FF#Main tum aur Mohabbat(#1) Closed - Page 83

will soon. my sis typing... thora sa reh gaya... i know iss baar booohhhaaattt late ho gai hun...

sorry alll

whats the problem ????

update ur ff damit..

Originally posted by: annokhi

finally my sis type it... i will try to update on sunday so be ready... and i hope iss baar koi kaam na nikal aye...

thank God u r updating tomorrow.waise elections ajjj khatm h gye ha,ab koi kaam nhi nikalna chahye

Originally posted by: biyaahmad

sorry fr being late,i was busy with mid term exams. awsum precap pia missing,how? finally dobriyal's truth reaveled. waiting to know about singhanya's next step. and omg!abhay get to know the truth of raichands,can't wait to see his reaction. plz update sooon

Originally posted by: Newton123

well i'm here 😆
ok read ur awesome work annokhi 😉
it tooked me 3 days to complete it 😳 well kya kru u now i'm very busy person 😉
waisey reason mainey btaya tha lamha ko pta nhi usney dikha ya nhi 😕
chlo bakwaas bandh kar topic pay aati hu
ok get ready
first with concept it was lovely, after reading it i was actually looking forward for it 😊
it's totally different n fresh one (for me)
i loved the way u potrayed the characters in ur FF, beautiful
the character i loved the most in ur FF was not abhay or piya but it was abhilasha
on serious note after reading chinni i thought it would be dog or cat but what it was abhilasha
(ok kisi ka naam yaha pay chinni hai toh usey sorry merey dimag may jo pehli cheese aaye mainey bol diya)
seriously kya nik name diya hai aur uski entry bhi zabardast kar wai hai atey hi baal noochna shuru

but seriously i liked her down to earth nature with a bit of spice

waisey there was one scene where sid was behind abhay to beat him for throwing that pic of metzi, there the way u showed the fight n abhilashas song sequence was way to hilarious , n than there romeo juliet act my god i was laughing like made , n my roomie was watching me as i had grown to horn on my head for a sec poor soul got scared that what happened to me suddenly
n than there was one more scene where abhay was imagining chand as tarzan seriously chand is right beta bigad gaya
and one where abhay n pia where running away from chand with agni in strecher n lot more not remembering right now but loved it all a lot

i just loved the bonding which u have shown in ur FF between sid-abhay-chinni n prem-priya-piya
n also the sweet friendship between chinni n piya lovely 👏

all in all it is rocking n shocking FF 😆
Well rocking kuyki it is rocking n shocking kuyki i noticed u don't give updates quickly

n one more thing i liked in ur FF is u give each n every character there update space in ur updates 😆 means u had not side line any character n all of them get importance in ur fanfiction which i really liked, for that

chlo with this logging out with love akanksha

Originally posted by: Newton123

well wanted to say more but thodi time problem hai so...
but wanted to ask yeh abhilasha kya lamha sey inspired hai 😆
n one more thing after reading khwahish name i remember in one conversation with lamha she pronounced u as khwahish i guess so just wanted to know is it ur actual name
n request to made please PM me ur other work as well want to read them as well