Abhay-Piya OS : Arrest Her.

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TheBlackJaguar

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Posted: 14 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: black_scorpio
OMG👏 plz plz write some more😭
it was awesome👏

Thank you, sweetz. 😳

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TheBlackJaguar

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Posted: 14 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: austenrox
it was penetrating and deep...but really sad too 😒...how circumstancces make thee two away from each other all the time...😭

Thank you, sweetz.😳...AbhIya evoke emotions of that kind - deep, intense and full of pathos.😃

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Munaza sami

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Posted: 14 years ago

#53

Poco when i was reading this OS i felt that its happening in real . Ur words are too close to reality .
I hope kekta mai or cvs copy this OS it would be fun to watch. Abhay would make pia arrest and would be sitting in police station to guard her. LOL!
Chand uncle u r the best u knw tht ! I knw hasena has pressured him to help abhay and pia or else haso wil get angry on him!

Sometimes i think u r frm the serial ! JK!
Please write more more and more!

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TheBlackJaguar

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Posted: 14 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: N_NS

I know it's an OS di!! I'm not that dumb, u know😆... But what I meant was that plz change it either into a DS or a short ff or atleast update ur ff soon... I will be waiting for any of these...😃
Love u,
Nidhi😆

Awww Nidz!🤗... the only issue is that i don't have time. That one FF which am writing is taking my life. 🤣... but i promise to continue writing OS. 😃

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Pari Gupta

@Pari-Gupta

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Posted: 14 years ago

#55

Awesome dear

Please write its next part please

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sweta-mony

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Posted: 14 years ago

#56

Awesome OS dr plz update it soon , ding to read.

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TheBlackJaguar

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Posted: 14 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: hreeyaa
wow..awesome OS...keep it up...👏😊

Thank you. 😳

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TheBlackJaguar

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Posted: 14 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: M2NZ
Poco when i was reading this OS i felt that its happening in real . Ur words are too close to reality .
I hope kekta mai or cvs copy this OS it would be fun to watch. Abhay would make pia arrest and would be sitting in police station to guard her. LOL!
Chand uncle u r the best u knw tht ! I knw hasena has pressured him to help abhay and pia or else haso wil get angry on him!

Sometimes i think u r frm the serial ! JK!
Please write more more and more!

That is super sweet of you. 😳.. i sure want to write more OS. 😆..I am not from PKYEK's creative team at all. 😊