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Posted: 14 years ago
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guyz as we noe that Misha's efforts to make Kabir n Piya a couple wil b of no use as Abhay n Piya r made 4 each other,in the end Kabir wil b heartbroken🄺😭
so i composed a poem on the situation wat a person feels wen he/she is heartbroken,it goes lyk dis

Wen i said i luv u , u thought i am lying,

Wen i said no one is more important than u , u thought i m denying.

I alwayz wanted to give u ma luv n happiness,

But y ma luv becam the reason of ur sadness?

I was proud of ma luv n considered it as ma God,

But y couldn i win ur trust n y u considered me as fraud?

I m stil trying to find out wat was my mistake,

My luv was true , y u thought that it was fake?

tell me guyz how is it?
plz suggest me a suitable title also
God bless !
take carešŸ¤—

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey Dear.. Lovely Poem.
Heartbroken also is a gud title..
Here r 2 other titles:
Love Hurts..
Silent Tears..
U should write more n if u do den plz do pm me..lolz.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Heart touching..do write more dear..very less people have a talent of writing such masterpieces
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awww poor Kabir....kabhi Pia to kabhi Misha is raising his hopes....and in the end he is the one who will get a heart break....thats so sad 😭
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awww,such a cute poem
heart broken😭,very sad for kabir
nice poem payal di
just awesomešŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ¼
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Posted: 14 years ago
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how many times kabir will be heartbroken🤪🤣
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Gals1110

Hey Dear.. Lovely Poem.
Heartbroken also is a gud title..
Here r 2 other titles:
Love Hurts..
Silent Tears..
U should write more n if u do den plz do pm me..lolz.

thnx 4 suggesting titles n such a sweet comment i wil surely pm u wen i write more but 4 that u hav to add mein ur buddy list😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: SimplyAparajita

Heart touching..do write more dear..very less people have a talent of writing such masterpieces

thnx a lotttt😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice post

I love Kabir but this time I don't feel sorry for him at all.

Gosh how many ways does Piya has to tell him she love's Abhay ONLY and ONLY Abhay before he get it.

Piya is just not into you Kabir get over it once and for all and move on 😔
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nishi.Singh

awww poor Kabir....kabhi Pia to kabhi Misha is raising his hopes....and in the end he is the one who will get a heart break....thats so sad 😭

even i m feeling bad 4 himCry

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