AarYA FF: Rooted Within (Torn) - Epilogue, pg 63 - Page 6

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Posted: 8 years ago
#51
brilliant update
good that aarti is able to drive yash away from his home
now that arpita is here hope some past is revealed
looking forward for the next part
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Aarti is so confident and yash is so cruel .hope soon Vidhi make her family see the sense not to punish Aarti for Aarti family mistakes.i hope Arpita able to findout Aarti miserable state soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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A great update! It is good to see that Arti is able to keep her?spirits up despite receiving the mistreatment from the Sicindias. I am also happy that she has affected Yash by messing his head. Underneath all that strong armour he can't deny loving her. It appears that at least Arpita may not be involved in the Sicindia scheme. Hopefully she will be able to help free Arti from this ordeal in her life. Looking forward to the next update. Thank you.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#54
I hate it that after what that bloody yash did to her aarti still love him yuck 🤢
I understand whatever happened to vidhi wasn't good
but what sindhia doing to her isn't anything right 😔
aarti doing everything without any complain that's really horrible 🤢
she didn't even let sharma knows abt what sindhia doing to her
im sure if yash realize his mistake & ask forgiveness from her she will just jump in it like stupid
now lets see what arpita will do?
I doubt aarti will send arpita back will continue her serve to those bloody sindhia
continue plz
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: premap

Lovely update ! 'Rain or Shine' Aarti is able to withstand all the 'tortures' of Scindia ! This is SUPERB ! Instead of 'mopping' around ,with a gloomy face, Aarti has a cheerful attitude to all the 'miseries' meted out by Yash and his F*Ly . Yash has become an 'emotional fool' [ self imposed] for thinking with his 'Heart ' instead of using his 'Grey matter' [Brain ! ] . Thanks for this wonderful update.

thanks Premap 😊 Yash's attitude will become clearer as the stories progresses. as for Aarti, she has been through a lot already which made her quite strong to handle most things so yes for now she is taking this challenge in her stride.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: SoniyaLovesGc

Fabulous update

I love that Aarti is not a cry baby,Yash family treating Aarti badly,loved Aarti and vidhi bonding, she didn't tell her family about Yash revenge,Yash hurting aarti and now arpita come to meet Aarti and she looking really angry on Yash.
Update soon


thanks Soniya 😊 yes Arpita is very protective of her because they are best friends so Yash will have to be careful with her around. I also love the bonding of Aarti and Vidhi. and yes Aarti is a strong woman because she has been through a lot.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sharlene1410


Thanks Tessie Poo šŸ˜† šŸ¤—
Read the second part loved it also ā­ļø

thanks Didi, am happy you like the story thus far 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jodhu

I know I am yet to comment on DIM updates but unfortunately I have to catch up with the last 3-4 updates which is still due. So sorry for that.

Read both the chapters in one go. I have almost figured out the outline of this new ss which is undoubtedly awsm with the typical Tessa's stamp- thrilling, twisted yet with undercurrent of romance and passion in it. But still, I wish my guesses to be proven wrong as you explore this further.
The updates reminded me of the spl period fiction that I dedicated for u and jhilly where Yash lures Mitra into the hell of marriage pretending to love her, for his revenge.
Much as I love this story, I also pray that we both don't end up with the same story set in different periods.
You know I so hate the fact that " Great minds think alike. " when it comes to writing our fictions here. If one posts earlier than the other, the second one seems like a copy and you well know who is the second here.
You might as well remember even Nikki di was skeptical about posting " Shadows of the past" because the outline resembled my Rhythm.
Anyways, I rambled about all nonsense except about the update about which I am sure that this hatred-blinded man is gonna pay big time for his atrocities. There can't be a bigger sin than to abuse a woman for no fault of hers and that too by playing with her feelings. Now that Arpita is here, I am desperate to know what explanation these vultures have up their sleeve for her question.
Since Arpita has already grown suspicions on Aarti's marital life, it would be more thrilling to see what might happen if her hunch about Aarti being unhappy is proven true.

thanks Dhu-Dhu. it's alright you can comment when you have time for DIM.

yes as writers of the same genre, there are not a lot of unique concepts around, even Nikki Didu's DV concept is centered on revenge. But I definitely did not copy from you, I have been writing this since Nov last year but only just posted. But we each have our own style and execution so you needn't fear that our stories would be the same. and I am definitely eager to read yours when you can post.

yes they definitely will try explaining but Arpita knows Aarti quite well and will know right away that she is lying so let's see how they will handle this.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: SemiSame

Ooh wow I've words.I'm lyk omg aarti my idol ryt now and ofcz after the author

awww thanks Semi, may I call you Semi? I am very happy to hear you're enjoying the story, and thanks also for making me blush with your praise ā˜ŗļø
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: VICKY126

interesting story.Aarti refused to be daunted despite the maltreatment she recieved.thank God Aarpita finally knows what her sis is going through.thanks for updating.Looking forward to the next update.

thanks Vicky 😊 yes it takes a lot to remain strong but Aarti is definitely doing her best not to show her pain. she is trying to love them so they have no choice but to love her. let's see if she can keep it up. Arpita knows, she suspected something was wrong and that's why she showed up unannounced...

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