FF: FANAA...tere pyaar main..

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Hi everyone...hope u all like it...m starting a new FF. plz enjoy

CHARACTERS:
Pia dobriyal - fun loving, simple girl...who luvs being herself...doesnt believe in love

Abhay raichand - mysterious hunk...loner...wid full attitude...

note: ABHAY AND SIDDHARTH ARE VERY CLOSE TO EACH OTHER. SIDDHARTH IS NOT EVIL.


rest are the same as in pkyek


link to sequel


FF:CAPTIVATED (BY ME AND ANJALI)





index
chapter 1: return pg 1
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1683398#

chapter 2: attraction pg 1
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1683398#

chapter 3: the raichands pg 1
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1683398#

chapter 4: the crash pg 2

chapter 5: the search pg 4

chapter 6: the party pg 4

chapter 7: the truth pg 7

chapter 8: confessions pg 7

chapter 9: perfect night pg 10

chapter 10: its time pg 10

chapter 11: the meet pg 12

chapter 12: the demand pg 16

chapter 13: a visitor pg 16

introduction of new pg 19
characters

chapter 14: beginning pg 19

chapter 15: welcome pg 19

chapter 16: hidden truths pg 22

chapter 17: love without fear pg 22

chapter 18: the attack pg 26

chapter 19: time has come pg 26


chapter 20: final battle pg 30





CHAPTER 1: RETURN


PIA is packing her things as she is returning to her family from U.S. She was on a vaccation with her friends. She has always been fun loving girl. Now she is going back to her house...THE DOBRIYAL house.

Pia gets a call from Kabir, her chilhood friend. "hi Pia! how r u...m waiting for your return..."
Pia: m cuming today...m dying to meet you...bye...m at airport...talk to u later

Pia returns home. Misha and Panchi have thrown a surprise party for her. Kabir along with Danish are also present. The party is at full swing. Suddenly Kabir call Pia out in the garden. Kabir is in love wid Pia. Kabir has arranged a surprise in the garden. Flowers...gifts...champagne...all he can do to impress her. Kabir talks his heart out...
Kabir: Pia m ur childhood friend..but i have always luves u in way...today i want u to tell me whether u luv me or not...will u be my gf??
Pia is still thinking. She is in shock as she has never considered him more than a friend.
Pia: Kabir i know u love me...i love you but m not in luv wid u...u will b my frnd but not more than that...srry.
Misha overhears everything n feels that pia is not right...She should be with Kabir...She decides to help him. Back at home engagement for Panchi and Danish is announced.






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CHAPTER 2 : ATTRACTION

Pia, Misha and Kabir reach mount college. Pia is avoiding Kabir. Seeing this Misha decides to do something.

Kabir: hey mish! Pia is not talking to me.

M: I knw K. I heard everything last nite. I wil do sumthing. Its time for action baby!!

Misha decides to take both of them to mountain climbing. On reaching,

P: are you mad mish. Papa ko pata chala toh he wil kill us. We will b grounded

M: chill pia..birdie ki tarah mat act karo..kabir lets go'u and pia go together kabir

P: misha plz I don't'.

K: m srry pia'.i wont do it again'.i promise'I don't want to lose a frnd'.

P: its ok kabir...frnds forever again.

Pia and kabir go together. During this adventure the rope of pia breaks and she is falling down'kabir and misha shout but are helpless. Suddenly an arm catches frightened Pia. Pia is in his arms fighting her fear. "tum aakhein khol sakti ho", he says. Pia opens her eyes. She sees a young man carrying her in his arms. She is continuously staring at him. He is also not able to take his eyes off her. Pia feels attraction to him as if he has hypnotised her. She feels that the whole world is meaningless and its just him and her. Pia is so absorbed in his eyes that she doesn't realize that she is still in his arms. He sets Pia down.

Pia: thank..thank u...u..u saved my life.hii m pia.

He just walks away saying," as if I care".

Kabir and misha reach to pia. They are happy that pia is alrite. They hug her. But pia is still absorbed in his thoughts'.At home pia tells misha and panchi about it. But they feel that Pia is in shock. Pia still in his thoughts slowly drifts to sleep'.

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CHAPTER 3: THE RAICHANDS

Abhay is back home. He is still thinking about pia.

Haseena: wat is it abhay? U seem lost?

A: mom...I saw her...maithili...her name is pia and she luks exactly like her

Haseena: abhay..control urself..she is not Maithili. Kal se colg start ho raha hai..focus on that..make new frnds. Hamare survival ke liye yeh jaruri hai'samjhe'and remember v r not humans..

A: but mom...

Chand: abhay! Haseena sahi bol rhi hai

Sidharth: abhay!tum mere saath chalo..now

Abhay and siddharth go to the terrace to get some time alone.

A: bro I don't knw main kya karunga..I cant forget Maithili and today wen I saw pia its was like I was living in my old days..she brought back all the memories. Today I saved her life. She was falling from the cliff. Agar main nhi bachata toh she would hav died.

S: little brother...don't worry. I knw u will deal wid it. Just try to maintain distance. And remember no matter whatever u chose I wil always support u and be wid u. no matter wat.

A: thanks..pata nhi mera kya hota tumhare bina.

Abhay is still thinking about pia. He decides that he will always maintain distance from her. He decided never to meet her again.

But fate had sumthing else in store for both Pia and abhay.

I hope u like it...plz do comment...

Edited by peehu24 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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no one is commenting...i guess its not gud...😭💔
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Posted: 14 years ago
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no its gud but right FF infont of it so tht ppl came 2 know its fans friction
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Posted: 14 years ago
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U wnt 2 know the answer...its green signal...really loved it...go ahead...

chapters r reaaallly gd...so no worries ...continue writing ...n ya pm me...
bhoolna mat😆😆😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey dont get disheartened so soon😃... its reallu gr8 👏... u write really nice🤗 ... give people sm time i m sure they will cm to ur ff😉... keep writing continue soon❤️
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow for a change Sid is not evil. Thts really a welcome change
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: cuteshrishti

no its gud but right FF infont of it so tht ppl came 2 know its fans friction


thank u for appreciating...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: peehu24


thank u for appreciating...

OH UR PLEASURE & SORRY Fan fiction & not friction LOL😆
Edited by cuteshrishti - 14 years ago

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