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adorableKSG

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Posted: 14 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: .dazzleme.

....it took you away, and i was left, forcing the world to let me hang on, to let me hope, to let me smile....maybe there is a brighter future i used to think.

it doesnt matter how his humiliations where for my safety....it doesnt matter if i knew they were just empty words....its still hurts....it matters...cause He matters.

So i am lying here almost lifeless, unconcsious, bitten. You know the irony mom?...its all for my safety,lol .

entering a house where even mentioning my name is illegal...how did this turn so dark?

See mom, i dont even have a right over dieing,lol.....if i die, he'll die...again. I . Afterall, his world,above all difficulities, gave me what mine didnt, Love and belonging!

^^ these lines were the higlights! loved em. specially the first one....forcing the world to let me hang on, how deep!...Beautiful nd smooth monoluge. lovely language. cute nd painfull at the same time. keep it up.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: SanaLi
This was beautiful nd so well expressed.
thnk you.

Thank you Dear. glad you liked it.😊

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Asmita

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Posted: 14 years ago

#23

loved it

u made me cry

nice post

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.dazzleme.

@.dazzleme.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: abhaylove

Awesome post ...piya talking to her mom about her feeling , misery , love, pain , confusion ....

You really wrote the thoughts of piya which u don't get to feel when u see the episode . I hope CV really bring more intense feeling like this .

Every state of her mind.. confusion , feeling for abhay , pain , life ..everything is so well written.

Must say u are such brilliant writer ....U really conveyed the piya thoughts in such deeper way.

Thnx a lot dear, glad it was was covyeyed as i wanted:) thnx for the lovely words. yes, CVs fail to show Piyas confsuion and hepless situatiuon in all this cinrucmstances. her feelings areunderrated unfortunatly.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: rumi005

Wow!!! Such a nice post !!! 👏

Keep writing more dear. 👍🏼

Thnx a lot Dear, will sure try too😊

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Posted: 14 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: -monus-
This was heart-feelt. One could tell you felt Pia while writing it. The mom involvment made it even more powerful.Beautifully penned down sweety. loved the neutral view to circumstances. Glad to be tipped by my friend to read it:) keep it up.

Flattered, glad i could put through my thaught successfully. yes, ts usually hard to have a neural viwe on whats happening, its sad. glad u enjoyed it.