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Posted: 14 years ago
#71
hey please update the new chap soon🥱
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Posted: 14 years ago
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ch:9 scene(pia outside the hotel) pia:taxi!!! bt the car didnt stop... pia take of her shoe n throw towards the car.. pia: shit! now how i m gona go home alone abhay:can i get along with u.. pia:that be nice..
scene(pia n abhay outside the pia's house)
abhay:gd n8
pia:by
pia tried to find keys in her purse bt it wasnt there
abhay: wht happnd?
pia: i couldnt find my keys, i dont know wher i dropped it..
abhay: u can come with me..our hostel..
pia:oooky... so i can b ur dinner (winked)
abhay: (laughed) i m vegetarian...
pia:thanx for the offer bt i can manage.. jst watch..
pia take off her shoes n said abhay to hold them
abhay:wht???
pia:do as i said
she climbed up the tree n reached to the balcony of her room
pia waved her hand
pia:by abhay...
abhay..by
scene(abhay entered in the vampire hostel where shankar n shurya were sitting, talking abt girlz )
shurya:that grl was damn hot..
shurya looked at abhay cmng from the door
shurya:look who is here...
abhay was still holding her heels in his hands
shankar looked there..
shankar:oh! i think pia beated him with her heels..poor abhay!! hahaha
shurya:ya poor he... side effects of love..
shankar:ya a new use of heels
abhay:jst shut up u guys.. in case if u dont want me to shut them with these heels..( throwed on them)
scene( abhay in his room trying to sleep,outside it was raining, n room lightens up with the flashes of thunders and then dims again)
abhay in his mind "i hope she is ok.."
i m having this feeling that she is not fine..
i think i should go n check her myself"
scene(it was raining heavily and flashes of thunder lightining on sky)
abhay jumped in pia's house through window
he called her name
"pia where r u?"
bt no answer..
abhay got worried n started looking for her in entire house
she wasnt anywhere
his concern increased
he walked to pia's room bt no 1 was there..
he heard muffled cry
he heard atentionaly, it was coming from closet
he opened the door of closet
he found pia scared,folding her arms around knees, sobbing badly..
abhay:pia!! wht happened? ( concernly)
abhay sit with her, there to comfrt her,
pia rushed into his arms
she was shivering
he could feel
her hard breaths,
her increased heart beat
he can see fear in her eyes
abhay surround her in his arms
she felt little cmfrt with his closenes
suddenly the voice of thunder blast hard
pia shouted,she got afraid
abhay started running his fingers in her hairs
gently n slowly
to cmfrt her
abhay:pia! wht happend?
tell me, i m here, u'll be f9
pia:i... m afraid of... actually.. i m afrid ..of thunder lightning
another blast of thunder,pia got more scared
abhay closed her eyes n then put his hands on her ears
she felt little relived
she layed her head on his shoulder with her eyes closed tightly due to fear
n abhay remained there for her
"ur arms r my castle, ur heart is my sky
they wipe away tears that i cry
the gud n the bad times,v've been thru them all
u make me rise when i fall"
she fell asleep like that in closet n abhay keep looking her whole night
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Posted: 14 years ago
#73
nice update. it was really sweet
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Posted: 14 years ago
#74

Lovely update!
Abhay reading a poem for pia. . . That too in a closet . Awww . . So cute!
Continue soon!
TC . .
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Posted: 14 years ago
#75
abhay wasnt reading poem for her , these were the lyrics of song,perfect for situation 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#76
Wow cute update.I loved it😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#77
lovely update
He is really cute
Continue soon
Can u pleeez pm me
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Posted: 14 years ago
#78
Woww.. Amazing update Dear.. Abhiya part was so lovely.. Abhay was sitting wit Piya in d closet..aww how sweet.. Continue soon..thanx for d pm..lol.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#79
ch:10
scene(abhay is looking at pia affectionatiy, she is all he can think abt rite now,seeing her laying her head on his shoulder, closed eyes, paeceful sleep...
some of her hairs is on her face creasting, a beautiful net of hairs...abhay gently n slightly remove her hair from her face.. pia slowly opened her eyes looked at abhay,trustfully... she saw him n smiled... n suddenly she realized he is there for real... they both came to real world.. realizing that they were in the closet whole night... they both tried to came out of the closet in haste bt they both fell down,n all clothes fell on them... piya was on abhay😳 their eyes locked for a moment bt a moment was enough to read all emotions.. they got up.. pia:thanx abhay.., for staying here last night (hesitatily) abhay:ya! that's ok.. (looked confused) both started staring at floor they dont know wht to say.. or they do wana say smthng,which cannot be described in words bt can be felt silently in hearts.. abhay:i should go now, bye.. pia:ya abhay left with her thoughts in his mind..
scene(panchi,shankar ,shurya,abhay,mesha, rohi,t and pia r sitting together in canteen)
pia text abhay
"P/z dont tell any1 that i m afraid of thunder lightning"
abhay replied her
"ok i wont"
pia text him again
"n also that i was with u entire night"
rohi: r u both texting each other
abhay:no
abhay smiled n replied her again
"ok,bt u r also not gon tell any1 that i was in closet"
pia replied...
"ofcourse, u r forgetting that i was in the closet to,so y would i tell any1"
abhay text
"ok'"
every 1 noticed them..
due to their phone ringing 1 by 1
panchi: (to abhay) u lair v know u guys r texting each other..
misha snatched pia mobile..
and started reading msgs loudly..
"dont tell any1 that u were with me entire night"
shankar n shurya "ooo..."
pia:stop it misha..
misha was abt to read another1 bt abhay grabbed it from behind.
T:whtever.. (angrily)
abhay glanced at shankar n shurya...
scene(every1 is in class)
teacher :every1! attention p/z, tomorrow is ur ball"
there were happiness at every grlz face
n sadness at boyz faces like...
mishe:it sucks...
scene(pia is her room,infront of mirror and combing her hairs)
suddenly she saw sm1s reflection in the mirror..
pia:who's there?
she looked at the door , its was locked inside
"abhay is that u?"
then she thought"i guess i m tierd i should sleep
she was abt to go to the bed..
she heard a voice
she ran outside in the hall from where that voice came
the flower pot was cracked..
sm1 called her from behind
"Pia"
pia looked back, it was arnab and kabir
she hugged arnab..
"papa i love u"
arnab:wht hapnd to that pot? did u...
(pia didnt let him complete his sentence"
pia:no, dad i didnt, it must be cat.. (smiled)
pia to kabir "kabir tomorrow is our ball, n u'll be my date, ok"
kabir:u r asking me or telling me... (smiled)
pia:i m telling..
scene(haseena and chand r sitting)
chand:they r coming..
haseena:i m gona go tell abhay.
chand; i already did..
Edited by punjabijuliet - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#80
who's coming. the texting was sweet,

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