::OS::The Chosen One:: 1 OCTOBER pg 41

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Rashmi

@Rashu1505

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Posted: 13 years ago

#241

Wonderful ending ayesha loved ur whole story it was interesting thanks for pm

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.SmokeySilence.

@.SmokeySilence.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#242

Woderful ending Ayesha... soo loved it 👏 👏

Im glad you ended Maithli's character in a good note and Jeh, Deepu are dead... Alina, Abhay and Piya took their rightful places... glad superiors accepted a slayer as their vampire queen... whole story was very beautifully plotted... loved it... 🤗

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sandeep

@SANDY_ROSE

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#243

awesome

mind blowing

amazing

beautiful& happy ending it awesome well done great job

big bigfor this update

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harini

@Idealistic

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Posted: 13 years ago

#244

amazing post

keep it up 👍🏼

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362035

Suspended

Posted: 13 years ago

#245

awesome.
superb...
fab...
rocking..
loved the ending..
thanx for the pm...
take care...

Edited by priti11 - 13 years ago

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Aromal saxena

@--AROMAL--

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#246

great ending ayesha..😳loved it !!

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PRERNA VERMA

@prerna26

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#247

Brilliant Update!⭐️⭐️⭐️

So finally battle is over.And now Pia is the new vampire queen!😊 Perfect ending!

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visma

@kuttu

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#248

Beautiful ending. So finally everything came ot a full circle. Maithli finding her peace. Alina able to stand on her own and not as a shadow. And th elove of Pia and Abhay that stood againt every thing was all captured in this last part very well. Your stories always have something more though the characters and situations are somewhat similar. thanks for the varity in reading

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shivanirajput

@shivanirajput

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#249

perfect ending i totally loved it the battle was fabulously depicted
maithali part was very touching
so now pia is vampire queen
and she will soon become a mother of twins😃
how i wish u will write one more chapter ie sort of an epilogue
thanks for such a lovely os