AarYA FF: Rooted Within (Torn) - Epilogue, pg 63

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Posted: 8 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: Fandu
Hi Tessa first of all a great Big Thank You for posting your SS. I am very very greatful to you and the members of the CCC who encouraged you to post this. Otherwise we would have missed on another incredible story full of intrigue, thrill, and mixed emotions. I could sense there was something fishy when Yash wanted to not reveal his identity and he had refused Arpita and wanted to only marry Arti. I could feel there was something underlying in his attention towards Arti. I really feel for Arti right now and hope that she does not cower to the Sincindia's. I hope she will stay strong and take this up as a challenge and prove to them that what they are doing is not right. How could she be responsible to what happened to Vidhi. I am not too sure whether the Sharma's and Arpita are in on this with the Sicindia's or they were naive like Arti about Yash and his family. Can't wait for the next update. An awesome start. Again thank you.

thank you so much Fandu for these beautiful words of praise and encouragement! I truly appreciate them a lot! 🤗

you have very valid questions about the characters but I can't answer any of them at this stage as the plot is centered around them. I am glad though that yo picked up that not all was sunshine and roses... I just wanted to hint at what was coming yet not be overt about it so that the ending paragraphs would still come as a shock...

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Posted: 8 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: ksen
amazing start
yash married aarti for revenge
wonder what happened in the past
hope yash realises his mistake soon and repents for it
poor aarti, felt bad for her, hope she overcomes this strongly
looking forward for the next part
thanks for the pm

thank you Ksen 😃 you will find out what happened in the past as the plot thickens, as for Yash repenting that will definitely take time...

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Tessaloni

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Posted: 8 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: premap
A fab start ! Good concept Marrying Aarti to take revenge for his sister's 'depressive maniac' is not a deed done by a real 'man' !!!!! Yash has taken the 'wrong road' for his revenge . Aarti should be given a fair chance !

thanks Premap 😃. yes Yash has taken the wrong path but one is not always rational when emotions are involved and only learn the hard way...

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Posted: 8 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: SoniyaLovesGc
Awesome one
Yash meet aarti on arpita marriege,AarYa got married,yash did marry aarti for revenge,poor vidhi what pankaj did with her,I didn't think that all yash care and love is only for revenge,I thinks he really love aarti but his revenge over power his love.
Update soon

thanks Soniya 😃 yep, you absolutely read Yash's character correctly. he loves her but he is sticking to his reasons for marrying her... how long will he keep it up? 😉

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Posted: 8 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: surili1
I totally agree with you Bee. It's one of my favourites as well 😊

thank you Suri Su 🤗

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Tessaloni

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Posted: 8 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: annirogc
Interesting start. Waiting for more

thank you anni manni, will update soon 😃

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Posted: 8 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: sass8

😊 Ditto on the posting.
And it all started so well, too well of course😕. Should I've know it was too good to remain happy. This is interesting, actually intriguing.
I like the premise, it does lull the reader into a false sense of warm, with Rahul and Rahda wonderful warm and love for all their children, Arpita happy weeding. However, they are still clues along the way of something to come but not to this degree. Two people meet, fell in love and the natural course is to get together, make it work but then the bomb. Midway reading it, I felt that Aarti got to easily swept from mistrust to submitting to him and I was expected Yash to remain standoffish or cold a little more. He actually intrigues me more with his behavior, though I needed to know more about his background. And then the shocking end.😭. The awful, cruel welcome by Yash family and the revelation that Aarti family is responsible for Vidhi states. A dark pit indeed.
Oh yeah, the asshole cheated her of a lavish weeding, ugh😡 in the name of revenge, Hope he ate is words back at some point.

thank you Sassie Sauce for giving into my demands and always supporting me! 🤗

to answer your question about why Aarti did not dwell on her doubts, it's because Yash was chosen by the people she loved and accepted as her parents so she put her doubts aside and trusted their judgement. and yes, I know all too well that this Yash is not your fav at all 😆 he set out to ruin her life so what did he care about cheating her out of a lavish wedding?

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Posted: 8 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: SAI92
congrats for New SS .like the story

thank you Sai, will update soon 😃

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Posted: 8 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: VICKY126
very intriguing.eager to know what will happen next.update soon pls 👍🏼

first of all welcome to my world of AarYa! 🤗

thank you so much for breaking your silence and commenting Vicky! I appreciate your support a lot! I always saw your name in the likes so I know you've always read my work, thank you for that. now that you have broken your silence, please keep on commenting not only for my stories, but for the rest of our talented writers also. it really means a lot as writers when we have your support.

I will update shortly 😃

Edited by Tessaloni - 8 years ago