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vijayata123

@vijayata123

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Posted: 13 years ago

#141

Originally posted by: abhayfan_dishu
pia is awitch na, to i hope she can save herself, nahin to abhay to hai hi

I know n she can save herself wid only Abhay's help since she's kinda weak...!Pia is kinda d Pia from d show..She's kinda weak...!

PS.sORRY Dishu,there wasn't reli a basharam scene of abhiya since mabe this is d fIRST time m writing romances lol😊

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vijayata123

@vijayata123

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#142

Originally posted by: rashi.rose
Great update dear:-) I love it:-) and Abhiya fight was really Cute:-) cont soon ,.. :-)

ThanQ..Glad u loved it n will continue soon..!😊

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vijayata123

@vijayata123

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#143

Originally posted by: cuteshrishti
Wow dear awesome update.So now Abhiya r frnds but ragini wnts 2 kill Pia & thn I hope Abhid enemy na ban jaye.Nice update😳

ThanQ yaar..!Yup dey r ffrens n Ragini wants to kill dem..Lets not hope dat lolz..!Again Thanks

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vijayata123

@vijayata123

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#144

Originally posted by: Akshi0019
loved abhay pia part!!! dey are so cute yr!!! pia sleapt on abhays chest dats so sweet!!!! n pia also apologise 2 abhay 4 hir rede behaviour!!! dats cool!!!!

i hate ragini!!! i hope sid realizes his truth soon!!! n didnt help him!!!!

cont soon n thanks 4 d pm!!!!

ThanQ..Glad u loved it..!Lol ofcourse Abhiya r cute..!Thanks..!Yup mabe dats cool😛😊

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vijayata123

@vijayata123

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Posted: 13 years ago

#145

Originally posted by: piyabhay4ever
loved the abhiya part. It was so cute!!
I hate this ragini. I hope sid realizes soon that she is just playing him and only wants abhay. Piya will always be safe as along as abhay is there

continue soon

thanks for the PM

ThanQ..Glad u loved it..!Lolz every1 hates d evil one but sum loves dem..To make it interesting sumthing this would happen na?!!Yup bodyguard is ready 2 do his job lolz😳Will continue soon..No Prob dear😊

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Peehu24

@Peehu24

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Posted: 13 years ago

#146

awesome..loved it...

aww..abhiya part was cho chweet..they are beautifull together...oh god..this ragini is here to spoil abhiya..and sid is betraying abhay now..noo...continue soon..thanks for pm..

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vijayata123

@vijayata123

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#147

Originally posted by: peehu24
awesome..loved it...

aww..abhiya part was cho chweet..they are beautifull together...oh god..this ragini is here to spoil abhiya..and sid is betraying abhay now..noo...continue soon..thanks for pm..

Thanks..Lolz Ragini is here to spoil Abhiya..Of Course every FF,SS,or OS have sum villans or a evil character..to make it interesting n blah blah blah..haha!!!Will do n no problem..!😊

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Anukrati

@anukrati19

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Posted: 13 years ago

#148

HII SORRY FOR LATE COMMENTING BUT YOUR FF IS REALLY MINDBLOWING AND AWESOME U ARE SUPERB WRITTER PLS PLS PLS PLS PLS ADD ME IN YOUR PM LIST

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vijayata123

@vijayata123

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#149

Chapter 9

Dobrial House:

T: Pia were u outta ur mind??U spend a whole night wid dat leech!!!

Pia:(Angrily)Di he's not a leech!!!If he was then he would have killed me but he didnt instead he drop me home..!He still loves me n will never hurt me..

T walks away angrily..!Misha comes near Pia.

Misha: Pia,just forget it..N common lets go..We r already late..!N remember we have a dance competition n also a new student..I heard his name is sumthing like Jeh Khurana..I think I have heard this name before..Ummm..who was he?who was he?..!Misha starts thinking.N so does Pia..!

Pia: wait wait,,,isn't he d same Jeh from our past..!Remember who used to love me n he died while fighting Abhayen..Dat was d time i lost my Abhayendra!!Pia then starts crying remembering d past..

Misha: (thinking)Urgg,,now wat kinda animal or supernatural he is!!Okay now Pia stop crying n let's go to college..!

Pia n Misha leaves..!

College:

Pia sees ABhay n thinks to tell him dat Jeh is back..!

Pia starts walking 2wards Abhay but she bumps onto sum1.Pia then looks up n moves back..Abhay comes near Pia n asks her wat happened..!Abhay then looks up n sees Jeh Khurana..

Jeh: Nice to see u guys again Abhay&Pia(smirks)

Abhay: Common Pia lets go..!

Pia: Wait Abhay..!Pia moves her hand towards to shake Jeh's hand but Jeh

hides it behind his back..!

Jeh: no no..not so fast my cutie pi---

Abhay(angrily):Teri toh!!Stay away from Pia..She's not ur cutie pie..!

Jeh: Oh,then is she urs?!!

Abhay angrily punches Jeh n takes Pia's hand n walks away where others were waiting for dem..

Coach: Okay now every1 find ur partners..!

Tracker&Angad pairs up,Abhay&Pia,Kabir&tanaya(random gal)..N other pairs up wid sum1..Only Misha was left alone..!Jeh then comes n d coach tells him to pair up wid Misha..Dey both were arguing,finally dey accepts it..

D coach turns on d music n every1 starts dancing..!

Abhay was luking into Pia's chocolate brown eyes,n Pia was luking into Abhay's icy blue eyes which was full of love n care..

Misha was shocked when she touched Jeh's shoulder..!

Misha thinking: OMG!!!So he's a werewolf...!Poor Pia..Danger is cumming to her..!But this time I won't let anyone hurt...!I know wat to do wid this wofy n how to get u n abhay 2gether😎!!Misha then starts luking at Jeh's eye..N Jeh was keeping an eyes on Abhiya..!D coach realizes it n tells Jeh to look at Misha's eyes like she is doing...Jeh irritatly looks into Misha's eye..While looking at each other eyes both gets lost..!For d first time Jeh felt like his heart was beating while being in a gal's arm..Even when he was a human,he never loved Pia but coz of Ragini he was compelled to love her n become evil..N now his selfish mother who got into Ragini's word lied to him n made him evil like him...!

Misha was also kinda lost into his eyes..For d first time she was liking it..!

Tracker n Angad were dancing,while Tracker was trying to move she bumped onto Abhay so Abhay fell onto Pia..All parts of there body was touching,even dere lips were touching,n both were busy looking at each other's eye..Tracker Angad runs to dem n tries to pull up Abhay but both falls..!

Tracker thinking: Omg!!This Abhay turned out to be a fatty😲Even two ppl can't pick him up...Wow he's so strong..How cool it would be if my Angad was like him but stupid boy cant even pick up sum1😡..

Abhay then looks around n sees dat every1 was looking at dem so he slowly stands up n so does Pia..Abhay smiles n Pia starts to blush!!

Precap: Pia n Ragini in d jungle all alone..Ragini is all set to attack Pia..!

Okay here I ended this chapter..Sorry for d late update..Hope u ppl will like it..I know it's short but bare it wid me😳

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vijayata123

@vijayata123

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#150

Originally posted by: anukrati
HII SORRY FOR LATE COMMENTING BUT YOUR FF IS REALLY MINDBLOWING AND AWESOME U ARE SUPERB WRITTER PLS PLS PLS PLS PLS ADD ME IN YOUR PM LIST

It;s okay n thanks..Will add u😊