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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: matwamango


I love U for this FIZA. U made my day just by writing this FF. Love U so much. Misha ki FF. I can't wait to read more. I love the charactor sketch for this FF.



Aysha mere jaan Thank u so such I'm so happy u like it...u inspired me with the jisha Jodi glad I made ur day ...luv u take care. BTW my laptop crashed took to the shop don't when it will get fixed... when it does I will update all my ffs I'm msging from my cellphone
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey fiza i love ur concept yaar ... i love misha .. and jay and misha look together ... and plz plz pm me ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: similuvs_ashiuv

hey fiza i love ur concept yaar ... i love misha .. and jay and misha look together ... and plz plz pm me ...




Thank you dear glad u like. It
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Posted: 14 years ago
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*****Ch 1: Tomboy meets playboy******

papa im at my photo shoot for ritu no papa ritu kumar the designer don't worry I will meet you and mama at the airport to pick up panchi di and misha im almost done I'll leave in 15 min promise bye papa says piya. Madhu hurry up we are getting late I talk to piya she will meet us at the airport says arnav

at the airport

kya birdi its been a year since we come home and no is here late as always says misha . come on mish chill pia is at her photo shoot and mama papa are coming relax says panchi

arnav madhu piya get to the airport

misha panchi di missed you both like says pia she crazy hugs them

now all my 3 princesses are back home with me says madhu

princess and mishu she is a storm says arnav

kya papa stop teasing mish you missed them both so much says pia

they get in the car and drive home they pass huge mansion with lots of expense cars parked in front of it where in side a hot guy was working out

come on jay that's enough work out tonight I have big news says neel

I don't care tell me what it is but im not stoping my work out says jay

Fine Misha dobrial is back in town along with her sister panchi says neel

(drops his weights on the floor) what so the eagle has landed nice bachna eh misha lo mein aa gaye ive been waiting for you for a year this will be fun says jay

This is a bad idea bro she is a dobrial and your talking about misha she not like other girls or her sisters says neel

So what we are also khuranas its fine trust me I know she is difrrent that's why she is my new flavor of the month says jay

back at home

misha get some rest tommrow you have to come to college to get your classes then you can come home n relax

next day at college misha got her classes pia ,panchi and misha walking to the canteen when jay bumps in to misha pulls her bra strap she stops all of a sudden

Your ugly but you intrest me dobrial #2 says jay

Eh hello tum kuta ke pooch teri tho how dare you pull my bra strap (slaps him)you jerk you might be hottie in this town for the last 1 year but you know what now that im back you better not mess with me or my family your stupid idiotic pick uplines and cheap acts wont work here you got mr jay khurana

Really im scared he pulls it again misha pushes his head down and him to the table don't you dare you don't who I am I warning you says misha

Jay jerks up turns misha hand and pins her to the wall no you don't know who iam once I see someone I don't stop till I get them he kisses misha cheek misha is about to slap him but he pushes misha away and walks the other way

That !@#$%&* ho w dare he screams misha

We have tell papa says pia

No one is telling mama papa anything I will deal with him my self in my style says misha she takes out her cellphone hello commissioner uncle im misha I have complaint against jay khurana .

That's it for now do comment

Precap chapter 2

Misha meets jay in jail

Just because a tiger is locked up in a cage doesn't change the fact that he is a tiger and haven't you heard the saying wounded tiger well you just pushed the wrong buttion dobrial you've made this even more fun just wait till I come back out sweet heart says jay

Edited by lalmirch28 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#25
WoW Jai is full of attitude. I hope Misha gives him what he deserves. How dare he treat Misha like that. I also love the title Tomboy meets Playboy. Its a good catch Yaar. U are full of shockers.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice update and promo!!!!
thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Oh Teri... Jay!!! OMG.. Fiz darling, Fantastic update.. Its time Misha gives back scoundrel. Loved the Title of ur update
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awesome update! This FF is going to be so much fun to read as Misha and Jay are such fiesty characters so their interactions will be super interesting! Precap sounds interesting! Eagerly waiting for the next update! Continue soon 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hot dude with even hotter attitude😍...
Cool chick with a penchant for trouble making...
I love the Jisha you have made dear...
Dhono ek doosre ko paanch second chen se nahi rehne denge😆...
Continu soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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****Ch 2 taming the wounded tiger ******

Two days later misha come and visits jay in jail

Well well look here poor jay khurana in the lock up how sad but you know what jay these bar really suits you no really tiss tiss jay you messed with me misha don't think you'll get off the hook so easily and if you do anything like what you did the other day I will file a case of sexual harassment against you understood says misha

Just because a tiger is locked up in a cage doesn't change the fact that he is a tiger and haven't you heard the saying wounded tiger well you just pushed the wrong button dobrial you've made this even more fun just wait till I come back out sweet heart says jay

Haha funny khurana you and out not happening anytime soon so whatever well its getting late I have party to go to I'll enjoy my party and you enjoy your self in the lock up says misha she leaves

That night at sids

Panchi baby im sorry I couldn't come to pick you up at the airport but look this party is for you your home coming I love you sweetheart says sid

I know but still you should have come but its ok I mean this party and all its very sweet of you thanks says panchi

Any thing for my girl says sid

Misha pia told me evryhting that happened with jay be careful I use to be like that when iwas his age says sid

What you were a creep how low sid says panchi

No babes I use to but now I 'm a good boy I swear only for you says sid

No but seriously mish jay wint keep quite he will do something says kabir

I know guys don't worry that's why you kabir will help me says misha

Sure for you anything mish says kabir

Well firstly you have act like you're my bf and protect me even I can do it myself but still and if you do this kabeera I will help you impress pia deal says misha

Sure but he wont buy it mish everyone knows I like pia so whats the plan says kabir

Well birdi, sid you both have to act as if you think k and I are perfect for each other and birdi bring out how close we were as kids and all and kabir please stay away from pia for a few days please tommrow at school creat ascene and do something to act like you like me anything ok says misha

Next day

Misha wears and yellow halter top with jeans she and k come to college on her bike he is driving

Jay walks in and sees them

Dude whats your problem kabir cant you understand I said im busy god whats with you says misha she leaves passes jay

Misha wait listen to me na kabir runs after her

Misha gets to class in she sees jay

Oh god he is in this class god help me thinks misha

Dobrial you look sexy in yellow I like why the hell was kabir near you syas jay

That's none of your business says misha

She sits in back of him

Her cell phone rings

Kabir im in class its about to start well talk at lunch bye

Jay thinking yeh kya kabir better stay away from her or else

At lunch in canteen

Kabir pia misha sitting they see jay coming

Misha listen to me misha fine kabir stands on the table listen up everyone what is guy to do when for the past one year has been calling , e-mailing a girl he likes in paris for one year and now she feels I was lying to her misha dobrial I not lying I love you , I loved you since childhood if I wasn't serious I wouldn't have talk to you every day and night when you were in paris I even picked you up from the airport and brought roses for you ' you told me its all lies well its not here to prove to you misha dobrial here (takes off his watch and outs on her ) from today you and me are a couple and as soon as I finish this year will get engaged I promise

Misha kisses hischeek and hugs him kabir spins her around in his arms

Everyone claps

What the hell when did this happen neel you said misha isn't dating anyone whats going on here says jay

Bro how could I know they had a long distance relationship says neel

Find out everything says jay

Jay cant bear to see misha in another guys arms he goes up to misha and kisses her on the lips and punches kabir

What the !@#$%^&* how dare you kiss my girlfriend I will kill you kabir then starts beating jay

Girlfriend no I don't think so she is mine you were never in the picture get away from here or else says jay

Mish comes in front of kabir What nonsense you were never in the picture it has always been kabir don't you dare touch him ( slaps him twice) that's for kissing me and beating up kabir are you crazy I gusses one time in lock up wasn't enough if you don't stop I ll make sure you go right back in

Pia gets some ice misha puts ice on kabirs lip and blows on it she looks at jay he is going green with envy kabir gets up and puts his hand on her waist and they walk away

Later that night

Ramu khaha where is everyone asks misha

Ramu sab is at work and ma'ma is shopping panchi has gone to sids and pia is at a shoot they will come later on eat dinner says ramu

Ok I'll just change syas

misha window is open she is in her pj and spaghetti strap shirt and boy boxers she calls kabir

hi my darling boyfriend what you doing thinking of me jokes misha but just then jay comes trew her window misha screams drops the phone jay covers her mouth with his hand

hello misha are you ok mish says kabir on the phone

misha you shouldn't have done what you did today you and kabir no I don't think so says jay

omg jay shit kabir leaves the house and get in his car still on the phone

misha pushes his hand away

are you crazy what wrong with you '. I don't even know you and your obsessed with me get it throw her sick mind I hate you why are you after me what have I done to you I barely know you says misha

I know but there something about you that makes me go crazy for you I have never felt this way about anyone I just know ki tum sirf mere ho and if kabir comes near you ll he go to the hospital I mean it misha you don't know me says jay

You better not harm kabir jay or I will how much I hate you you haven't seen my hatered yet it can be ugly very ugly says misha

They have a eye lock

Suddenly its broken when kabir grabs jay and punches him in the face the cops come and get jay kabir runs to misha and hugs her

That's it for now don't forget to comment

Precap chapter 3

Poisin ivy club

KaSha dancing

Get your hands off her rathod says jay

Ahhh kabir yells misha are you crazy you hit his head with a a bottle how could you jay kabir crys misha she gets up I wont spare you she grabs the broken bottle and cuts her hand she faints as she falls she hits her head on the bar table

Misha no no he takes his hanky and wraps her hand she faints I wont let anything happen to you misha wake up kabir misha in hospital

Doctor kabir is in coma and misha has lost her memory

Edited by lalmirch28 - 14 years ago

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