P V Os - Coffee Crush - Page 2

Originally posted by: Tessaloni

so if it's good, which I know it is, the credit comes too me too! 😛 how amazing! Well by all means bring on the good reviews so I can glow from all the praises! 😆

Originally posted by: chikcyy

Now, I'm in love with coffee. Lovely OS. I literally had tears in my eyes when I thought Aarti was the bride. Great job 👍🏼

Originally posted by: surili1

I loved it :) awesome awesome!!!!

Originally posted by: BusiMusi

Awesome Os i loved it but to tell you the honest truth am not sure i love the title more or the Os am confuse i need coffee.

Originally posted by: B-onesie

You sound like Tun Tun Singh🤣

Originally posted by: Tessaloni

🤣 well you're responsible for that!

All got responses for reviews except for me 😭

Originally posted by: B-onesie

because I didn't know there was a comment

What an beautiful, original OS inspired by probably the most drank beverage around the world : coffee 👍🏼

I smiled at the fact that Yash thought that Aarti was the bride from the beginning , Shoba never said she was , she just introduced her as her daughter. I really liked Aarti spirit, calm collected and confident.

And Yash , if it wasn't for the business pressure he surely would have been more forthcoming but he had a deal to secure although he couldn't resist her. How funny that she too didn't realize that he thought she was not the one getting engaged.

It was fitting to get the proposal with coffee, the dring has been the catalysis for this relationship, who knew that coffee could be so important. And Aarti, indignation 😲when all was revealed, but all was resolved in the end. The coming together was realistic and commitment only improved with time. I thoroughly enjoyed this one. 👏

Originally posted by: Tessaloni

Edited!

Firstly, punishment carried out excellently!! 👏 If this is how you atone, then by all means transgress more often so I can punish you more! I told you nuh, I LOVED it! Dunno why you're so insecure about it.

Coming to the OS! I loved most how all their moments were marked with coffee messages. Coffee got spilled when he first walked into her signalling how their attraction would shift their worlds. Falling in love is messy just like his assumption that she was the bride and unwittingly making her feel rejected. Yet during that first encounter she read him so easily which signalled how connected they would become. It showed her good nature and led to him noticing her. Still it also showed that she instinctively knew his behaviour did not reflect his true nature. Yash noticed her too, but he also saw her goodness. Despite his rudeness she took it upon herself to cheer him up, she managed to relax him and set him up for a good day with a smily coffee which mimicked her nature.

Aarti was understandably indignant upong learning the cause of his rejection. The way he proposed and apologized was just too cute, she had to forgive him, especially because she loves him. Then she becomes impatient to be his, at her in-laws no less.

Loved her bond with Aaman. He saw how she felt for him and therefore helped Yash take the next step. Always looking out for her.

Finally they married and encountered bliss, a different kind of "coffee." goodness me! Yash wants it at the office too and abuses his power for it, although she pretends to resist, she wants it too! 😆

the last scene just showed how far they've come and still coffee plays an intergral part in their lives; it will keep doing so forever. Indeed a coffee crush turned coffee love for all time!

A beautiful love story Honey-Bee!

Loved it thoroughly! ❤️

Originally posted by: B-onesie

Well at least you enjoyed it so it's all good. But really it started off terribly as you well know.

I feel a bit better about the final draft and did give you some "coffee scenes" despite threatening not to😆. I wanted to add an extra scene that puts the Arpita. Aarti and Amaan relationship into perspective but decided against it as an OS doesn't really call for cameo's to be explored in depth. But i like that you get the Amaan Aartu bond, they are as close as two people can be without being in love. They are an integral part of each other and is bonded together as much to each other as to their romantic partners.

I wanted to do a "coffee scene" like i did a jelly bean scene, but Yuck! That would just have been too messy.

And if you have your wife at the office, why not use that opportunity. Especially if you live in a joint family that surely puts a damper on spontaneity at home.

And baby makes 3. Just for the happy ending.

I am going to be watching you like a hawk now and wait for reasons to punish you too. Payback's a ?????