ABHIYA OS 'A MEMORABLE EVENING' completed - Page 3

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Posted: 14 years ago
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hi guys! for late update. now i update its 2nd part. enjoy guys.

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A NEW DAY RISE IN. ENGAGEMENT WILL B HELD AFTER 2 WEEKS. PIA SITTING ON HER BED AND CHATTING WITH ABHAY. MISHA ENTER IN PIA'S ROOM LIKE STORM. SHE SAW PIA IS BUSY WITH HER MOB, SHE UNDERSTAND WHO IS ON THE OTHER SIDE, SHE IGNORED AND SAID TO PIA.


MISHA: GOOD MORNING PIA! YE AAJ TUM ITNI JALDI KAISE UTH GAYIN?


PIA: GOOD MORNING! ALARM LAGAYA THA COZ ABHAY NE MUJHSE KAHA THA K WO SUBHA MUJHSE BAAT KAREGA.


MISHA: O.K! AB TUMHARA PAUN KAISA HAI?


PIA: EK DUM FIT! THANX TO ABHAY.


MISHA: WHY THANX TO ABHAY? PURI RAAT BETH KAR DABA RAHA THA KYA?


PIA: MERA MATLAB HAI K AGAR WO NAI HOTA TO KAISE MAIN GHAR PUHANCHTI AUR DR. TREATMENT KARTE.


MISHA: YE SAB HUA B USI KI WAJA SE THA.


PIA: WHATEVER! TUM YE BATAO K KOI KAAM THA JO AISE TOOFAN KI TARAH ROOM MAIN AAYIN THIN?


MISHA: OH HAN! YAAD AAYA. MUJHE YE PUCHNA THA K KYA AAJ HUM LUNCH PE CHALEN?


PIA: SORRY MISHA! ACTUALLY AAJ MERA AUR ABHAY KA PURA DIN 7 GUZARNE KA PLAN HAI.


MISHA GET ANGRY AND SHOUTING ON PIA.


MISHA: WHAT THE HELL! ABHAY, ABHAY, ABHAY🤬. COLLEGE MAIN B AKELA NAI CHORTA AUR AB B WO 🤬


PIA: MISHA! STOP ABUSING HIM.


MISHA JAWAB DENE HI LAGI THI K PUNCHI ROOM MAIN ENTER HUI.


PUNCHI: THANK GOD! TUM DONO YAHIN MIL GAYIN.


PIA: KYUN? KYA HUA?


PUNCHI: MAIN YE SOCH RAHI THI K KYUN NA AAJ HUM TEENO SHOPPING PE CHALEN. WHAT SAY?


PIA: BUT PUNCHI...


MISHA CUT HER SENTENCE AND TELL THE WHOLE THING. PUNCHI ALSO GET ANGRY.


PUNCHI(SADLY): ITS O.K PIA! U GO WITH ABHAY.


BOTH LEAVE THE ROOM PIA CALLING THEM BUT THEY DIDN'T LISTEN HER SUDDENLY PIA'S CELL RINGED, SHE SAW ON SCREEN, ABHAY'S NAME BLINKED, SHE PICK THE CALL.


ABHAY(WITH WORRIEDNESS): PIA! R U O.K? KITNI DAIR SE PUCH RAHA HUN KAHAN HO JAWAB KYUN NAI DE RAHI THIN?


PIA: SORRY ABHAY! WO ACTUALLY...


PIA TELL THE WHOLE STORY WHAT'S HAPPENED BEFORE FEW SECONDS.


ABHAY: RELAX PIA! DON'T B UPSET, JUST TELL ME WHERE ARE YOU RIGHT NOW?


PIA: IN MY ROOM. WHY?


ABHAY: MAIN TUMHARE GHAR PUHANCH CHUKA HUN AUR ANDER AARAHA HUN TUM JALDI SE READY HOJAO.


PIA: NO, PLZ ABHAY! ANDER MAT AANA. MISHA AUR PUNCHI BUHAT GHUSSE MAIN HAIN.


ABHAY: SO WHAT! I DON'T CARE K WO GHUSSE MAIN HAI. MAIN ANDER AARAHA HUN TUMHE LENE.


PIA: BUT ABHAY...!


ABHAY: NO BUT PIA! I CAN HANDLE IT. U JUST READY FAST.


CALL DISCONNECTED.


ON THE OTHER HAND:


MISHA AND PUNCHI WALK DOWN ON THE STAIRS AND TALKED WITH EACH OTHER. THEY REACHED IN THE LOUNGE AND SIT. AFTER FEW MINUTES ABHAY ENTER IN LOUNGE.


ABHAY: HI MISHA! HI PUNCHI! HOW R U GUYS?


MISHA KA PARA ABHAY KO DEKH K HIGH HOGAYA. SHE IGNORED HIS QUESTION AND SAID.


MISHA: TUM PHIR AA GAYE WO B ITNI SUBHA? RAAT MAIN B ITNI DAIR SE GAYE THE. APNE GHAR MAIN SUKOON NAI MILTA KYA?


ABHAY: NAHI MILTA COZ MERA SUKOON TO YAHAN HAI AUR JAB WOHI BE-SUKOON HOGA TO MUJHE SUKOON KAISE MILEGA.


MISHA: KYA MATLAB? TUMHARA SUKOON YAHAN BE-SUKOON KAISE HAI?


ABHAY: ITS A SIMPLE FACT! JAHAN TUM HO WAHAN KOI SUKOON SE NAI REH SAKTA.


MISHA: YOU MORON! I'LL...


MADHU ENTER.


MADHU: STOP IT MISHA! GHAR AAYE MEHMAAN SE AISE BAAT KARTE HAIN?


MISHA: BUT MOM! YE IDIOT ABHAY...


MADHU(SHOUTS): MISHAAA! BAKWAS BAND KARO NAI TO EK CHATA PAREGA AUR NEXT TIME MAIN TUMHE ABHAY SE AISE BAAT KARTE HUE NA DEKHUN, WO IS GHAR KA HONE WALA DAMAD HAI SAMJHIN?


MISHA: O.K MOM!


MADHU: SORRY ABHAY! MISHA NE TUMSE BADTAMIZI KI.


ABHAY: PLZ AUNTY! DON'T SAY THIS. ITS O.K.


MADHU: AREY! TUM KHARE KYUN HO BETHO NA. KYA PIOGE CHAI, COFFEE YA ORANGE JUICE?


ABHAY: THANX AUNTY! NOTHING I WANT. MAIN SIRF PIA KO LENE AAYA THA.


MADHU: ACHA! MAIN DEKHTI HUN WO JAG RAHI HAI YA NAI?


MADHU K UTHNE SE PEHLE PIA LOUNGE MAIN ENTER HUI.


MADHU: LOOK! HERE SHE COMES.


PIA: GOOD MORNING MOM! GOOD MORNING ABHAY!


MADHU & ABHAY: GOOD MORNING!


ABHAY: CHALEN PIA?


PIA: LETS GO!


PIA & ABHAY: BYE MOM! BYE AUNTY.


THEY LEAVE FROM THE HOUSE. THAT DAY THEY BOTH ENJOYED ALOT. THEY TOOK LUNCH TOGETHER(ONLY PIA EAT), WATCH MOVIE, DID SOME SHOPPING AND IN LAST AFTER A LONG DRIVE ABHAY LEFT PIA BACK AT HER HOME. WHOLE DAY ABHAY FEELS THAT SOMEONE FOLLOW THEM AND HE KNOWS THAT PERSON BUT IGNORED. ABHAY AND PIA BOTH STANDING OUTSIDE THE CAR.


PIA: BYE ABHAY! GOOD NITE.


PIA MOVE FORWARD BUT SUDDENLY STOP COZ ABHAY HOLD HER HAND. ABHAY PULLING HER BACK AND HOLD HER FROM WAIST.


ABHAY: WOULD BE MRS. ABHAY RAICHAND! ITNA RUKHA PHIKA BYE AND GOOD NITE.


PIA: THEN! WHAT DID YOU WANT?


ABHAY: YOU DON'T KNOW! WHAT I WANT?


PIA: NO!


ABHAY: SERIOUSLY! YOU DON'T KNOW?


ABHAY ROLLING HER. NOW, PIA IS WITH CAR DOOR. ABHAY BLOCK BOTH SIDE BY PUT HIS HANDS LEFT AND RIGHT SIDE OF PIA AND CLOSES HER MORE.


PIA: ABHAY! STOP IT! KOI AAJAYEGA.


ABHAY: AANE DO!


PIA: ABHAY!


ABHAY: WHAT?


PIA: LEAVE ME!


ABHAY: SORRY!


AND CLOSES HER MORE.


PIA(SHOUTS SLIGHTLY): PAPA!


ABHAY LEAVE HER. PIA GET THE CHANCE AND SHE RUN AWAY FROM ABHAY. SHE RUN TOWARDS MAIN GATE. SHE REACHED AT MAIN GATE AND STOP. SHE TURN, SHOW HER TONGUE TO ABHAY AND LAUGH.


ABHAY: PIA! WHAT YOU HAVE DONE RIGHT NOW, YOU BEAR THE CONSIQUENCES FOR IT LATER.


PIA: LETS C ABHAY! BYE.


PIA GO INSIDE AND ABHAY LEAVE FOR RAICHAND MANSION.


AFTER ONE WEEK:


IN BOTH FAMILIES PREPARATION OF ENGAGEMENT HAS BEEN STARTED. TODAY PIA GO WITH ABHAY FOR BUYING ENGAGEMENT DRESS.


IN MOUNT COLLEGE BOYS LOCKER ROOM. PIA ENTER AND HUG ABHAY FROM BACK.


ABHAY: FINALLY! YOU R HERE. KABSE WAIT KAR RAHA HUN.


PIA: SORRY BABA! INVITATIONS DENE MAIN TIME LAG GAYA.
AB CHALEN SHOPPING K LIYE?


ABHAY: O.K! CHALO.


IN SHOPPING MALL:


THEY BOTH ENTER IN MOST OF THE SHOPS OF SHERWANI AND LAHENGA BUT THEY DIDN'T FIND THEIR TYPES.


PIA: ABHAY! I'M TIRED NOW. I CAN'T WALK MORE.


ABHAY: O.K! KUCH DAIR YAHAN RUKTE HAIN PHIR SAMNE JO SHOP NAZAR AARAHI HAI WAHAN CHALENGE MAY BE HAMARE TYPE KA KUCH MIL JAYE. O.K?


PIA: YAH! THAT'S FINE.


ABHAY: DID YOU WANT SOMETHING TO DRINK OR EAT?


PIA: YAP! I WANT TO DRINK ORANGE JUICE.


ABHAY: ALRIGHT! YOU SIT. I'LL BRING IT FOR YOU.


AFTER 15 MINUTES THEY MOVE TOWARDS THE SHOP. FIRST PIA ENTER IN SHOP THEN ABHAY.


SHOPKEEPER: MAY I HELP U SIR! MADAM?


PIA: YAH! SHOW US SOME SHERWANI.


ABHAY: NO! FIRST U SHOW US LAHENGAS AND THEN SHERWANI.


PIA: BUT...


ABHAY: SSSHHH...! (TO SHOPKEEPER): YOU SHOW US SOME BEAUTIFUL LAHENGAS.


SHOPKEEPER: SURE SIR!


SHOPKEEPER SHOW THEM SOME LAHENGAS BUT THEY DIDN'T LIKE. AFTER FEW MORE THEY BOTH FIND THEIR TYPE BUT IN SEPARATE COLOUR. PIA LIKE IN PURPLE AND ABHAY IN BLACK. THEY START FIGHTING FOR PURPLE AND BLACK COLOUR.


PIA: I WANT PURPLE COZ ITS MY ENGAGEMENT.


ABHAY: ITS OUR ENGAGEMENT AND U WORE BLACK COZ I WANT TO SEE U IN THIS BLACK LAHENGA AND I LIKE BLACK.


PIA: KHUD TO HAR WAQT BLACK PEHNE REHTE HO AUR CHAHTE HO K MAIN B PEHNON WO B ENGAGEMENT K DIN, NO WAY!


ABHAY: YES WAY! YOU WEAR BLACK AND ITS FINAL.


PIA: NO! I WEAR PURPLE.


ABHAY: BLACK!


PIA: PURPLE!


ABHAY: BLACK!


PIA: PURPLE!


ABHAY: BLACK!


PIA: PURPLE!


ABHAY: BLACK! BLACK AND...


SHOPKEEPER: SIR! MADAM! PLZ! MAIN AAPKO AAP DONO KI PASAND KA DIKHA DETA HUN.


SHOPKEEPER GO AND COME AFTER FEW MINUTES WITH A LAHENGA OF BLACK AND PURPLE CONTRAST SAME COLOUR BEATS WORK ON IT.


PIA & ABHAY: WOW! PACK THIS.


ABHAY BUY BLACK SHERWANI WITH PURPLE EMBROIDERY AND BEATS WORK SELECT BY PIA. THEY LEAVE THE MALL. ABHAY DRIVE CAR. PIA REST ON ABHAY'S SHOULDER. DIL IBADAT PLAY IN CAR.


"DIL IBADAT KAR RAHA HAI DHADKANEN MERI SUN
TUJH KO MAIN KAR LUN HASIL LAGI HAI YEHI DHUN"


SUDDENLY ABHAY FEELS THAT SOMEONE FOLLOW THEM. ABHAY LOOK BEHIND THROUGH MIRROR AND KNOW THAT PERSON WHO FOLLOW THEM BUT IGNORED JUST BCOZ OF PIA.


PIA: ABHAY! I WANT TO LISTEN THAT SONG WHICH U PLAY IN LONG DRIVE.


ABHAY: BUT YE B TO ACHA HAI.


PIA: I KNOW! BUT I WANT TO LISTEN THAT.


ABHAY: O.K HONEY! HERE IS UR SONG.


ABHAY CHANGE THE SONG AND NOW SAATHIYA(SINGHAM) PLAY IN CAR.


"SAATHIYA SAATHIYA PAGLE SE DIL NE YE KYA KIYA
CHUN LIYA CHUN LIYA TUJHKO DEEWANE NE CHUN LIYA
DIL TO URA URA RE AASMA MAIN BADLON K SANG
YE TO MACHL MACHL K GA RAHA HAI SUN NAYI SI DHUN"


ABHAY DROPS PIA TO DOBRIYALS HOUSE. ABHAY COME OUTSIDE FROM CAR AND HUG PIA TIGHTLY. PIA KISS ON HIS CHEEKS AND ABHAY IS ON HER FOREHEAD. PIA MOVE INSIDE AND ABHAY TOWARDS RAICHAND MANSION.


IN RAICHAND MANSION:


CHAND, HASEENA AND SID SIT IN LOUNGE WAITING ABHAY AND TALKED WITH EACH OTHER. ABHAY ENTER IN LOUNGE. HASEENA CALLS HIM.


HASEENA: AAO ABHAY! HUM TUMHARA HI INTIZAR KAR RAHE THE. KAISI RAHI SHOPPING?


ABHAY: ITS FINE MOM!


CHAND: WHY YOU LOOK SO TENSED? IS EVERYTHING ALRIGHT?


HASEENA: ABHAY! KYA PHIR PIA SE JHAGRA HUA HAI?


ABHAY: NO MOM! AISA KUCH NAI HAI.


HASEENA: TO PHIR KYA BAAT HAI?


ABHAY: ACTUALLY! AAJ JAB HUM MALL SE WAPAS AARAHE THE TO MAINE JAY KO DEKHA THA JO HAMARA PICHA KAR RAHA THA PHIR SE.


SID: KYA MATLAB, PHIR SE?


ABHAY: SORRY! MAINE AAP SABSE YE BAAT CHUPAI HAI K JAB B MAIN AUR PIA KAHIN 7 JAATE THE TO JAY HAMARA PICHA KAR RAHA HOTA THA AUR AAJ PHIR SE WO AISA HI KAR RAHA THA.


SID: BUT WHY HE DID THIS AGAIN AND AGAIN?


ABHAY: I DON'T KNOW BHAI! I'M SO WORRIED FOR PIA.


CHAND: DID YOU TELL HER ABOUT IT?


ABHAY: NO DAD! I DON'T.


HASEENA: THAT'S GREAT! THAT YOU DIDN'T TELL HER ANYTHING.


ABHAY: BUT HOW LONG MOM! SOMEDAY SHE KNOWS AND THAT DAY WHAT WILL I DO?


SID: RELAX ABHAY! DON'T WORRY! AISA KUCH NAI HOGA. I TRY TO KNOW THAT WHAT JAY WANTS AND WHAT HIS PLAN. YOU JUST CONCENTRATE ON YOUR ENGAGEMENT AND PIA.


CHAND: YOU DON'T WORRY ABHAY! WE ALL ARE WITH YOU.


HASEENA: YAH ABHAY! CHAND IS RIGHT. NOW, YOU GO TO UR ROOM.


ABHAY: I KNOW MOM! U ALL WITH ME.


SID: HUM TO HAIN HI PIA B HAI TUMHARE 7.


ALL ARE SMILES AND ABHAY FEELS LITTLE RELAXATION AND MOVE TOWARDS ROOM.


IN ABHAY'S ROOM:


ABHAY STAND IN WINDOW AND LOOK AT THE MOON. ON THE OTHER HAND PIA DID THE SAME. THEY TALK WITH EACH OTHER.


ABHAY: KYA KAR RAHI HO?


PIA: NOTHING! JUST LOOKING AT THE MOON AND YOU?


ABHAY: SAME THING.


PIA: ABHAY! WHY I FEEL THAT YOU HIDE SOMETHING FROM ME?


ABHAY(IN HEART): HAN PIA! MAIN TUMSE KUCH CHUPA RAHA HUN SIRF TUMHARI BHALAI K LIYE, TUMHARE LIYE.


PIA: ABHAY! KAHAN KHO GAYE? JAWAB DO KYA CHUPA RAHE HO?


ABHAY: NO PIA! NOTHING. WHY YOU FEEL THAT?


PIA: YOU SOUND LITTLE WORRIED THAT'S WHY I ASK. TELL ME NA! WHAT YOU HIDE FROM ME?


ABHAY: NOTHING PIA!


PIA: LIAR!


ABHAY: SERIOUSLY HONEY! NOTHING I'M HIDE FROM YOU. BTW! TELL ME SABKO LAHENGA KAISA LAGA?


PIA(EXCITED): AREY HAN! SABKO BUHAT BUHAT ACHA LAGA AND MISHA USKI TO AANKHEN BAHAR NIKALNE WALI THIN.


ABHAY(WHISPERING): SHUKAR HAI BAHAR NAI AAYIN.


PIA: KUCH KAHA TUMNE?


ABHAY: NAHI! MOM, DAD AUR BHAI KO B SHERWANI BUHAT ACHI LAGI.


PIA: WO TO LAGE GI HI! AAKHIR PASAND KIS KI HAI.


ABHAY SMILES AND SAID.


ABHAY: O.K! NOW, YOU GO TO YOUR BED AND SLEEP. I'LL TALK TO YOU LATER. GOOD NITE, SWEET DREAMZ, BYE.


PIA: GOOD NITE, ABHAY! BYE.


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THIS IS IT GUYS FOR NOW. I'LL UPDATE NEXT PART SOON MAY BE THAT PART WILL BE THE LAST.
I WANT TO THANK A SPECIAL PERSON

PEEHU WHO GIVE ME THE IDEA TO CONTINUE MY OS AND SUGGEST ME THE POINT TO CONTINUING IT.

A TON DEAR AND A BIG HUG FOR YOU.🤗

HOPE YOU ALL LIKE IT. PLZ READ AND DO COMMENT. NO OFFENSE PLZ.

Edited by abhiyarockz - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#23
aww...it was a beautiful and fab update..i just l;oved their fights..i was smiling continuously while i was reading it..u did a great job...update soon..thanks for pm..

p.s: hey...no prob..always ready to help..was happy that i could help you..take care 🤗..thanks a lot...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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it was awesome!!!
plz pm me wen u update
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it was awesome!!! it was a beautiful and fab updateplz pm me wen u update
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it was really good enjoyed it!!!! thanks for the PM
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nice update .👏.👏...abhay and piya fights for the cloths ...😆...😆...funny .thanks for the pm..😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey dear awesome update.I so loved it.Abhiya r getting engaged + their fight was cute.Hope Raichands handle jeh well😳
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Superb update
wow ! Abhiya together as normal couples..
I hope jeh do not create any problem. .
Thanks 4 d pm
continue soon
tc
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice update! Abhay and Piya's shopping trip was cute and I'm glad that they'll be matching at their engagement! Looking forward to Abhiya's engagement, hopefully everything goes smoothly and no problems creep up! Eagerly waiting for the next update! Continue soon 😊

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