FUN POST- EMOTIONAL ATHYACHAR -cindarella

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Emotional Athyachar on a modern Cindarella
Once upon a fairy tale time...In a big mansion Lived The Dobriyal family. King Dobriyal had two daughters..
Panchi and and Misha and an invisible son. They lived a happy life. The girls were really spoilt, they shopped
till they dropped . Misha every other day was arrested and freed for beating the college boys to a pulp .
Panchi on the other hand was manizer, as she was rather fat - NO ONE wanted to marry her .
She was a humoungasaur amongst the other girls. She spent most of her allowance on take outs and she ate and ate like their was no tomorrow. The Queen Madhu tried to get her to excercise - BUT that was no use because she just kept eating whilst excercising. Panchi didn't care because she was rich and had a great car which attracted boys. So every day she dated new boys . (Everyday - new boy? Coz no one stayed longer than that).
One day mount college inherited a new case - A shy, mature, clever, intelligent... bas that's too many compliments ... PIA. An orphan girl. Though she wasn't really an Orphan. She was born out of wedlock and before her mum died she left her outside her father King Dobriyal's house . Queen Dobriyal sent her away... without telling anyone.
PIA was accident prone (from birth) and often got herself in a mess coz she knew that the world's strongest man will be at her beck and call . The dashing, handsome, strong, fast, swift, clever (I'll do a rain check on the last compliment), dashing and bashing . Featherweight champion Abhay Balboa.
Uff Abhay - every girl and buddi's dream. But his heart beat for just Pia . Pia also could not believe her chariatable luck that Abhay had fallen (Literally.. often trying to save her, he used to fall.. from the window or the cliff or out of the car) for her.

But THE BALBOA'S carried a secret, they were batty VAMPIRES . One night Abhay had to reveal himself to Pia.. Coz this time she had really gone and done it and had set herself and the stable on fire. And Abhay could not afford to let his Ranch horses die.

Pia was scared ...and she fell and banged her head and fainted . The Dobriyal's took Pia home in their personal ambulance. Whilst Abhay was frozen by Pia's cold attitude.
During blood transfusion.. it was revealed that Pia was another pea from the Kings pod.
After this .. Pia had short term memory loss and had forgotten all about her dark prince charming.
Oneday as Panchi was taking a walk in the jungle her heavy foot slipped on to some unbreakable ice and she woke Abhay up.
Panchi was s-mitten and socks over him...
Abhay cried and told her what happened... about him and Pia. Panchi felt sorry for him and told him just like cupid she will bring them together. (Hahahaha.. like she would really )
He gave her a slipper that belonged to Pia - and told her - the one that fits this delicate slipper is my princess
and Panchi went home and tries to put her size 10's in and broke the slipper in pieces.
Day and night she just kept thinking and dreaming about Abhay. One day she told him that she loves him and he felt sick on her face and told her "I'd rather join the army and get fired at LOC, then to go with you".
"Thanks but no thanks.. I'll find my own way to Pia now".. and he walked off.
I hope you enjoyed this extra long E.A.
Carisma. xx


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Posted: 14 years ago
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Panchi ki izzat karney koi aur nahin aaya?
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haha ur too much.Superb yaar.I loved it.Abhay nai last mai sahi answer diya😆😆
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😊cv's ne paagal to waise hii kar diya hai ...apni kahaaniyan aur khichdi paka kar...par haan cv's se better khichdi tumpaka sakte ho i am damn sure after reading ure post...ha ha ha just joking ure post is entertaining.😆..par panchi ka dhora aur bura haal kar dete.tang kar rakha hai isne aur cv's ne😡
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amazing cari👏
size 10😆 what a sick woman she is, panchi needs to die for sure. if she exercise on tread mill, for god sake it will break to😆this girl is nothing but useless. PHEW!! thank god abhay rejected on her face and said i rather join arm in LOC then be your BF🤢🤢 wish he had said this on the show then we won't had to endure any shit.
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I LOVE YOU! 🤣...You beat the original Cinderella , darling. Your emoticons rock and you are fast becoming my fave fiction writer.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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omg, u r the new bomb of this forum darling.ur sense of humor, what can i say amazing darling.i can't stop rofling , i nearly choked on water .🤣
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: cuteshrishti

haha ur too much.Superb yaar.I loved it.Abhay nai last mai sahi answer diya😆😆

Thank you. When it comes to E.A's my imagination runs wild - even I get exhausted running after it.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: dolma.rose

😊cv's ne paagal to waise hii kar diya hai ...apni kahaaniyan aur khichdi paka kar...par haan cv's se better khichdi tumpaka sakte ho i am damn sure after reading ure post...ha ha ha just joking ure post is entertaining.😆..par panchi ka dhora aur bura haal kar dete.tang kar rakha hai isne aur cv's ne😡

Hehehe... I will give you what the CV's don't. Pure paisa wasool epi each time with the E.A's. Thoda sa sach - thoda sa joot.. picture Housefull hojayegi. 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: shewascool90210

amazing cari👏
size 10😆 what a sick woman she is, panchi needs to die for sure. if she exercise on tread mill, for god sake it will break to😆this girl is nothing but useless. PHEW!! thank god abhay rejected on her face and said i rather join arm in LOC then be your BF🤢🤢 wish he had said this on the show then we won't had to endure any shit.

I was glad to get my angaarey out on that P. I get ur take and dislike on her...I can't stand her either.

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