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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: honey_bunch

Wow ! I'm likng ds..plz pm me wen u update..



thanks. experiment with abhay, and piya character. trying to see their various sides
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: karantakiar

Jus luv d cncpt.
superb.
plz cnt soon nd do pm me.
luv u
vritika



thanks. experimenting...😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: honey_bunch

Wow ! I'm likng ds..plz pm me wen u update..


will do. and add u
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: ---Pari---



Heyy! I love the sketch! Would love to read it! Can u put my name as one of the leads? I'm sanjana btw!! 🤗




sure hun. thanks. sanjana check character sketch
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: pari_smart

Nice ff please add me 2 ur PM list


will dooo😳
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Originally posted by: cblover

plzzz continue...nice and really nice update..love the part soo much




awww😳
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Chappy 1
Abhay the Crown Prince of the Vampire world came storming through the door , when he discovered his new assignment.Haseena(the queen) was sitting by the fire sipping blood .He cursed
Abhay: I have to protect some flithy human shit! I know what dad always does it right, and I never try to rebel against him. But, mum I think I had enough
Haseena-Here drink this handing him the red special drink! Just sit down, and relax yourself . Abhay sat besides the fireplace, and rested his hand on Haseena's lap .
Abhay-Mum! I don't know why dad makes me all do this mission, and protection. Can't u assign somebody else? Why me?

Haseena- U r the heir to this kingdom. U r the future. You are only the one who has the power to protect her. She is under your custody. You are the Prince(second in command to the Vampire world). Our enemy would be careful before shaking up some trouble with u. You are powerful, and only the worthy vampire who can fulfill this mission. We need you. Please ! Abhay! MY son do this for me.(soothing him).

Abhay- Mum! As you say, I am gonna do this for your sake.

Abhay got off Haseena's lap, and with his ran like a hurricane to his room.

Stephanie was in a bed covered with a blanket

Stephanie- You are not gonna join me. I made an effort to prepare for you to please u today by rigorously going through various beauty treatment.

Abhay-Shut up! I am not in the mood. I am bored with u. Get out of here. (sitting by nearby sofa0

Stephanie covering herself in a blanket. (approaching him ).

Stephanie- You know you can't refuse me. Come on ! Make love to me.

Abhay pushed her aside

Abhay- I told your my wh**e for the other night. And, I am not in the mood. Leave the f alone.

Abhay ran like the wind. Abhay thoughts( How could his father betray him) .He could have assigned somebody else for the girl's protection he thought. His father was ruining his life. He was a vampire Prince, and he had to protect a commoner(a human).

Piya in the club
Awww Shit!!!! W*F Jerk! Are you blind (Piya angry)

Abhay (gasped) The girl who had just cursed him was gorgeous. He thought she was sexy as hell. She had a hair in bun,and was wearing red high heels, and short black full dress. Damn! She look hot. He slapped himself mentally , and responded to her: It's your fault not mine! And , I have 20/20 vision for you kind information

Piya- Shut the hell up! It's was not my fault.Now, hand me the money to pay for my dress, and u ruined my make up.

Abhay widening his eyebrows- O Hell No! I am not pay for you ugly dress. And, ugly face does need make up. No wonder! You are screaming me at me like a little girl.

Piya- U asshole! Who gave u the power to insult me? Don't u know who I am ?

Abhay- A rich , spoiled , Malibu Barbie. Abhay snorted

Piya furious -threw a shot of taquilla at him. Abhay was irked now.

But his valet Albert stopped him. Piya's fren soon joined her too.

Piya- Leave me ! Sanjana! I swear I teach him a lesson

Abhay mocking her- U wish! In your dreams. Right now, I have to be somewhere. Next time, I will get my revenge.

Sanjana- What the hell is wrong with u?

Piya- Shut up! He just ruined my fav dress, and insulted me . And, U r supporting him.
Piya drove like maniac in her Ferrari 360 spider enraged.

The Dobriyal Mansion
In her house, Panchi, and Sid were gathered around the living room along with Misha, Madhu , and Arnav.

Sid- Piya! We need to talk to you

Piya- Bro! Something wrong?

Panchi- Piya! Whatever we tell u , u have to listen to us carefully

Piya- Not Again! You did not practice some stupid spell Panchi ! And, it all went wrong(shaking her head)

Panchi- Mum , Misha, and Dad can u all leave. We have to talk to Piya alone

Misha- She is my bestfren. And , I wanna be here .

Arnav- Mish! Try to understand. They need to talk to her alone...

Misha- Fine! But, she has to tell me what the secret of doing all this is. Arnav agreed, and pulled her away.

Panchi- Piya! U know I am a witch, and they are supernaturals creatures like vampire do exist.

Piya grining- How could I forgot ?

Sid- Look Sis! This is no time for games .

Piya- Fine! Lay down what so impo? Piya said quoting

Panchi - This! Turn around.

Abhay, Chand, and Haseena.

Piya just gasped, and Abhay did the same.


hahahha! I wanted to try to something diff. sorry, Piya, and Abhay are two stubborn here. But, I promise when they do fall, they will fall hardly for each other. Here Abhay is not a goody too shoes. And, neither is Piya. They both are gonna have a tug of war. Abhay here is a womanizer, sleep around, and he is arrogant. I just wanted to experiment something diff.

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Edited by syria2014 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: syria2014



thanks. i try to do something diff. i am experimenting with ff.

okay as u wish:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice update n thanks for the PM
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Chapter 2
"Love or Lust" (The Tampon Incident)
Piya's Mansion
Piya was shocked to see who it was. It was the jerk who had spilled drink in her dress.
Piya: You! W*F are you doing here?

Abhay: Shut up! Your sis in law, and ur dear brother invited me here.

Piya looking back at Panchi- Why would invite him here?

Sid: Piya! Watch your mouth! Be respectful.

Panchi- Piya! Bow to him!

Piya- Hell no! Why do I have to bow to him?

Panchi- He is our Prince, and bow to his parents too

Piya: Is this a sick joke?

Panchi- No! Piya we belong to their court. Your ancestors and mine we used to work under them. U r blue blood human. Piya! U have a rare blood that is intoxicating to vampires, and also that can take their life. It depends how to chose to give it to him. He is here to protect you.

Piya laughing hysterically- Vampires exist! Yeah right. I am kidding. I know. Do u think I am that stupid. Panchi! You have told me a lot of time. But, cool did not know my blood was intoxicating to vampires, and I was a rare blue blood with powers too.Hell yeah! I will so this bitch what I got.

Abhay- Shut up! sarcastically. Don't get too hyper. And, in your dream you can't kill me bitch

Piya- U called me what? U 🤬 . How dare you?

Abhay,and Piya - That's it . Stop both of you. Chand said

Chand- I apologize what happened in the club. And, please cooperate with us. U r life is in grave danger My Lady. Please understand us.

Piya- Thank you sir! Some one is polite here

Abhay- What on earth are u apologizing her dad?

Hassena- Abhay! Apolgize ordering him

Abhay never said no his mother, and apologized to Piya. But Abhay's had a plan to seek his revenge.

Piya, and Abhay were told to shake hands.

Piya (murmring)- The war is on

Abhay- Vendetta !!!!!

Piya- Por

Abhay- Por mi. He said smiling evilly at her, and give a kiss on a forehead. Piya's whole body tingled,and it was like a electricity shock. Abhay had the same reaction. He quickly pulled away, leaving Piya baffled. Piya gritted her teeth, and calmed her self down.
Piya packed her bags, and waved good bye to every one. Panchi, and Sid informed they would visit her later. She sure was going to miss Mish, Madhu aunty,,and Arnav uncle she thought.

At Abhay's Mansion
Abhay's drove her to the mansion they owned outskirts of Dehradhun. It had a fountain in the middle, gardens adapted tudor style from the Hampton Court of Henry VIII, and a huge dome style front door in the middle.It had a lake, and a huge swimming pool. It was combination of modern, and classic . It was supposed to be Abhay's summer residence. Piya, and Abhay were supposed to be stay alone in the house so they could learn to get along better.

Piya admired the architect of the house.

Abhay- Hey spoiled brat!!!!Are you gonna keep on looking at my house or are you gonna unpack ?

Piya- Shut up ass!!!

Abhay- Need a help. Poor baby is too weak (pouting)

Piya- I have a black belt. So don't mess with me. (mocking Abhay)

Abhay- OOo!!!! I am scared.

Piya, and Abhay left for their bedroom. The maids showed them where they were staying. Piya changed in to her jogging outfit . She went to jog in the garden.

Abhay sneaked in her room, and looked around. He went through her bag, and found a box of tampon. He smiled mischievously. And, he knew exactly what he wanted to do for revenge. He took all the tampons box and filled it with sand. And, then he threw them in the swimming pool. Abhay knew she would be furious. He was excited to see her reaction.

Piya came back from jogging, and took a shower. After that, she looked for to change in to tampons. But, she did not find it on her bag. She was embarrassed to tell anybody to get extras for her.

Piya (frustrated through the bag)- W*F is it???// I know I brought it. Abhay!!!!

Abhay- was leaning at the swimming pool lying with his swimmers. He had no shirt on. Piya glared at his strong and well defined abs like a idiot.

Piya(thoughts)- How would I love to touch and feel them?

Abhay- Like what you see? smiling evily

Piya- Shut up!!! Ass!!!Did you tamper with my personal belongings

Abhay( pretending innocent) Like what? Could you be specific?

Piya- Aaahh!!!! Piya turned around to see in swimming pool. Her tampons were floating around the swimming pool.

Abhay- Surprise. I ain't getting you any.

Piya- ewww!!!! U r 🤬 disgusting seriously!!!! I swear u better watch out.

Abhay- Haah!! What can a pathetic human like u can do?

Piya- You wait and watch. Soon , Stephanie shows up

Stephanie running, and hugs Abhay tightly. Abhay decided to make Piya jealous

Piya(thoughts) What a man wh**e? How can he like that ugly cheek. She is so ugly. She ain't nothing compare to my beauty. What the hell am I saying. it's his life . Piya feeling sting of jealousy.

Abhay grabbed Stephanie, and made out with her in front of Piya. Piya knew exactly what to do. When she had settled , and was taking shower. It had been noisy, and when she had secretly had gone to see what the noise about. She had seen another girl come out of Abhay's room. She knew what to do.She smiled evily.

Piya looked through his room, and found bunch of condom stacked in his cupboard at the right side. She took them out, and blowed them. She ruined them to a point where he could not use them. Piya sheepishly left the room.

Abhay's room

Abhay decided he was going to give it her. Every girl wanted to him. He thought he could do the favor. He needed her right now as a distraction. Since,he had met Piya . He had not know what happened to him. He could not stop thinking about her.

Abhay went to the cupboard, and looked for his condom. He did want to father a bas***d human child. He could not believe what he was saying.His whole condoms were destroyed

Stephanie on the bed- Come on sugar!!!! Give it to me.

Abhay (annoyed)- Shut up!!!!!! I don't want to father ur child. It's not happening. Get the hell out of here. He kicked stephanie out.He knew who had done it.

Piya walked by Abhay;s room , and saw Stephanie fixing herself and leaving

Stephanie- You are the one who did this nah!!!! You will pay. She walked away on her 4 inch heels, nearly tripping

Abhay came out of the room irked😡

Abhay thrusted Piya to the wall- What do you think of your self?

Piya- Why poor baby ? Did not lose his virginity. (pretending to feel sorry for him)

Abhay- Shut up!!!!!! U r gonna pay for this. U think u r so smart. Wait!!!!! U don't know what I can do

Piya- Show me . Abhay forcefully brings Piya's lips to it and kisses it. Piya gives in to the temptations. She could envision the spark ,and the fireworks . To Abhay was the same, each time it deepened he felt the more, and more urge to touch her. He knew his limits, and pull aways.

Piya (shocked with her heat on her cheeks)- U ass! How the hell did you dare to kiss me.

Abhay- U liked it .smirking

Piya😡- No! I did not like it. Piya knew she was telling a lie

Abhay- U did not liked but loved it, he said stretching his hands out, and releasing his grips .

Piya- No!!! I did not like!! I want to puke

Abhay- Come on babe!! You kissed me back too. You know u want me bad. 😉

Piya staggered her two feets, and left. She did not if next time she would even able to resist him or not.

guys. I know Abhay is a badass, but he will improve. It will take couple of chappy's And, I know there is a lot cursing, but it will vanish as soon the story moves forward. So did u like what abhay did to Piya, and what Piya did to Abhay. Abhay won't be sleeping around with woman. Every time he will try, he will get image of Piya. It will frustrate the hell out of him, and will throw some tantrums to deny his feeling for her. As Piya will too.










Let's just exlore diff abhiya right now😆







Edited by syria2014 - 14 years ago

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