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Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow another passionate os on the post-Neelam track.so so so amazing.a perfect blend of longing,vulnerability,jealousy,finally merging in to form a beautiful union of 2 souls by a bond of acceptance,passion,possessiveness n pure love.Kudos for a brilliant take on a track that was rarely touched upon by any other writer.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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First of all
Happy Birthday to you Jhil. ❤️

Like Tess said, always wishing well for you. ❤️

Tessa what a beautiful and touching gift for our naughty Jhil. ⭐️


Like I always say, you words straight away touches my heart.

This OS was full of pent up emotions and desires, passions and above all love that they have for each other,

They both were scared to admit it as they both feared of getting their heart broken thinking that they were still in love with their Ex's

But for how long could they control and deny what was in front of them? All they had to do was to reach out and stake their claim,

What I loved the most in this OS is that the person who was adamant of not letting anyone else take place of his Arpita in his life, that a person who had vowed to never fall I love again, is the one who reached out first and claimed his true love.

And oh My! What a way to claim and possess his love! 🤢.
I won't say that of only they had shown something like this in the show.

Why won't I say it? 😉

Cause then they'd had to censor it as they can't show such HOT stuff on national television that also on a family show 🤢. 😆


Once again. 👏

And thanks so much for another beautiful OS. 🤗



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Posted: 9 years ago
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lovely OS
poor aarti was hurt when yash took arpita's name while kissing her 🥺
aarti all her life want love but didn't get 😭
wow aarya kiss was really hot 😳
uff yash was really rude to aarti 😡
finally yash accept his love for aarti 😃
wow aarya first night was really wild passionate 😳
both got to know they r true soulmate to each other 😃
aarya never experience the passion with their previous partners what they felt with each other 😉
at last aarti got the true love in yash 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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🤢 I always knew yashu was da possessive type tht cant stand another having his woman ... be it body mind or soul ... he has to hve all of it ...or nothing at all


Essence of awesomess
tessa dear
loved it

nd ja happy belated B-DAY JILLY
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Tessa another amazing OS. Your captured both of their essence beautifully, loved how both were dying for each and couldn't do it because they guilty of betraying their spouses. Hot hot love making... Really loved it. Thank you for another great pice of work.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing os
Beautifully written
Loved it
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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What can is say about this? It was so awesome.

It was so emotional and so passionate. I felt for Aarti. She loved him so much to the point of enduring his constant rejection. How does one compete with a ghost that has been so romanticised in someone's mind that they refuse to let go and let anyone else in.
She made so many sacrifices for him, supported him in everything and yet he accuses her of trying to take a dead woman's place.
Personally I would have left his behind in that shed to freeze to death 😡
But I liked how you broadened the story. The kiss was so passionate but once again he rejected her and once again she smiled and bore the pain.
And the nerve to accuse her of wanting everything of Arpita's. Those bangles would have gone flying.
And all because he was fighting his own demons. His actions towards her were unforgivable. He was scared of his own feelings. And she bore the brunt of it. As usual he was a tube light 😆 (sorry I can't help but giggle at that word every time) and as usual she forgives too easily.
Finally he could give her what they both wanted. He acknowledged his love to her and to himself. He loves her so much that he fears losing her to her ex-husband. And he loves her because of who she is. No more comparisons to Arpita. No more accusations that she is trying to usurp her position. The truth is out, from both sides, from now on they can love each freely and enjoy how that love manifests. 🤬 They waited long enough 👏 loved it. Happy Birthday again Jhilly
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I am finding lacks of words for it..
I will always remember this birthday gift.
It's just so perfect that i can't find out what to say what not..
Ah i so wish they would have shown something nearly this. But then they can't do that as it's just on Tessa's hand. You deserve 10 star for it.
I would have punch Yash for such rejection every time. I agree with B that he is really the greatest tube light in world. Who do like this? He was ready to go near her but not ready to accept what his heart was saying. Tube light in True ESSENCE.. The perfect name..
I am glad that the tube light take own steps first to find her ESSENCE. she is not Arpita but she is Aarti, she had her own different ESSENCE in everything and that's why he fallen in love with her with all his heart..
And their coming together was 🤢 I am 🤢 🤢
It's just awesome.. I will not say thank you just give you hugs for this..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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😃Smiling broadly. You really have knack for capturing Aarti & Yash essence (no 😳pun intended).
I could feel Aarti pain at Yash refusal to acknowledge her as his wife and love. And Yash , so stubborn, so unwilling to bend, so aaahhh; anyway glad that he came to his senses 😳, that love scen was muy caliente, hot... 👏👏So how about a reversal story where Yash realize his love for Aarti and she remain clueless ... Don't mean to overstep but I love you're writing.

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