it was dark and he couldnt see me "just hold me tightly.."
i held her tightly and brought her closer to me "i love you.."
i didnt reply.. i'd sob if i did.. but i love him too.

few months has passed, me and abhay were getting close but i was getting closer with jeh.. i had a plan in mind, i need to do this.. i need to let abhay leave me.. even its in a bad way.. i'd rather know that he's alive and hurt than half dead-half alive.. "Abhay.." i said as i walked inside the house
"hello" i smiled at her, she was looking pale.. she's been looking pale for few months now.. and refuses to go to a doctor
"oh um" i smiled nervously at him
i hugged her "kya hua?"
"i was wondering if i could.. go to LA with panchi?" i closed my eyes and bit my lower lip
i blinked at her "LA?" she nodded "Los Angeles?" she nodded again "that's.. the left side of the whole country.."
"haan but she has 2 tickets.. she doesnt want to go with danish.. because they're getting married this month and you know.." i gave him the puppy eyes look "pweese"
"oh dont do that" i looked away "piya, its LA!! not the next town.." i sighed then looked at her
"pleaseee" i folded my hands
"fine.."
"THANK YOU!" i jumped on him
"woha!" i giggled as i hugged her tightly "for how long?"
"just the weekend.." i grinned
"oh phew.." i smiled at her "i'll miss you though.."
i looked at him.. my eyes were already forming tears "haan.. me too".
the next day i packed my clothes and was heading towards the main door with abhay
"are you sure you dont want me to drop you at the airport?" i hate goodbyes but still..
"haan, i wont be able to get on the plane if i you come with me" i hugged him tightly "Abhay" i whispered in his ear, still holding him
"yes?" i was getting worried by the way she was hugging me
"i love you so much" i sniffed
"piya.. you're scaring me" i hugged her tightly
"i just want you to know that i love you.. never loved anyone but you.. and will never love anyone but you" i whispered crying silently
i looked down at her "i love you too.." i said kissing her head
i moved back then wipped my tears
i leaned down then kissed her softly
"take care ok?"
"you too.. call me when you get there" i smiled as i closed her car door
i nodded then started driving away, i was crying all the way to jeh's house.. he was living with his sister, so i had to pick him up "hey" i said as he got inside the car
"hey you" he kissed me
i smiled at him "ready to go?"
"absolutely" we drove to a nearby hotel, we got inside our room then started talking.. laughing, we had dinner and sat on the bed "piya.."
i looked at him "yeah?"
"do you really love me?"
i blinked at him "hm" i nodded, he got closer to me.. i looked at him, he leaned down then started kissing me, i didnt want to push him away.. so i responded to him.. i felt his hands touching my body, slowly taking my clothes off.. here i stopped then moved back, i looked at him "i cant.." i was having tears
he was breathing heavily "im sorry.."
i closed my shirt "no im sorry.. you mustve thought that this is why i wanted to spend few days with you.."
"no.. no piya.. i know you're not that kind of a girl.."
i looked down "can we go back home?"
"ok.." he hugged me tightly "im sorry.." he said kissing my head
i smiled at him then we packed our clothes.. even though it was 3 am, i wanted to go back home.. i felt so weird with jeh, and whatever we were about to do.. i didnt have to do it, lying to abhay about it is enough.. we got inside the car, i was driving and he was sitting next to me, holding my hand, i dont know why i looked at him and smiled, in just that second, he shouted, i looked in front of us to see a huge truck coming towards us, with my one hand i had to turn the car around.. the car flipped few times and landed on the other side of the road

Edited by tamannamalik - 14 years ago

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tamanna

@tamannamalik

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Posted: 14 years ago

#143

chapter 9
last chapter
Abhay!" i looked back at kabir
"what?"
"get in the car"
"kabir, my shift is over.." i was taking the night shift cause piya wasnt home..
"abhay, get in the damn car" i looked at how kabir was serious "there has been a car accident.."
"there are other cops to take that.."
"but you have to be there.."
my heart was beating fast, i got inside the patrol, just when i switched the car on, i heard the operator describing the car that was in the accident, my heart was pounding, i looked at kabir "piya's car.." i started to drive so fast that we almost had an accident once or twice but i didnt care.. piya was in that car.. and apperantly no one was there yet to help "PIYA" i shouted as i ran towards her car "PIYA" my tears were already on my cheeks, i got down on my knees and looked inside the car "PI.." i stopped.. piya was unconscious, but she was.. with someone.. i was breathing heavily.. she was holding.. i looked closer.. jeh's hand..
"ABHAY" kabir was shouting "GET HER OUT ABHAY!"
but i couldnt.. i was slowly moving back looking at the car
"ABHAH, ITS GOING TO EXPLODE, GET PIYA OUT!" he was on jehs side trying to get him out
i started having more tears.. should i let her die? should i save her? i looked to my right, fire department vehicles were coming.. i looked back at the car.. kabir already got jeh out, he was trying to get piya out too, i walked towards him, pushed him away, then put my arms around her waist, and pulled her out of the car, she was in my arms, all bloody.. but i only wanted to ask her why..

i opened my eyes.. my head was spinning.. and my bones were hurting me.. i looked at the roof and the room i was in, its a hospital.. i sighed, then looked to my left to see abhay sitting down.. he was playing with the wedding ring "abhay.."
i closed my eyes as a tear fell down when i heard her say my name, its been 3 days, i looked at her
oh God.. he's been crying.. does he know?
"you said you were going to LA with panchi.."
my heart was pounding now, what happened?
"but.. you werent with panchi.. were you?"
i looked at him "i wa.."
"AND DONT YOU DARE LIE TO ME" i shouted getting up
i jumped as i saw him shout like that "i wasnt with panchi.."
"you were with jeh .. i know"
oh my god, jeh.. the accident..
"where were you?"
there was a silence moment "in a hotel.."
with her words, i felt like she stabed me right in my heart "did you sleep with him?"
i started crying.. this wasnt my plan.. i didnt want him to see me with jeh in the car..
"say no and i will believe you.." i said as looked at her
this is it.. "yes.." i whispered looking down "i did.."
my heart stopped beating.. i wasnt sure if i was breathing anymore, i looked at how she's crying, but i cant do anything now, i slowly walked towards her, took my wedding ring out of my finger.. placed it right next to her left hand, leaned down, kissed her forehead "i always loved you.." i whispered, a tear fell on her forehead "and i will always do.." i wipped a tear then walked outside her room
i looked at the door.. i wasnt even crying.. just looking at the door.. "i will always love you too" i whispered

1 month later
i sighed as i sat down on my sofa in my new apartment.. after the divorce, i decided to leave the house for piya. and everything else in it.. she can have it and share it with jeh... i promised myself to kill him if i see him anywhere.. my doorbell was ringing, i put down my glass of Sprite then walked towards it and open it "Mr. Abhay Raichand?" a teenaged guy said
"yes, that's me"
"a letter from your wife.."
i looked at him "you mean ex-wife?" i looked at him confused
"oh.. isnt she Piya Raichand?"
she should be Piya khurana now "no.." i looked at the envilope "you guys are pretty fast.. this was suppose to get to me a month ago" i snapped
"im sorry, but.. it was requested to be delivered to you on this day.."
i blinked at him, why today?
"please sign here.."
i signed the papers then looked at the envelope as i saw the guy walk away, i walked back inside the apartment then sat down on the sofa, i looked at the envelope, why today? and does it say Piya Raichand? i sighed then opened it and started reading
"Abhay,
happy birthday..
i am sorry i cant be here with you today to wish you that.. but by the time you recieve this letter.. i will be gone" i choked as i read that "i didnt want to tell you this, but i had brain tumor.. and it was killing me slowly.. remember the headaches and flu? ah.. how i miss your soup now?" i feel like i have been hit by a truck, i feel like m dying, no this cant be true, m..my piya NOOO.. no this cant be "i didnt want to tell you because i didnt want you to suffer.. i know from the beginning that you love me more than i love you.. that you love me more than you love yourself.. if you knew that i was about to die.. i wouldnt be able to die peacefuly..
you are probably wondering why tell you in a letter? i cant die peacfully knowing that you hate me.."crying, no piya.. i dont hate you "no Abhay, i did not sleep with jeh that night.. how can i let anyone else touch me after you? we were in a hotel, but that was my plan.. to let you know that i was with him then you'd leave me and never look back.. and even after this letter.. i dont want you to look back.. never Abhay.. i want you to come to my grave and promise me that you will never cry, that you will live happy.. that you will get married and live happily ever after.." i lied down as i was crying harder now, hugged the letter that ended with feeling dead inside i just want you to know that i love you.. never loved anyone but you.. and will never love anyone but you

"Piya"

Edited by tamannamalik - 14 years ago

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purple_shadoz

@purple_shadoz

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Posted: 14 years ago

#144

tamanna...i agree wd u d omly dfrnc bng dt ds s d saddest chaptr i av ever read...my god ...u actually md me cry agn...my heart lurchd out at 1ce aftr dt ltr part...ur wrk s amazng dear...its beautiful...⭐️

Edited by purple_shadoz - 14 years ago

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tamanna

@tamannamalik

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Posted: 14 years ago

#145

guys m really sorry, i dont know what to say.. just, this is the saddest chapter i have ever written... love you all.. thank u for ur encouraging words and sweet comments... plz dont hate me but i jus wanted to show that not every lovestory has a perfect ending... take care guys muaaah😊

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Isha

@tereliyex

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Posted: 14 years ago

#146

Im still crying!Piya didnt deserve to die without Abhay by her side... 😭

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PRERNA VERMA

@prerna26

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Posted: 14 years ago

#147

After reading this, i had tears in my eyes...Feeling bad for Abhay!!!😭😭Pia died!!!😔 I read it thrice...Still i'm not able to believe that Pia died!I was not expecting all this...!!😭 This one( FF) will always remain close to my heart!

Edited by prerna26 - 14 years ago

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Resh

@SheDevil

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Posted: 14 years ago

#148

God u ended it in such a sad note.I though they will become happy couple agn.I m crying😭.Wht u did yaar.Oh God thts sad very sad.Really feeling bad 4 Abhiya😭

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Peehu24

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Posted: 14 years ago

#149

pia is dead...what did u do 😭...its such a sad ending...i wanted them to be happy..2gether...but no...😭.😭...m crying...😭

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stuti kansal

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Posted: 14 years ago

#150

hwy tamana last part was really really veryyy sad abhay and piya got separated i forget yur ff name is happily never after so its end will be on sad note i hav just control my tears from getting form my eyes when i am reading u last chappie tc gn ks :(

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