Abhiya OS: The Reunion and the End

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Disha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: matwamango
I unleashed a MONSTERThis is brilliant Dishu. I LOVE LOVE LOVED IT. I hope this is what happened. I hope this is what happened. Loved Pia's Jacket wali dialogue☺️So steamy and

Yes, Yes Its You made me junp into the bandwagon of OS. Thank You for being my inspiration.🤗

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Disha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: princess_xeelan
Dishu...superbbb 👏 👏 👏Loveeed it...just loved it... I wish aisa show me hota 😍 Too good you wrote about the jacket... everyone hates that jacket 🤣 Hema di is going to love this...specially when the jacket will be free from Abhay's body finally 😆You should write more... great... 👍🏼 😳

😍

I know everyone hates that jacket, thats why wrote that part 😆 Waiting for Hema's response to it.😆

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Disha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: devilish_angel
dishu aaj to hug banta hai🤗🤗🤗
kya os likha hai i just luv it...itna acha likha hai❤️...kaash aisi story cv's liktai...to trp's will reach the sky😍😍aaj tum nai eid pai mujhai aik aur khushi dai di🤗

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Chalo ye meri taraf se tumhari eidii 🤗

Edited by abhayfan_dishu - 14 years ago

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Disha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: syria2014
finally took time to read to your ff. Dishu , you did a magnficient job . It was perfect. Awww love the ending, and I hope something like this happens on the show. love u.!🤗

Thank You for Your Time sweetheart😆 love u too 🤗

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Disha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: shivanipandit29
Dishu it is wonderful stupendous, love it too good yaar. please write more. 👏. i love your OS. i also hope thate abhiya also get married in the show. i wanna see abhay as vampire king. please write more maybe a sequence please.

I also want to see Abhay as vampire king with Pia as his queen 😍 This OS is ended here. Maybe I will write somethinng bases on what CVs show further.😛

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Disha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: pkyek55
Brilliant Update Dishu!!!=)
Loved it so MUCH...
I wish all dis would happend in d show..:))
It's Amazing..
D jacket scene was AWESOME..(Reminds me of VD:)

I knew everyone will love the Jacket scene and dialogue 😉 😆

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Disha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: ozzyie
😛superb dishu !!!!!😛😊 OMG..u can write too n so wonderful !!!!! Abhiya scene so Hottt!!!!!!😃😉wonderful dishu n keep wrting !!!👍🏼😳

haan kabhi kabhi aise daure pad jaate hain 🤣

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Disha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: Akshi0019
dishu it was too gud yr... kash aysa show me bhe ho... n dat jacket part was gr8... every1 hate his jacket... n i loved d intimate love b/w abhay n pia... i loved it yr... u r superb writer... love u...

No no I just tried writing a little romance for first time and that too with Peehu's help😆

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Disha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: --Anurag--
Dishu...amazing OS and do continue it soon...🤗 Though chances r less😆 but i really hope dis happens in d show..🤗 Jacket Wala dialogue was mindblowing🤣

U know me well here. I have ended this one. 😆

I know jacket wala dialogue will be loved by everyone 😉