Abhay-Piya FF: And I will be waiting.Book 1 Ended. - Page 86

Originally posted by: tantrums..

true piya and sam's relationship is so beautiful potrayed..... sam does not hate abhay we all know that his goal of possessing abhay is for safety of his clan that too if he had any other choice he wud hav nvr let abhay die...... piya's love for abhay is so well shown.......... (though i missed abhay but his name btw lines was enough) god abhay ....whr the hell did he go?? better he comme again else if not sam thn atleast m gonna kill him!!

anushka and kabir scene was great as weel................lets wait to know wht exactly made anushka run...........??

Originally posted by: morningstar

T is really confusing me....... you are saying that T will do something that would emotionally affect Sam!!!!! affect him enough to harm his bonding with Misha???? thats very weird...... i mean, i thought T was just feinting with him and Sam will sooner or later come to know of it !!!!!!

anyway, i think you should devolop on Daksh's character more because if he is supposed to become an important character later you need to focus on him more before the readers forget about him!!!!!!!!! same goes for the plot of the Czen-Bolshv trio!!!!!

You are gifted girl........

Originally posted by: kavita.patel

Fab Updt Poco😃

Poor Anushka...Natasha is ruthless and cruel, to watch someone wither in pain like that😡 Unknownlingly Kabir has given Natasha and gang a weapon in their hand with the knowledge of Anushka's curse that could eventually prove fatal to the Czens in the long run.

Natasha is cold-blooded - no feelings , no goodness and no weaknesses. That is why she is the most trusted agent of the majesty. Kabir's innocent prank is going to put not only Anushka's life in jeopardy but much more once Maithli comes to know of Anushka's weakness.


Chand-Haseena convo...Vampire Slayers to complete the supernatural ring...things are definitely heating up....the entry of Daksh's family...interesting. I love the way you have pulled everything together....love it😳

Thank you.😳 Once the slayers arrive, Czens and Bolshies will need to protect each-other and unite . But trusting Bolshies is as bad as falling on an axe knowingly. 😆

BTW you said we would see Abhay in this updt...I miss him. Where has he run off to? I cant imagine the internal turmoil he is going through. To give yourself up once again to love, to feelings, to emotions, and that to the same face that betrayed him long ago even though it is a different person all together. 😉

This part was important to clear the overall structure of the story. Abhay-Piya, Sam, Misha and T will be back in the next part. 😊....Sam knows where Abhay is and he will find him.

Sorry for not commenting more often. Cant wait for your next.😊

Originally posted by: AbhiYa_luver

Great chappie! I can't wait for the next part, hopefully where we Abhay!

You're right, this is low! Didn't you say she was going to sell this secret to Mailthli? Oh, how I hate Natasha! 😡 Ok, so the supernatural ring is going to be completed by a vampire slaying family. Is it going to be Daksh's family? And the Bolshes need the Czens to kill the werewolves. I bet that Abhay and Piya are going to side with the werewolves, and possibly ChandEena, since Sam has done so much for them. Is there going to be a DaNcchi? Pancchi needs someone to be with after waht happened with Danish! 😃

Originally posted by: Pocahontas

- he is just going to have one weakness that will totally break him

Originally posted by: Pocahontas

Guys, as the updates happen, you will get your answers. 🤗