A poem Something different(feelings)a unique one

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Posted: 14 years ago
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😊Ya today every post in the forum is very good and about today's rocking episode...but i want to try something different...in order to cherish today's day
SUNO MERI AAWAAZ...
Zindagii ne sab kuch diya
Aur sab kuch cheen bhi liya
Waqt ne andhere mein ghera
To ujaala ne apna raasta morra
Saason hii saason mera sab kuch beh gaya
Baaton hii baaton mein main sab kuch seh gaya
Kash main wapis duniya jii sakta
Apni nayi zindagii ke liye phir se marr sakta
Kash main woh karoon jo main chahta hoon
Is adhoori saason kii dhadkon ko ek baar piloon
Magar ye sab ab mumkin nahin
Paya bhi maine,aur khoya bhi maine
Jiya bhi maine ,aur diya bhi maine
Aaj is dard ko mitane waala chahe mujhse bahut door ja chuka hai
Magar is dard ko jine kaa sayam ab bhi mujh mein baaki hai
Is pyaar kii saason ke liye ab bhi mein tyaar hoon
Chahe main ye darindagi jiyon na jiyon
Magar mera pyaar hamesha jeetega
Har mushkil ko par kar wo aage badega
Uskii ek chotii sii zindagii ke liye
Mujhe agar sab kuch chorna pade to manzoor hai
Magar usse kiya waada zaroor nibhaonga ab yahi meri jeet hai
aur yahi meri haar hai
Do press like button if u like.and do comment..just tried a small open poem ..which delievers feelings of Abhay.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Abhay feelings have been beautifully etched Jazz👏
I just hope he soon leaves behind his tyaagi aatma mode
PS: What is the meaning of sayam
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Eowyn

Abhay feelings have been beautifully etched Jazz👏

I just hope he soon leaves behind his tyaagi aatma mode
PS: What is the meaning of sayam

😊 sayam means patience..and thanks for liking it.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: abhayfan_dishu

brilliant jazz👍🏼

😊thanks dishu..i could have written better than this but tht its fine for now..my first attempt
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey nice gr8t 👏👏
thnx for d pm
u have brilliantly shown abhay's condition
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Originally posted by: pallavisarkar

hey nice gr8t 👏👏

thnx for d pm
u have brilliantly shown abhay's condition

😊thanks for liking it.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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woww rose...i m speechless...u protraye abhay feeling beautifully👏👏👏...i jst loved it...again woww...u r awesome...
this is for u
luv u-sunita

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey dear awesome poem loved it😳
Edited by cuteshrishti - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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beautifully written jazz. keep it up.👏

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