When I fell in love again...(ABHAY)

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Ritzie Ring'gghania

@Ritzie

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Posted: 14 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: sweetysadia
yaar you are very good writer that tells all the story .i like it .because in it you also high light piyas character. thank you so much .piya is caring about her love

Thanks Sweety for you nice comments. They make me feel thrilled. I tried to see Pia from Abhay's angle. What Pia as a character means to him. I am glad you caught on that. 😃

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Ritzie Ring'gghania

@Ritzie

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Posted: 14 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Nishi.Singh
oh Ritzie....so this was what Abhay was thinking that night when he was driving Pia back to the hostel lol....now i get it, thats why he was so quite 😆 ....and he didnt smile even when Pia kissed him 😛
ok that again reminds me of Edward in Abhay.......and esp. these lines..

Will she remember me? May be she will, initially, and then later she will forget me.

👏amazing yaar....and ofcourse, Sid hai to Abhay hai Pia ke paas....Sid gaya to Abhay bhi chala jaega...

Nishi - Mujhe kya pata kya soch raha tha - maine toh bas likh diya. Now even if he was thinking about a pub, he can't deny these thoughts😆. If he is thinking that much, he won't get time to smile, na. 😆

You caught me😉 I am influenced by Edward's thoughts at many places because there is no way we can catch Abhay's thoughts and I personally don't know any Vampire.😆

Thanks a lot for your comments. Aur haan Sid toh Sid hain na.😆

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Ritzie Ring'gghania

@Ritzie

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Posted: 14 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: SimplyAparajita
So deep and heart touching ritzie..i just loved it..

awwwwwww thanks a lot Apri. Questions about Abhay's thoughts have been disturbing me for a long time now. What he thinks, how he thinks and what are his logics? I put together what my mind answered for those questions.

Thanks a lot for appreciating. It made my day.

Edited by Ritzie - 14 years ago

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ozzyie

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Posted: 14 years ago

#14

Ritzie... if Abhay had a soul... it were shifted in u for a while...😆

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Ameres

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Stunner

Posted: 14 years ago

#15

You call this pathetic?!?! 😳

This is one of the best peice of writing i have read here. Honestly you are good with words and it shows. And this was sooo Abhay! I could feel him.

I really liked the end and your view on Sid. You are right he maybe evil but unintentionally hi sahi he is bringing them closer.

You are such a positive person and its rubbing off on me. Goody!

This was great! So for you 👏👏👏👏👏

Lub ya! Keep writing more! 🤗

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Ritzie Ring'gghania

@Ritzie

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: RB81
hei ritz,
very well written..u have put abhay's thoughts in words neatly..gr8 work..

Thanks so much Ramani for the nice comments.

I tried to put one and one together. Abhay is always so intriguing for me as I assume that he thinks differently than humans and than Vampires.

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OriginalsFan

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+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#17

Ritzie bahut aacha likha hai👏 good going girl keep it up😉

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Rupa

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Posted: 14 years ago

#18

u are such amazing writer ...and putting abhay thought is quite difficult as character itself is so challenging If CV don't choose to say something then it may not echo what he thinks to audience ....make it more difficult to understand him

well writer like u can really make this possible ...u brought his thoughts so well ...and in more convincing way ...

keep writting .....on abhay 😛lol!!! what to do ...i like him and ur post on him 👏.....

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Ritzie Ring'gghania

@Ritzie

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: TOTAL-ROMANTIC
OHHH RITZIE🤗..!!..you really took my breath away with this mind blwoing post yaar ..Phewww..thats why I always consider myself nothing close to awesome writers like you..!! God Bless you & Love you always you know that..!!!😳 It is such a nice feeling to have intellectual people like you and many many many othesr in this forum..Wohaaa..PKYEK & ABHIYA ROCKS..!! RULZ & CONQUERS..!! Your each & every word was so perfect exactly like what ABHAY must be feeling yaar AWESOME..!! I read it 2 times ..already..😍

awwwwwwwwwwwwww Totzie - You are amazing yourself. The way you pour your innocent and pure feelings into the post is amazing. Your posts bring the energy that you have in you. And your comments brought the thrill in me. It feels great to be appreciated, especially, energised with your clear thoughts. Yes, PKYEK and Abhiya rocks.

I am glad I could put some of the things for which even I have been wanting the answers.

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Ritzie Ring'gghania

@Ritzie

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Posted: 14 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: ozzy88
Ritzie... if Abhay had a soul... it were shifted in u for a while...😆

Wooooooo, **maarrying seetie. I am so thrilled at that comment. This is like ultimate. Did it actually looked that real? I was so fearing that nobody will like it. But thanks for encouraging me.