AarYA FF: Rooted Within (Torn) - Epilogue, pg 63 - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi Tessa first of all a great Big Thank You for posting your SS. I am very very greatful to you and the members of the CCC who encouraged you to post this. Otherwise we would have missed on another incredible story full of intrigue, thrill, and mixed emotions. I could sense there was something fishy when Yash wanted to not reveal his identity and he had refused Arpita and wanted to only marry Arti. I could feel there was something underlying in his attention towards Arti. I really feel for Arti right now and hope that she does not cower to the Sincindia's. I hope she will stay strong and take this up as a challenge and prove to them that what they are doing is not right. How could she be responsible to what happened to Vidhi. I am not too sure whether the Sharma's and Arpita are in on this with the Sicindia's or they were naive like Arti about Yash and his family. Can't wait for the next update. An awesome start. Again thank you.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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amazing start
yash married aarti for revenge
wonder what happened in the past
hope yash realises his mistake soon and repents for it
poor aarti, felt bad for her, hope she overcomes this strongly
looking forward for the next part
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
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A fab start ! Good concept Marrying Aarti to take revenge for his sister's 'depressive maniac' is not a deed done by a real 'man' !!!!! Yash has taken the 'wrong road' for his revenge . Aarti should be given a fair chance !
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome one
Yash meet aarti on arpita marriege,AarYa got married,yash did marry aarti for revenge,poor vidhi what pankaj did with her,I didn't think that all yash care and love is only for revenge,I thinks he really love aarti but his revenge over power his love.
Update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: B-onesie

I am so pleased that you decided to post. This is really one your best so far. After my favourite of course.

I totally agree with you Bee. It's one of my favourites as well 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Interesting start. Waiting for more
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Posted: 8 years ago
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😊 Ditto on the posting.

And it all started so well, too well of coursešŸ˜•. Should I've know it was too good to remain happy. This is interesting, actually intriguing.

I like the premise, it does lull the reader into a false sense of warm, with Rahul and Rahda wonderful warm and love for all their children, Arpita happy weeding. However, they are still clues along the way of something to come but not to this degree. Two people meet, fell in love and the natural course is to get together, make it work but then the bomb. Midway reading it, I felt that Aarti got to easily swept from mistrust to submitting to him and I was expected Yash to remain standoffish or cold a little more. He actually intrigues me more with his behavior, though I needed to know more about his background. And then the shocking end.😭. The awful, cruel welcome by Yash family and the revelation that Aarti family is responsible for Vidhi states. A dark pit indeed.

Oh yeah, the asshole cheated her of a lavish weeding, ugh😔 in the name of revenge, Hope he ate is words back at some point.

Edited by sass8 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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congrats for New SS .like the story
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Posted: 8 years ago
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very intriguing.eager to know what will happen next.update soon pls [:Y:]
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Superb update...
Aarthi lost her dream of her love, her parents oh the list goes on...
Waiting for the next update...

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