::OS::The Chosen One:: 1 OCTOBER pg 41 - Page 27

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: princess_xeelan

Woderful ending Ayesha... soo loved it 👏 👏

Im glad you ended Maithli's character in a good note and Jeh, Deepu are dead... Alina, Abhay and Piya took their rightful places... glad superiors accepted a slayer as their vampire queen... whole story was very beautifully plotted... loved it... 🤗

CRAMMING so much in one update is almost impossible. This should have been an FF😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: abhiyan999

awesome

mind blowing
amazing
beautiful& happy ending it awesome well done great job
big bigfor this update

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: harini2010

amazing post

keep it up 👍🏼

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: aromal

great ending ayesha..😳loved it !!

GLAD 2 HAVE U back sister
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: prerna26

Brilliant Update!⭐️⭐️⭐️

So finally battle is over.And now Pia is the new vampire queen!😊 Perfect ending!



I know there was a lot of action here and i always wanted to see PIA as a vampire QUEEN
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: NaGeSwArI

super ending 👏👏

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: kuttu

Beautiful ending. So finally everything came ot a full circle. Maithli finding her peace. Alina able to stand on her own and not as a shadow. And th elove of Pia and Abhay that stood againt every thing was all captured in this last part very well. Your stories always have something more though the characters and situations are somewhat similar. thanks for the varity in reading

YAY! I try my best but i almost got lost in writing. Theres so much to add to an OS like this
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shivanirajput

perfect ending i totally loved it the battle was fabulously depicted
maithali part was very touching
so now pia is vampire queen
and she will soon become a mother of twins😃
how i wish u will write one more chapter ie sort of an epilogue
thanks for such a lovely os

I can't write more. Its all these ideas i have rolling around just give me a week if i feel i can add more then i'll do it I felt bad killing Maithali so i need time to adjust. I think in one of my OS i might give her a happy endin for once with SID
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shafaq_abhiya

wonderful ending diii it was really awesome ... nd C.W.B added more spice to the ending lovely 👏

CWB is sorely missed. He's a good narrator
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Beb0

Ending was beautiful Ayesha🤗 thanks for da pm😊

Your welcome

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