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Neetz

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Posted: 14 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: beb018
hey
that was awsum keep writing👍🏼

Thank you so much! 😳

Originally posted by: sanjna4
thats toooooo gud u put ur heart out in terms of piya's thoughts
u penned down her feelings perfectly
its awesome

Aww!! Thank you so much! I'm glad you like it! 😃

Originally posted by: abhaylove
Love how you portray piya ..she already started thinking in that direction . She do find abhay behaviour different when it comes to sid and yes she finds abhay is hiding again .
Hope abhay really trust her and tell the truth but as sid said if piya finds sid is vampire ..then he is not going to hide himself behind the good look . Wonder what abhay should do ....but again in end truth will def keep her on safer side .
Loved the way u always pen down about piya thought ( read earlier too) . Awesome writting

Actually, I will no longer blame Abhay for not telling her because here it is not about trust now, it's about Abhay's fear that Sid will carry out his threat. Abhay should've told her earlier. Sid is the master of this game and Abhay needs to pull up his socks to beat him. I'm sure he will. Abhay has promised himself that he will not let Sid get away this time <33

Originally posted by: hreeyaa
awesome🤗

Thank you sooo much, Ria! 🤗

I'm so glad you liked it! 😳

Originally posted by: Angel_voice
Beautiful post Chillz
keep writing..👏.

Thank you, Anjali! That means a lot 😊

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Neetz

@.Jane..

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Posted: 14 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: -Arti4ever-
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dolzieeeeeeee 🤗 ....loved it <333 🤗 loved the way u penned down the story...u wrote really well...the story was all about piya and her POV ....luved the way u described her feelings towards abhay .....it was beautifully written 👏....piya is really confused what is happening with her life....why is abhay behaving so strangely....there must be many questions in her mind....whose answers she want to know....she really wants to know that what is the connection between abhay and sid....hope she gets out of this complication soon.....and i really loved it <3333.....didn't knew that my frnd is amazing writer😃.... luv yaa 🤗

Jennnyyyyyyyyy!! 🤗

Omg, thank you so much! That is so sweet of you!! Looks like Pia is born to be fasoed in complications, poor chick! 🤣 🤣

Let's see how she gets out of this one.

Aww! I'm not an amazing writer. It ain't that great but thank you soooo much!! Your comment is so much appreciated!! Love you, Jaan!! ❤️

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Neetz

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Posted: 14 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Anamika1570
Was it Pia Abhay raised his hands at? I doubt... I think it was Siddharth whom he wanted to punch and not Pia. Anyways, Nice one!

It was definitely Pia. He was looking at her and his fist was also going there. And the banner also flashed that. But to tell you the truth, had Sid not stopped him, I think he would've stopped himself. He cannot hurt a fly, I refuse to believe he can hit Pia.

@Sharmi: Sure, sweets! Take your time! Study well for the exams. All the best! Tc Love youu! 🤗

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Posted: 14 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: Chill_Out
Jennnyyyyyyyyy!! 🤗
Omg, thank you so much! That is so sweet of you!! Looks like Pia is born to be fasoed in complications, poor chick! 🤣 🤣
i seriously agree with this one 🤣poor babyyy🤣
Let's see how she gets out of this one.
yah 😃 HOPE she sort out everything soon😃
Aww! I'm not an amazing writer. It ain't that great but thank you soooo much!! Your comment is so much appreciated!! Love you, Jaan!! ❤️
u are dolzieeeeeee😳luv you 2❤️...🤗

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Neetz

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Posted: 14 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: -Arti4ever-

IKR?? Aur ab toh precap dekh kar lagta hai Pia will go mad only 😆 😆 😆

Gosh! This whole jail track better be worth it! 😳

Awwiee!! Thanks, Jenz! You're the best! 🤗

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Posted: 14 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: Chill_Out

IKR?? Aur ab toh precap dekh kar lagta hai Pia will go mad only 😆 😆 😆
Gosh! This whole jail track better be worth it! 😳
agree maddy pia 😆..yah want some nice scenes😳

Awwiee!! Thanks, Jenz! You're the best! 🤗
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Neetz

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Posted: 14 years ago

#17

Trust me, Jenz, I'll do anything for a good, proper and sensible AbhIya scene, where Abhay is actually explaining at least something which makes sense to Pia. She has no idea what's going on around her! More than romantic, I want their scene to be sensible 😳

Edited by Chill_Out - 14 years ago

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@Jenny..

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Posted: 14 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: Chill_Out
Trust me, Jenz, I'll do anything for a good, proper and sinsible AbhIya scene, where Abhay is actually explaining at least something which makes sense to Pia. She has no idea what's going on around her! More than romantic, I want their scene to be sensible 😳

i agree yaar want some meaningful scenes yaar not only intense scenes and fights😳

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Neetz

@.Jane..

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Posted: 14 years ago

#19

Exactly, Jenzz!! I'm sick and tired of fights and their romance should make sense! No offense, their phone conversation went over my head today! =/

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ffkhan

@ffkhan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#20

oops! I am a bit late. Spot reserved.😃

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