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B-onesie

@B-onesie

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: sass8
This made me smile, 😃

What an beautiful, original OS inspired by probably the most drank beverage around the world : coffee 👍🏼
I smiled at the fact that Yash thought that Aarti was the bride from the beginning , Shoba never said she was , she just introduced her as her daughter. I really liked Aarti spirit, calm collected and confident.
And Yash , if it wasn't for the business pressure he surely would have been more forthcoming but he had a deal to secure although he couldn't resist her. How funny that she too didn't realize that he thought she was not the one getting engaged.
It was fitting to get the proposal with coffee, the dring has been the catalysis for this relationship, who knew that coffee could be so important. And Aarti, indignation 😲when all was revealed, but all was resolved in the end. The coming together was realistic and commitment only improved with time. I thoroughly enjoyed this one. 👏

More inspired by Tess or should I say demanded of😆 But like she said last night anything can get the creative juices flowing. A comment, a beverage, a demand, even a challenge.😆

I started off hating the story but pressed through so i am glad for responses like yours. I am so glad you enjoyed it.😃

Edited by B-onesie - 9 years ago

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cuteariya

@cuteariya

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+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#22

awesome OS
wow aarya first meeting was interesting
loll aarti was flat on yash at first sight 😉
even yash had crush on aarti after she offered him coffee 😉
ouch yash thought it was aarti who getting married
poor aarti tried to get close to yash as she madly fall in love with yash 😊
but yash rejection broke her heart 🥺
on the other hand yash also wasn't in good condition as he also love aarti but couldn't do anything 🥺
bcoz ht thought aarti getting married to aman 😭
wow yash got beautiful surprised as aarti wasn't a bride 😉
yippee finally aarya confess their love for each other 🥳
wow aarya shared their first passionate kiss 😳
loll aarti didn't want to leave yash even for a moment 😉
finally aarya & aman & arpita got married 🥳
wow aarya first night was so passionate 😳
their love bonding got strong day by day 😃
oh wow aarya going to be parents 🥳

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jhil

@jhillyarya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

I think like Yash every readers thought the same, even I was sad from first and was trying to figure out how it will work.. And then bang and trust me my heart was beating fast in happiness. One of the cutest story it is.. Jelly Bean is always my favorite in your OS list and now it gave that tough competition. Just loved every bit of it.. The coffee crush is actually so strong as coffee that it became the strongest lifetime bonding.. SO BEAUTIFUL FOR WORDS. And now my heart want more and more AarYa from you..😳

awesome one.. ⭐️ 👏 👏

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B-onesie

@B-onesie

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Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: jhillyarya
I think like Yash every readers thought the same, even I was sad from first and was trying to figure out how it will work.. And then bang and trust me my heart was beating fast in happiness. One of the cutest story it is.. Jelly Bean is always my favorite in your OS list and now it gave that tough competition. Just loved every bit of it.. The coffee crush is actually so strong as coffee that it became the strongest lifetime bonding.. SO BEAUTIFUL FOR WORDS. And now my heart want more and more AarYa from you..😳

awesome one.. ⭐️ 👏 👏

A comment from Jhilly Bean again, finally. I was starting to think you don;t like my stories any more😕 But so glad you like it. 😳

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jhil

@jhillyarya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: B-onesie
A comment from Jhilly Bean again, finally. I was starting to think you don;t like my stories any more😕 But so glad you like it. 😳

Either you are becoming silly or DQ

Of course i do like your stories, You know i wasn't commenting for any so there is no reason to think like this