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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweetmonaya

kya karu yaar i also want to update but mujhse besharmi nahi hoti 😭 plsss yaar , ab thoda story aage badhao cause i want to update also , i love to participate but yaha peh itni besharmi that i real blush reading it ☺️ hihihihihhihiih , so ab toh it time for abhiya bacha i think !

Monaya I'm updating withing minutes... Don't worry mujhse bhi ye besharmi nahi hoti... My updates are innocent..🤣
Do tell me how do you like it...😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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After their long passionate hours...Abhay saw piya who was sleeping peacefully cuddled in his arms... He just kept looking at her beautiful Angel...

Abhay (To himself): Just look at you Piya... You look so innocent so serene and so pure... How can anyone be so much angelic?? And have a look at me...No other words describe me except for 'Monster'... When I look at your face... I think that you don't deserve a monster like me but a person who will love you with all your heart... But when I look at your happy face and you say it's all because of me.. I know very well that no one can keep this beautiful smile on your face except me...But when I remember those words of my Mom... I try my level best to keep me away from you...But everytime I failed miserably... I don't know what's their in you that when I hurt you and you cry I go week on my knees.. I honestly don't know how to keep myself away from you but I'm tired of this...I love you so much...

And he gave a little peck on his forhead..To which Piya smiled in her sleep and murmured "ABHAY"... He smiled and said' Still dreaming about me my Sweet Heart?? He moved a strang of her hair and caressed her cheeks looking at her dreamily...

The sun rose with its rays falling on the face of Piya.. She got up, stretched her arms was surprise to see Abhay standing in front of her with a big smile on his face and a cup of tea..

Abhay to Piya: Buon Giorno Mia Moglie bellissima..

Piya asked surprisingly: What???

Abhay laughed and said.. It meant Good Morning My Beautiful wife..

Piya said with a big smile on her face:Not Bad Mr Raichand...I'm impressed..!!

Abhay: You should be dear wifey... After all you are Abhay Raichand's wife..

Piya laughed and Abhay watched her lovingly...

Abhay: Now go and get ready we are going for a walk and the whether is beautiful outside...

Piya agrees..Taking her tea she rushes to the bathroom and got change... She was wearing a baby Pink tank top with a black jacket over it with a black jeans and was looking perfect' Abhay was staring at her with his mouth open' She smiled a little went to him and closed his mouth saying' We are getting late hubby dear...

Abhay smiled and they all left...

Abhay took Piya the market which was very near to Eiffel tower... She was so happy looking at those antics things but didn't buy any of those...

Abhay: Don't you wanna buy any of those???

Piya: I have captured it all in my memories with you... Buying or not buying these things doesn't make any difference to me or my beautiful memories...

Abhay smiled at hugged her tightly..

They were walking down an empty road..Piya was mesmerized by seeing the natures wonder.. She felt Paradise in Paris..

She was lost in the beauty of nature when suddenly it started raining... Abhay ran towards a tree to take shelter under it.. She was brushing his hair with his hand when he asked Piya.. Are you wet Pi... But she was nowhere to be found..

Suddenly his searching eyes stopped looking at Piya who was enjoying in the rain whole heartedly..he smiled looking at her and called her...

Abhay: Piya what are you doing in the rain??? You'll get all wet...

Piya: I'm already wet... What more will I get??? And don't tell me that standing under a tree is not making you wet... I can see that you are also...Then why not enjoying in the rain and get wet...Come out now..It's fun!!!

Abhay: Are you alright??? You'll catch cold.. Please come here..

Piya:Oh!! Don't be a chicken Abhay...Come out na,.. Otherwise I'm gonna make you come with me forcibly...

Abhay: Piya for your kind information chicken also seeks shelter from water..

Piya(now irritated):And for your kind information we are on our Honeymoon and not to test that stupid theory of your's on chicken...

Abhay(Laughed):There's no way that I'm coming out'

Piya was fed up and she went to him.. Grabbed his hand and pulled him out in the rain...

Abhay: Piya what are you doing??

Piya: Making you to enjoy the best moment of our life in the rain...

Abhay laughed..Piya took Abhay's hand and entwined it with her left hand and kept her other hand on his shoulder... Then she started out dancing... Enjoying laughing she madly danced with Abhay... Abhay loved her smile. Then they stopped at Piya was tired now... She was catching her breath and her hands still on Abhay said...

Piya: Wasn't that fun??? We didn't even got tired...

Abhay(Laughingly):I can see that... You are really mad... Did someone ever told you that??

Piya (winked): I have heard that... Par Pagal panti bhi to zaroori hai na...

Abhay looked at her face which was dancing with happiness... He moved a strand of hair and tucked it behind her ears... He kissed her forhead and just then she sneezed leaving Abhay worried...

Okay Guys.. Here is the update... I'm kinda not satisfied with it... Well potatoes and tomatoes are welcome if you wanna kill me... Enjoy!!!😊

Edited by 1301Princess - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#53
r u mad sweta...that was awesome update ...i love it sooo much...i luv u sweetheart...this is for u for lovely update🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: sunu123

r u mad sweta...that was awesome update ...i love it sooo much...i luv u sweetheart...this is for u for lovely update🤗

well ishan already gave us warning...so no more besharmi from my side other tham kissing part...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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pia sneeze leaving abhay hell worried...

seeing abhay worried she laugh loudly...abhay is amused by her behaviour...abhay:pia why r u laughing that to so loudly????...n pia lets go from her...(before abhay complete his sentence pia again sneeze)...abhay is now more worried that before...abhay:pia now plz lets go from here otherwise u will catch cold n fever also...on other way pia is not listening to him...jst enjoying in rain...pia than leave abhay n start dancing n singing in the rain...n telling him to come n dance with her...abhay try last time to tell her...n he went close to pia n grab her shoulder n turn around so that she can face him...abhay:now listen to me pia...plz lets go from here...otherwise u will catch cold pia:no abhay i want to enjoy more n than...she grab his hand n like a small child start to dance with him...abhay is now more furious...abhay:pia lets go...otherwise i hav my own way...pia: no abhay i want to enjoy...(before pia could complete her sentence abhay lift her in his arm n start to walk toward car)
pia:abhay what r u doing...put me down...i want to enjoy more...
abhay:pia i already warned u ...havnot i...n i cant see u falling sick...
pia:how stubborn abhay...n i know that u care for me...but we r on our honeymoon abhay...after we go back to home...we will not get chance to enjoy naa...plz abhay let me do it(now making puppy face)...
abhay was not listening to her...he is jst carring her...after sometime they reached near car...abhay open door for pia n placed her on sit n put seat belt...n went to driver seat...drives away...
now someone write seva part...i mean abhay will do seva of pia...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: sunu123

r u mad sweta...that was awesome update ...i love it sooo much...i luv u sweetheart...this is for u for lovely update🤗

Aww...Thank you so much Sunu...😳You are a darling...😊 My mood was seriously not good from the evening so I just wrote whatever came into my head..😕 You know what I nearly got a heart attack when I read 1st part of your comment R U MAD SWETA..😆 I thought that it's bad and then I read the full comment...😊 Thank you so much for appreciating dear...🤗
Love you too...❤️
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wow Sunu...😊
Amazing part dear...👏 Loved it..😳
Done a fab work...👍🏼
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: 1301Princess

Wow Sunu...😊

Amazing part dear...👏 Loved it..😳
Done a fab work...👍🏼

mine r notn as fab as ur...but thnx for ur compliment...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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someone plz write next part jaldi
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Posted: 14 years ago
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In the hotel, Pia was lying on the bed cuddling up in a blanket, she had a temperature but not too high fever. Abhay was very worried, he was talking to the doctor and the doctor was continiously saying that Pia will be allright but Mr. Raichand woh kisi ki baat nahi mante. Pia was smiling at this Pia thought " Abhay u are so sweet tum meri kitna care karte ho,how can u be a monster u r my angel". Pia was looking at him fondly but Abhay was angry. Abhay: stop looking at me like that, I told u, now u can see the consequences ab taklef kise ho rehi hai? Pia: (laughing) Abhay fever mujhe hai ya tumhe? Abhay said nothing just gave his arrogant attitude. Pia:(making a cute face) meri tabiyat kharab hai or tum mujhpe gussa ho rahe ho? Abhay was forced to smile at this. Abhay came to Pia and kept his hand on her forhead. Abhay: abhi bhi fever hai ir tum apni badmashi band karo take this medicine and sleep tight. Pia felt warm to see the concern in his eyes. Pia took the medicine. Abhay: now sleep. Pia: par mujhe neend nahi aa rehi hai, I am bored. Abhay:ye tumhari punishment hai or bheego barish mei. Abhay looked at other side. Pia smiled hugged him her face on his chest. Pia: hmm is fever ka bhi maza hai ab tum mere pas rahoge. Abhay( caressing her face):mai to tumhare paas hi hoon. Pia kissed his cheek. Pia: Abhay, mai tuse door nahi rah sakti, u r my life. Vaise bhi tum hamesha mujhse door bhagne ki koishish karte ho. Khadoos Abhay. Abhay: what? mai khadoos. Pia:or nahi to kya?Khadoos or Kanjus. Abhay: now Kanjus also may I know why? Pia: Kanjus is liye ke tum mujhse pyaar karne mein kanjusi dikhate ho. Abhay: hmm or koi accusations hai madam? Pia:u r so sweet.Abhay kissed her forhead. Abhay:(caressing her face) Pia tumhe kuch bhi hota hai to i get very worried. Pia: hmm I know.Abhay made her lie on the bed and he lied beside her. Abhay kissed her forhead, her closed eyelids and her cheeks slowly. Pia smiled and felt asleep hugging him tightly. Abhay:get well soon sweetheart.😳

I know ye itna accha nahi tha but andes and rotten tomatoes are welcome.

Edited by Ridwana1234 - 14 years ago

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