AarYa fiction 'Devil's Vengeance' - Chapter - 9, Page - 42 - Page 7

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Special Note



Yes that was Arpita, Aarti's twin sister. Now the questions that arose in everyone's minds are...

1 - If that was Arpita then why did Yash avenge Aarti? He said that he never did anything till he was sure about it. Then how come he was wrong this time? Sure both sisters look alike. But he was looking for Aarti Dubey and not for Arpita Dubey. Whereas Arpita is the one who's done wrong and Aarti doesn't even know Prateek!
How is that possible?


2 - What did Arpita do to Prateek five years back that made Yash so callous and heartless that he avenged her in such a way?
Is he really that heartless?

3 - Had he been planing all these for last Five years?
But he said that he was not sure how he will avenge her. Then why didn't he feel any remorse for using her like this and leaving her pregnant with his own child? Shouldn't he feel anything for that child?

4 - Where is Prateek? What exactly happened to him five years back that he is staying away from home and that made Yash such an Vengeful Devil?

5 - Would he ever feel any remorse, any guilt of what he had done to Aarti and that unborn child?

6 - What about Arpita? If anything indeed happened between her and Prateek then how come Aarti is not aware of it? I mean she's her sister and from the looks of it they are very close to each other. Then why Aarti is not aware of anything? Especially about Prateek?

7 - Who is Prashant and what role will he play in AarYa's and both sisters life?
Well I can tell you that He is a positive character in this story.

There must be many more questions in your mind. Please feel free to ask them as it'll only help me to work better and give you another unforgettable story.

Those who have read MTB, they know that I try my best to cover every loopholes and use every characters mentioned in my stories. That I try my best to give proper justification for actions of every characters and try to redeem them in the best possible way.
In this fiction also I'll try to do the same.

It'll take me some time to work on the third chapter as it'll contain few more twists and shocking revelations.

All the scenes from the first two chapters will be shown again in details in the form of Yash and Aarti's POV and monologues. Those chapters will show their real feelings and many more things in details. But those will start from chapter 4 or 5 as then the story will go in flashback mode.

I hope you'll like this fiction and show me your love and support in the form of your comments or by pressing the Like Button or by doing Both (preferably both).

A small request, Please go easy on Yash. I know he's a Devil right now who's seeking Vengeance from poor Aarti, and you all hate him. I'll try my best to redeem his character and give proper explanation for his crude behavior.

I'll wait for your reviews and your questions.

Love you all

Nikki... 😳





Edited by lovely_nikki - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I will edit once I have collected my thoughts. it really is a long chapter and your additional notes have given me some food for thought too Didu...

I have ample time since you will only resurface on Tuesday 😃

Edited

I think Mr Scindhia bit off a little bit too much than he could chew and now I kind of pity him! Mr Meticulous DDD is actually fallible: his excellent plan actually has a flaw. I think along the way he got emotionally involved. how could he not? Aarti is sweet, intelligent and passionate. she gives herself to him without hesitation and has given her best to him. I sense a bit of hesitation in that firstly, he did no know how to execute his plan, then he comes back and makes love to her knowing full well that it would be the last time he did so, yet he still goes ahead with his vengeance. it was all the more sloppy because he was not prepared to run into Aarti but he must have thought that fate was smiling at him by delivering her right to his doorstep. I am even more curious what exactly Arpita had done to Prateek which festered so much hate within him, it let him deny his own child... is his hate that deep he would be capable of disregarding his own flesh and blood?


Arpita: I think she used Aarti's name instead of her own for some reason at that convention. why else would Yash be looking for Aarti and not Arpita? was she ashamed of what she might have done that she hid it from her sister with whom she is so close? could this one action be coming back to bite her years later through hurting the one person she loves most?


Aarti was all the more vulnerable to Yash because she is an innocent and the ones who could have warned her were both miles away. she fell in love but had to hide it from them and Yash used her vulnerability to his advantage. blinded by love she did not question any of his actions even when they raised red flags, especially when he stayed away so long after knowing she is pregnant and would start to show soon. she loves sincerely and therefore does not see duplicity in others as she expects that same sincerity in turn. now her faith in others has been broken all because of the devil who had it in for her when all she was doing was giving him her best. 😭


Now that Mr Infallible knows he is indeed fallible, let's see how it proceeds! will he admit to his wrong doing and just how will he atone? how will Aarti dare to trust him again? does she want to be with such a vengeful person no matter what his reasons may be? what happens to the innocent life who will be born into this mess?


Didu please, please, please! work on it soon! 😡 😡 😡😛
Edited by Tessaloni - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: B-onesie

Chapter 3 please!!!!

now who is greedy? 🤣
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Posted: 9 years ago
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i want to know whether Arpita is good or bad?
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi Nikki Loved the update⭐️
Nice update i just have question 5 in my mind
I want to know if Aarti will ever forgive Yash and allow him access to his child
i want to know if Aripta will form her own plan for revenge
I want to know what will be his family's reaction to his abuse of the innocent Aarti if they will accept her and her child or would they also lable her as a characterless woman a wh***
i want to see yash beg for forgiveness from Aarti and she not giving in to him too easily
I may be the only one but I don't hate Yash I pity him I consider him an arrogant fool he made a huge blunder of using Aarti for revenge i think some where in his heart he has some form of love for her that he yet has to realize
i want him to have deep pain, sorrow and regret for his mistake.no happiness for him in his miserable life. Yet i don't hate him he was only thinking of his brother whom he loves Knowing the back story of Prateek i may or may not change my mind about Yash
Now it is Aarti's and Aripta's turn to stand up united against him and bring up the baby They should prove that they are strong women
I am being honest i don't care for Prashant even if he is positive I like Suri

I humbly apologize if overstepped in my comment
Edited by Sharlene1410 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tessaloni


now who is greedy?🤣

🤣
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Posted: 9 years ago
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aarti made biggest mistake of her life loving yash
more over giving herself to the monster
aarti never in her worst dream thought that would be happen to her 🥺
now she got pregnant with yash child she was really happy
but her happiness shattered when yash true face come to her 🥺
how disgusting yash is he is such a jerk ass denied his own child 😡
just bcoz Mr yash sindhia thought aarti did wrong to his brother 😡
aarti blindly believe in yash now broke everything 😭
finally truth come out arpita & aarti is twins 😲
now yash know what he did to aarti 😡
hope aarti wont forgive that jerk ass yash 😡
continue plz
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Standing ovation! Nothing like I expected. You were right in warning us not to form any opinions yet. Like Miss B, am on edge waiting for next.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: SAI92

i want to know whether Arpita is good or bad?


I too want to know this
I hope she is good and supports Aarti and don't marry Yash this is the time to show her love for her innocent sister Aarti
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: SAI92

i want to know whether Arpita is good or bad?


For that you'll have to wait as the story proceeds further and unfolds. 😳

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