(update-8 sep) OS My name is Trouble (pg 13, 14)

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: purple_shadoz
omg tanzie...beautiful...⭐️d way u dscribd maithli n hr encountr wd jeh ws👏so d b**** s bk into actn n usng jeh to separate abhiya???...😡both r planng o dblcross each odr...😆lts c hu wns...maithli wl o magic on pia????...awww...i hope abhy savs hr...om abhy mt maithli...hmmm...lukng 4wrd to dr meetng...o cont soon...m lvng ds entire plot...love ya loadzzz...😃

Thanks Nidhi... it would be very short as its OS...so everything will happen fast... i will finish it within 1/2 updates 😳

Originally posted by: abhayfan_dishu
great first chappy tanzie. looks like an action packed SS is on its way. 😊

Thanks a lot Dishu 🤗it will be as everyone will try to double cross each other and it will be a complete mess 😆

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: heena_mehta
tanz dat was an awesome start
power pack!! Thanku Heena 🤗
u av described animosity very well!!
so here both r planning to double cross each other Next Metz will make a deal with Abhay and they will also plan to double cross each other...so just imagine what will happen 😆
although d kind of love mathali is aving for abhay vn never b counted as a good one, bt still i always love to read stories in which love cross d boundaries all madness!! d dark love stories!!😉😉
disperately waiting for d nxt update!! It's Metz's obsession and lets see whos love will cross the boundary 😉
continue soon yaar!!
its always a treat to read ur ff's or os Aww...thats a huge complement for me dear... thanks a lot 😳

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Posted: 13 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: .rumki.
interesting
con soon

Thanks Rumki 😳

Originally posted by: Selinapiya
wow..Maithili and Jeh working together...
awesome...'update soon...

Thanks Seli... will update after I update my FF 😳

Originally posted by: --sanchita--
Hey I am not finding ur vm gallery. Can u plz send me the link? This FF is awesome. Such mysterious era u created. So diff from the boring show.

Thanks a lot Sanchita... im also bored and frustrated from the current track and yesterday I saw Kisher replying someone that Piya's memory is not gonna come back soon so that make things worse 🤢 So thought of writing an OS will give me some peace of mind

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Posted: 13 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: lost_in_love
very interesting indeed. waiting for d nxt part. plz continue

Thanks a lot. im really glad you liked the idea 😳

Originally posted by: peehu24
tanzie..beautiful n fab..lovd it..ausum update..lookin forward 2 it..pm me wen u update..btw thanks for pm

Thanks soo much Peehu 🤗 will PM u for sure 😳

Originally posted by: prerna26
WOW NICE UPDATE...😊EAGERLY WAITING FOR NEXT UPDATE...CONTINUE SOON...GOOD LUCK AND THANKS FOR PM...😃

Thanks Prerna... 😳

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Posted: 13 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: cuteshrishti
hey tanzie awesome start.I loved it.Me phir se late.God koi naa but way u described everything is jst perfect update soon.I wnt 2 c how u unfold all mysteries😳
LUV U🤗

Better late then never Shrish 😆 Aww...thanks a lot dear...your comments means a lot to me... and everything will happen fast as its an OS... so mysteries will unfold very fast... 😊

Luv u loads too 🤗

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Posted: 13 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: Arians
awasome part dear😊 cont soon thnx for pm

Thanks a lot dear for commenting 😳

Originally posted by: Akshi0019
nyc dr... maithli n jay r working togather... waiting 4 more action... cont soon...

Thanku Akshi 😳 action will come soon 😆

Originally posted by: ifrah.
nice..and awesome update..liked it thanks for the pm :)

Glad you liked it Ifrah 😊

Originally posted by: rosamale
wow! 👏it was really nice. so maithali is bak. 🤢she and jeh want to manipulate piya's memory😡 i'm sure abhay will do somethng to protect piya😊

Thanks 😳 Abhay will do everything to protect Piya 😳

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Posted: 13 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: pari_smart
Loved the update
It was awesome

Metz is back and wants to do some black magic on Piya with the help of Jeh she is so🤬

Continue soon

Thanks for the PM

Thanks a lot Pari 😃 Metz is Abhay crazy so she will go to any extent to get him 😆

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Posted: 13 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: missglam

Awesome update Tanzie thanks a lot dear 😊
loved it. . Im glad you liked the idea 😳
Oh ! So the crazy ex is back. . Now , this is going to be fun It is... 😆
jeh n metz will be busy in double crossing eachother. . & abhay inke naak ke neeche se piya ko bhaga kar le jaye ga! Hahaha Bingo 😉
thanks for the pm
continue soon
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