AarYA FF: Rooted Within (Torn) - Epilogue, pg 63

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ksen

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Posted: 8 years ago

#421

well written update

yash and aarti's feelings and emotions are penned down wonderfully

did prashanth really kidnap aarti

hope he is doing it with good intentions

wish this separation makes aarti to come out of her shell

looking forward for the next part

thanks for the pm

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SillySoni

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Posted: 8 years ago

#422

Yaar my mood is off after reading how bitch aarti n her so called dog prashu 😡 enjoy a peaceful life when all her family n Yash not at all happy, I never seen a selfish girl like her who only saw her pain, I know she have pain losing her loves one but now she is making feel disgust on how she not seeing anyone around her.

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Tessaloni

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Posted: 8 years ago

#423

Originally posted by: Sharlene1410
Did that dog Prashant kidnap Aarti?? I want Yash to Kill Him
Aarti is such a fool not to recognize the love Yash is giving her maybe this kidnapping is good let her realize what a selfish bitch was is being, by distancing herself from her love ones.

thanks Didi, you will have to read to find out what Prashant's motives are. I will update soon. 😊

Edited by Tessaloni - 8 years ago

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Tessaloni

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Posted: 8 years ago

#424

Originally posted by: AisiDeewangi
Awesome update dear
Very well written
Thanks for pm

😊 thanks you Aisi, I am glad you enjoyed the update. no thanks needed for them PM though...

Edited by Tessaloni - 8 years ago

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Tessaloni

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Posted: 8 years ago

#425

Originally posted by: VICKY126
Oh My! Aarti has been kidnapped.i hope she won't get hurt and she also has to realize her folly in distancing herself from her husband and family.Thanks for the pm

thanks Vicky, let's see how she how this will change her mind about her conduct; she may just realize her folly as you said. 😊

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Tessaloni

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Posted: 8 years ago

#426

Originally posted by: sass8
Yash irritation is kind of funny especially regarding Ansh, I get that he feel possessive over the little boy after all he has been taking care of him since birth and how dare the little guy enjoy his annoying cousin..😆 who is tauting him too. And to add insult to injury hie family dare see the good in their relation. Yep any man would lose his mind as was the case in the end.

Anyway back to Aarti.😕 She is in phase: escapism now. Prashant is the only one not associated with pain so of course Aarti would feel relax around him for a while. And Yash is now in a quandary, he want to get close to his wife but at the same time realizing that he is also at the root of the problem. He started the event that led to Aarti current frame of mind. Yes she would have still feel tremendous pain at losing her dear sister but she would have take comfort in Yash if he had behave like a normal husband instead of one bent on revenge. Nope still have not forgiven him, even with the tears but okay I'll eventually get there 😛 after all he is including the Sharma and that give him some points. Anyway what a sad state they both are in, unable to communicate despite the pain and they are feeling and longing because so much has happened. One thing is sure something has to be done.
Oh oh a mystery😲. I wonder where Aarti is. So weird that Prashant did not mentioned their earlier whereabouts. Yash is going to go crazy if she doesn't come back soon.

true, I also find his jealousy endearing and how Aarti is keeping him on his toes because she knows exactly how he must be feeling 😆. as usual you are spot of about Aarti's motivations and why she would not completely trust Yash with her heart; once bitten twice shy after all.

thanks Madam Sauce 😊

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Tessaloni

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Posted: 8 years ago

#427

Originally posted by: enthusiastic
superb update dear
loved itt soo much
excited for what happen next
pls update soon...

I am glad to know that you loved the update dear, thanks for reading 😊. I will update soonest!

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Tessaloni

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Posted: 8 years ago

#428

Originally posted by: ksen
well written update
yash and aarti's feelings and emotions are penned down wonderfully
did prashanth really kidnap aarti
hope he is doing it with good intentions
wish this separation makes aarti to come out of her shell
looking forward for the next part
thanks for the pm

thanks ksen dear 😊. distance does indeed make the heart grow fonder so Aarti might have to reconsider a lot of things 😆. I won't comment much on Prashant, you will have to read and see what he is up to.

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Tessaloni

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Posted: 8 years ago

#429

Originally posted by: SoniyaLovesGc
Yaar my mood is off after reading how bitch aarti n her so called dog prashu 😡 enjoy a peaceful life when all her family n Yash not at all happy, I never seen a selfish girl like her who only saw her pain, I know she have pain losing her loves one but now she is making feel disgust on how she not seeing anyone around her.

thanks Soni 😊. apologies for ruining your mood but I like to tap into characters' emotions in my stories and things are never simple when emotions of pain, deceit, and heartache are involved, not even happiness is straight forward. but yes, I will update soon and the story is nearing its end...