Love story of 2011 - Page 2

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Posted: 14 years ago
#11
Hey guys
Chp 2
Abhay taps and to see who it is.Pia who was in her dreamland came out of it and turned to see who it was and thens and sees a tall,handsome boy looking at her
Both abhay and pia stare into each others eyes(back ground the music is playing PEHLA NASHA)
for a couple of few minutes and then ABHAY says
Abhay:Tum mujhe ghoor kyun rahin hu????
Pia:Tum bhi toh mujhe ghoor rahe ho
Both Abhay and Pia stand in silence for some time and then pia thinks to break the silence and says
Pia:Tumhe yahan pehle baar dekha hai.Tumhare naam kya hai Mr?...
Abhay:Abhay...Abhay Raichand.Naam toh suna he hoga.
Pia:Han han chal chal.Zyada badai mat maar...mere paas time nahin hai
Abhay:wat evre...anyways wats your name Ms...
Pia:Mera naam.My name is pia...pia dobriyal
Abhay:Ohhh!!!!!!!!!!!
wat a cute name.nice 2 meet u
Pia:same here
Abhay:Don t u think bohaut raat ho gayi hai.Mai tumhe ghar chod deta hu
Pia:Ohk.chalo.Lets walk
Both of them walk together silently
While walking both of them look at each other every 2 minutes
Suddenly Pia trips over a stone but as Abhay is superfast he catches her before she says her hocus pocus and pervent from falling.Both abhay and pia stare at each other then pia says
Pia:Abhay I can stand now.Don t o think
Abhay:Ummm... Ya sure
After some time pia s legs start paining so abhay carries her till her house
After sometime they reach at pia s house
Pia:Ohk Abhay nice meeting you.Can i get your number?????
Abhay:Ya sure.9834570021.What about yours??
Pia:Mine.9982420901
Abhay:See u later.Had a great time with u.Good night.
Pia:Ya it was great being with u(Pia blushes) Good night and sweet dreams.Bye abhay
Till abhay disappears pia sees him
Hey guys i have finished my second chp
pls hit the like button and do comment
give suggestions also
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Posted: 14 years ago
#12
sweet update...liked it...abhiya eyelocks are too cute...thanks for pm
Edited by peehu24 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#13

Superb update
awww. . Abhiya eyelocks. . I'm loving it
wat a meeting. . Nice!!
Number bhi exchange kar liya. . Dono super fast hai. . Hehe
how abt a welcome party of sid & abhiya dance. .i'l love to see that!
Who was abhay's past love?
continue soon
tc
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Posted: 14 years ago
#14
Wow Clevive...
Abhay and Pia tho bahuth sweet nikle...
Its good to see them behave so cordially with each other...
Number bhi dhe dhiyan great...
Liked the update...
Continue soon

Edited by Eowyn - 14 years ago
snitchseeker thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
#15
That was a nice start. And i like the fact that panchi is his sister here.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#16
hy really good chappy but i think you need to explain things with more info like it is all going too fast but still good chappy xxx
Sanjha thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
#17
HEY CUTE STORY BT I THINK U HAV 2 MAKE THIS STORY LITTLE BIT LENGTHY. IT IS QUITE SHORT ... APART FROM ALL THIS A VRY NICE START... PLZ PM ME AFTER UPDATING UR NXT CHAPP...
urmita thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
#18
wow ...sooo sweeet...lovely update...😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
#19
Hey!
Loved the concept and the chapters.
It's interesting to see pia like this for a change. she's a witch.
n since abhay is vampire, his whole family is also?

n if misha and pia are witched, sid is not??? :S

Continue soon.
Do keep pm'ing me.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#20
hey...awsm strt dear...👏do cont soon n plz pm me...😛lv ya loadzzz...😃

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