Abhay-Piya FF: And I will be waiting.Book 1 Ended. - Page 11

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TheBlackJaguar thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: jenny1000

Nitzi, when's the next part?


Today- by 5pm IST. 😃
.Jane.. thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
Enter the werewolves!! Wow, Poco!! Amazing!! Abhay has been blessed with the power to control thirst?? Thats nice. That means he hasn't killed a human yet! And the werewolves are responsible for Maithili's death or disappearance. If they haven't killed Maithili then surely she'll be back to ruin AbhIya's love life!(not that there is one yet).
I think the werewolves will see Piya, think that Maithili escaped and try to harm her! Then Abhay will be the "angel" as usual😍
Poco! Poco! Pocoooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!🤗

P.S. Ekta Maiyya ki jai!! Please take Nidiz's advice and hire Poco now!! The trps will surely touch 4-5!!😃
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Posted: 14 years ago

Kabir is sitting in the college cafeteria , playing with his pen on paper and he appears rather oblivious to his surroundings. Misha spots him and comes over. She gets an idea and puts her palm in front of him. Kabir looks up.

Kabir ( rolls his eyes)- Chhutkaa, what do you think you are doing?

Misha ( dramatically )- I am asking you for your autograph , sir.

Kabir – Autograph?

Misha ( fluttering her eyelashes at him)- Yes, after all, I just found out from your sunken pumpkin face that Sanjay Leela Bhansali has signed you for his next film as the ultimate tragedy hero!

Kabir ( laughs and shakes his head )- You are INSANE!....

Misha ( sighs and sits next to him)- Finally, you smiled! …Now,tell me what 's up with this retro Devdas mood? T refused to sing Titanic with you?

Kabir – Ya, right! Mine and T's Titanic sunk long ago…. It's about Piya.

Misha ( makes a face)- Kabir , relax. Give Piya sometime. Your proposal was out of the blue and she ….she is still coming to grips with her feelings for you….

Kabir ( tosses his pen aside)- Well, the issue is not that she is taking time, Mish!.... the issue is that whether she has feelings for me at all?.....( shrugs his shoulders)…..i mean, we are great friends and we adore each-other….but….Piya's eyes….they never seem to warm up to me…

Misha – Okay, I will tell her not tp keep her eyes in the freezer when she goes to sleep.

Kabir just shakes his head and just then , they see Anushka coming towards them. They straighten up…

Misha ( whispers to Kabir )- Here comes Lady Godzilla….i am sure Abhay told her to bite our necks off.

Kabir ( looking at Anushka )- Chill. She maybe his friend but she appears more civilized than him. Be nice to her. We are good people. Remember that.

Anushka comes to them with a big smile.

Anushka ( hesitantly )- Hi!.....Ummm…we didn't get introduced to each-other by Abhay….I am Anushka. I am joining from today. Could you help me with the way to the accounts office? I need to deposit my fee cheque.

Misha ( jokes )- Abhay didn't tell you?...Ooops, he doesn't need to pay fee. He owns the college and the management , right?

Kabir nudges her to keep shut but Anushka maintains her calm.

Anushka ( smiles )- You don't seem to like Abhay very much. Not your fault. 99% people he meets don't like him…. Accounts office?

Kabir ( apologetic )- Don't mind Mish. She just kids too much. Come, I will take you to the accounts office….

Giving Misha a strict look, Kabir takes Anushka to the accounts office and Misha just sticks out her tongue at both of them.

As Misha turns around , she trips on her own feet and falls down.

Misha ( squeals)- Oucch! Premature ageing! Can't even walk on my own feet….

As she is brushing the dirt off her elbows , she sees multiple pair of feet approach her. She slowly looks up and finds a bunch of young men standing over her head. Right ahead of them , stands a boyishly good-looking guy with brilliant grey eyes. He is smiling at her with a half smile and he gives her his hand to help her get up.

Boy ( looking at the spread of books around her)- So, who do I help up first? You? Or the books?

Misha just looks at him, blinking her doe eyes….

TO BE CONTINUED………..

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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG! Just loving it! 😃
i can already sense two couples in making but....i dont see a happy ending lol but hey its ur story so im sure its going to be great 😳😳
update sooon n please a longer one😳....this one was too short!😒
Edited by sugaryanu - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hmmm....so its Kabir-Anushka and Sam-Mish😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG. Awesome update, Pocz! 🤗

Couples in the making, hmm? Yay! A girl for Kabir! And double yay - A guy for Misha!

If you ever made a soap, Pocz, it would be super duper hit. You know exactly what we want. ;]

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Posted: 14 years ago
part on page 11

Superb part!!:)
Abhay's emotions were well decribed
RapChick101 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
Parts on page 12

FAB!!<3
really loved Abhay again:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
part on page 14

AWESOME!
Totall LOVED Mish and Kabir!!<3
Anushka seems sweeter than Abhay is!:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
Poca..
I lyked it..so I see the new story is blossoming..but where will it lead to..the mystery still continues..can't wait to read more..!!
We shuld open a discussion post for this..O.S..

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