Noone can take u away..os updt pg 2 - Page 2

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey Palak Superb OS 👍🏼..I watch PKYEK regularly so I know the scene which u wrote Pia n Sid convo N chand n abhay Ring talk etc....I also want Abhay 2 save Piya from Sid but PKYEK mein when n how it will happen who knows?.................So I am really excited 2 read how u Palak dear make abhay save piya from Sid bad intentions...Kya Pata Ur Idea Match kar jaye PKYEK ki future story sey😉😊.....So Do continue soon .......N thanks 4 pm..... n pm me when U update......
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Pia came back from hostel to be stopped by abhay...

abhay--where were u pia?
pia--thats none of ur business mr raichand...
abhay--yes u r rite..y the hell shld i be bothered abt u?who d hell r u for me?

pia had seen an emotional abhay for the first time sho she asked him with concern..

kya hua abhay?tum itne preshaan kyon ho?
pareshaan nai hoon to kya karooon pia?maine bahut koshish kii ki main tumhe sid se door rakhoo par main jitna tumhe usse door rehne ke liye bolta hoon tum or hi uske kareeb chali jaati ho...

pua..parr abhay..sid se kya problem hai?

tum sacch jaana chahhti ho naa?to suno...SID MERA BHAI HAIN..WOH EK VAMPIRE HAIN...and he closed his eyes knowing that this wld make him pay bt he had to tell her the truth and soo he did..

pia was hell shocked..she didnt believe him..she thot that maybe he wanted to keep her away from him that is why he was lying...

tum kya bol rahe ho abhay?

pia main jaanta hoon ki tum meri baat ka yakeeen naii karogi par yahi sach hain..ye jung 100 saalo se chali aa rahi hain..hum dono ek doosro ke jaan the jo ek dusre ke liye jaan de bhi sakte the or jaan le bhi sakte the..or agar hum alag hue toh sirf maithili ke kaaran..woh bhi maithili se pyaar karta htha..maithili mujhse pyaar karti thi..woh baar baar koshish karta tha ki mathili mujhse door ho jaaye par woh mere aur kareeb aa jaati..jab maithili aag me ja;l rahi thi toh usse bachaane sirf main hi nahin sid bhi pahuch gaya tha..aur usne apne jaan kho diye..tabhi ek nayii zindagi mili..zinda laashon ki,vapires ki..


pia was now syre that abhay was lying as he woudnt lie when it came to maithili..she humbly asked ki kyaa reason hain abhay ki ab woh mujhse badla lena chaahta hain???


abhay((in his mind))--pia main tumse bahut pyaar karta hoon aur woh mujhe waapis todna chaahta hain..par main tumhe ye kaise bataoo...


abhay---pia.maine tumhe itna bata diya kya woh tumhare liye kaafi nai hain?

pia--abhay..plz batao aa..
abhay--pia mujhse wada karo ki tum sid se naii milogi..

Unaware,they both wre talkin in presence of sid who wasfuming in anger and noww said THE WAR BEGINS...


hope u liked this part 2..i m llil busy soo cldnt updt a long 1...will try to finish it by tomorrow..plz comment and let me noe ur reviews..

LOVE
PALAK😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#13
yehh!!!!!!!
M d first one who read d os yipee!!!!!!!
Palak thnx for updting dear,i ws missing d os a lot dear nd finally updt.
m so glad .
d part ws extremly outstanding.
totaly luvd it.
superb,mindblwing.
awsm yar.
plz cnt wid nxt part of dis os,plz cant w8 to read nxt updt.
so plz cnt soon.
luv u
vritika
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Posted: 14 years ago
#14
Nice part. I liked it. So, abhay revealed the thruth to pia. Thats very nice. Do cont soon. Thanks for pm.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey both d parts were really gud...plzz update soon ha 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey Palak it was very nice Os i liked it too much but i dont follow PKYEK so have no idea abt current story .....actually after MJHT i dont watch any of the show frm star one ........thnx for the pm n whn ever u update do pm me ok .....
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Posted: 14 years ago
#17
Nice part.. I loved it.. Wish d same would tak place in d show.. Do continue soon.. n thanx for d pm..lol.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#18
Hey Palak Awesome and superb update ..loved it totally👏👏.....I hope in PKYEK also Abhay tells Piya about Sid soon...really excited 2 know what will happen next in your OS..So plss Do update soon and thanks 4 pm....

Love Gunjan😊.....
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Posted: 14 years ago
#19
Hey palak,
awesummmmmmmmmmmmmm update..........
wen will this Sid go away from thier lives......????
hate him.......plzzzzzzz abhay confess soon...........
kaash aisa show me bhi ho.........
& y such a short update????
ab commnt bhi chota hi milega........
jaldi update karo........
cnt wait 2 see wat happens next........

CONTINUE SOON
UPDATE ASAP
THNX 4 THE PM & DNT 4GET 2 PM ME.........

w8ing eagerly 4 nxt update.........do cont soon........😊

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