AarYa SS: Difference in Me - Part 15 (Epilogue) pg 42 - Page 20

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Posted: 8 years ago

Wow what an emotionly intense update ,yash has alot to make up for he needs to suffer abit ,update soon

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: B-onesie

The loss of Aarti's childhood breaks my heart to pieces. Not just for Aarti but for every child that had to go through this.

Thank goodness for Vidhi and her family then and Vidhi and Mansi now. Imagine that she had nowhere to go and she had remained a victim of that sicko, and because that disgusting creature that gave birth ti her, he probably moved on to his next victim.

It must have been heartbreaking for Mansi to relive the trauma with Aarti, but I am glad that she could finally talk about it. That helps with the healing process.

Mansi and Vidhi were right in there accusations of Yash and she was right in the defending the man that she loves.

It really is such a complicated mess. Loving each other, not wanting to be apart but not trusting each other. She didn't trust him to tell him the truth about her, i mean what reason did she have to trust men. Her father left her in the hands of the wicked stepmom and then the stepfather rapes her. The men that had to protect her did a deplorable job so far so she didn't expect better despite falling in love with him.
And him Oh well. I still think his actions left a lot to be desired. At least he tried to protect her from his parents. It;s unfair to be judged by your what your family is and does. They obviously did not even bother to get to know her. But then neither did he.

I really felt for him when he had to once again endure her reaction to him. It must be truly painful to have to watch the the one love disintegrate in pain and suffering at just the sight of you. And how torn Aarti must have been. The lines had blurred for her between her rapist and the man she loved, the father of her children. How would she overcome that if ever. But it was very telling that she still defended him after that. But that I suppose made it even worse for him. Knowing now what he knows, knowing is hand in her suffering and still hearing her defense of him. As i said complicated and i'm sure excruciating . The guilt and pain was eating him up.

I wish though that he did not have to find out that way. I wish she had the opportunity to tell him in her own way and in her own time. But once again his reaction is the same. Rash. Now he has shifted the blame from her to himself but the the actions are still the same. Instead of staying and facing her and himself he flees and is reckless in doing so. After all this would he still face the death of the man she loves.
As you can see i still have very little sympathy and patience for Yash. He needs to grow up and be part of the healing and not cause more pain.

I know he will be alive, but maybe the accident will be a catalyst for their eventual and complete healing.

Very very sad update😭

But loving the plot, looking forward to the healing in happiness.😃

thank you for this comment which is once again as long as the actual update Honey-Bee, not complaining at all so keep it up, do please!


I loved the entire comment but I especially loved what you said about Aarti and the men in her life. the poor girl really did not have a good experience with any of them so how could she trust her so called husband? especially when he did not treat her with the due respect, consideration, and love. It will be a process Yash will go through and he is the one who has to restore Aarti's trust and gain her respect but they at least have their children to help them stay together and they do love each other which I believe to be a good start.


it would probably have been better for her to tell Yash herself but where would be the fun in that? 😉😆

thanks once again my Lazy Bee! 😃 I better not wait long for my next comments though! 😡
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: cuteariya

my heart broke for aarti 🥺
she suffered a lot since childhood & still suffering 😭
nobody was there for her rather then vidhi & her parents
yash always judge aarti even without listening to her in fact never gave her chance to say her side 😡
now when he heard the truth abt aarti's horrible past he is feeling guilty
yash should have at least tried to find abt aarti's life but in his big fat ego never did 😡
mansi was so angry on aarti so called mom for doing horrible think to aarti I was feeling like to kill that bitch 😡
oh god yash met with accident 😲
continue plz

thanks Manita dear 😃. yes sometimes your family is not meant to be your family, instead friends become the family that stays with you and supports you. Aarti was not lucky in having a loving family, but she made one for herself with her friends. she learned to be strong early on because she realized she won't have the support of her parents but her friends are there to pull her up when she falters and they feel her pain the same way...
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Alamelu

Beautiful and sk emotional mansi is right Yash does not deserve her. How could he mistrust her without knowing anything about her what is going yo happen now

thank you Alamelu dear 😃. I was sooo happy to have a comment from you after so long!


yes, unfortunately Aarti's mother's character caused her to be judged unfairly and Yash was just one of many who assumed and persecuted, now he will be paying dearly for that.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ksen

very nice update

felt bad for aarti
she has gone through so much
yash met with accident
wonder what happens now
waiting for the next part
thanks for the pm

thank you ksen 😊

I will update soon so you can find out 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: premap

Lovely and full of emotions ! Aarti',s soul is badly damaged by her past. Yash instead of helping to overcome and ' heal' her soul , he decides to leave her. Yash made a mistake of not knowing her past , a mistake done unknowingly ! He is further ' messing' her life by deciding to leave her. You don't run away from problems but face it and overcome it !!! Yash must wake up and realise this. Well written update. Thanks

Thanks Premap 😊

Yash's thinking is far from rational at this point. his guilt and emotions are making him act rashly, he has to process everything before he can even begin to atone for it all. but yes Aarti went through a lot and now that he knows it's his responsibility to help her piece her life back together.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sass8

Seing Aarti shakiness, fear and torn by the hurt created by Yash for his forceful actions is as painful as the first time she relieved the horror 😕but at least now the healing can start. With Vidhi and Mansi help and of course her darling children she'll get there. She still love Yash, she hurt for him too even defend him to Mansi; and will probably always do but for now love is not enough. 😔

Well everything I anticipated Yash would feel, he is feeling it by tenfold. That sentence said it all; "he got swallowed by a storm of emotions stabbing at his heart and burning his head". As a man he contributed to her humiliation, as a husband to her mistreatment and disrespect, especially when they were married and he wasn't defending her to his parents because deep down he doubted her. The relationship was indeed destined to fail somewhow the first around; he may not have raped her but his action spoke of some level of abuse and that is eating at him now after hearing her confession. His descent into self loathing and hell is really well described.

You know, I wasn't prepare to forgive Yash, at all despite his remorse because he treated her cheap and in away worse than her father in-laws because she loves him and entrusted herself to him. Aarti unfortunately took it all until she couldn't and left. Would that have changed if she had confess to him I don't know , still he does not fully excuses everything. No he does not deserve her but I suppose he has to seek redemption and ask for forgiveness.I wonder what the accident impact will be now asuming its bad of course... Very well written chapter culminating to that last dramatic scene of Yash spining out literally and figuratively. 👏

I really loved your comment Sassie Sauce! 😃

I especially loved the last line about Yash spinning out literally and figuratively, that really is an apt description of it! And he will still be spinning for a while before he can get his bearing again. Yes he really did abuse her although he did not see it that way; he was always justified in his beliefs because Aarti was the one in the wrong. Aarti was the one who did not save herself for marriage and she is the one who cheated on him. Deep down he knew he was unfair towards her but his jealousy stopped him from allowing his tender feelings. Now the magnitude of it all will overwhelm him. He knows he has to atone and he will make a lot of mistakes along the way but hopefully his lady love as well as the readers will recognize the efforts and begin to forgive him. 😉

Thaaankuuu Madam Sauce! 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: bongalisoo

Wow what an emotionly intense update ,yash has alot to make up for he needs to suffer abit ,update soon

thank you Lisoo 😃. It will get intenser as the progresses so get buckled up for the roller-coaster. 😆 He is suffering already, he is in his personal hell.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Author's Note:

Hi My Dear Readers! I would like to take this opportunity to thank each and every one of you for your support throughout the year whether it was a silent like or a comment or both. I would like to thank even the stalkers 😆. Your support meant a lot to me throughout the year and has made me grow as a writer and allowed me to challenge myself. I do not know how long I will be writing AarYa fiction but I love you all for your support.

I therefore wish each and every one of you a very happy Christmas (holidays) with your loved ones.


To my Christian readers:

Christmas is the celebration for the birth of Christ

It is a merry occasion that all children of Christ rejoice in

Because Christ is reborn in each of our hearts

Our redeemer who guides us through life

Whose sacrifice is our salvation

So this Christmas we delight in his birth

And are coming together with loved ones

Time for presents it is called

But the most important gifts we can share

Are the immaterial ones, because they come from the heart

The gifts of love, faith, hope and happiness

Remember he was born in a manger, not among riches

this is a reminder to be humble

Because wealth is not only material

It's also the relationships we build

It's the love and laughter shared!

That is the true gift of Christmas

And so the spirit of Christmas engulfs us all! 😃


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For all my readers I wish you a prosperous 2017 and may it bring you that much closer to fulfilling your dreams! 🤗 🥳

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