AarYa SS: Difference in Me - Part 15 (Epilogue) pg 42

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Author's Note:

You are all aware that this story was meant to be an OS but I converted it into an SS instead to explore it more thoroughly. As some things changed from what I initially had in mind, I changed one concrete fact. Initially AarYa were married only a year but I changed it to four years instead, I amended it in part one but had to announce as well so that my readers do not get confused by the story as it progresses.

Thank you for bearing with me! 😆

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B-onesie

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Posted: 8 years ago

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The loss of Aarti's childhood breaks my heart to pieces. Not just for Aarti but for every child that had to go through this.

Thank goodness for Vidhi and her family then and Vidhi and Mansi now. Imagine that she had nowhere to go and she had remained a victim of that sicko, and because that disgusting creature that gave birth ti her, he probably moved on to his next victim.

It must have been heartbreaking for Mansi to relive the trauma with Aarti, but I am glad that she could finally talk about it. That helps with the healing process.

Mansi and Vidhi were right in there accusations of Yash and she was right in the defending the man that she loves.

It really is such a complicated mess. Loving each other, not wanting to be apart but not trusting each other. She didn't trust him to tell him the truth about her, i mean what reason did she have to trust men. Her father left her in the hands of the wicked stepmom and then the stepfather rapes her. The men that had to protect her did a deplorable job so far so she didn't expect better despite falling in love with him.

And him Oh well. I still think his actions left a lot to be desired. At least he tried to protect her from his parents. It;s unfair to be judged by your what your family is and does. They obviously did not even bother to get to know her. But then neither did he.

I really felt for him when he had to once again endure her reaction to him. It must be truly painful to have to watch the the one love disintegrate in pain and suffering at just the sight of you. And how torn Aarti must have been. The lines had blurred for her between her rapist and the man she loved, the father of her children. How would she overcome that if ever. But it was very telling that she still defended him after that. But that I suppose made it even worse for him. Knowing now what he knows, knowing is hand in her suffering and still hearing her defense of him. As i said complicated and i'm sure excruciating . The guilt and pain was eating him up.

I wish though that he did not have to find out that way. I wish she had the opportunity to tell him in her own way and in her own time. But once again his reaction is the same. Rash. Now he has shifted the blame from her to himself but the the actions are still the same. Instead of staying and facing her and himself he flees and is reckless in doing so. After all this would he still face the death of the man she loves.

As you can see i still have very little sympathy and patience for Yash. He needs to grow up and be part of the healing and not cause more pain.

I know he will be alive, but maybe the accident will be a catalyst for their eventual and complete healing.

Very very sad update😭

But loving the plot, looking forward to the healing in happiness.😃

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Posted: 8 years ago

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my heart broke for aarti 🥺
she suffered a lot since childhood & still suffering 😭
nobody was there for her rather then vidhi & her parents
yash always judge aarti even without listening to her in fact never gave her chance to say her side 😡
now when he heard the truth abt aarti's horrible past he is feeling guilty
yash should have at least tried to find abt aarti's life but in his big fat ego never did 😡
mansi was so angry on aarti so called mom for doing horrible think to aarti I was feeling like to kill that bitch 😡
oh god yash met with accident 😲
continue plz

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Beautiful and sk emotional mansi is right Yash does not deserve her. How could he mistrust her without knowing anything about her what is going yo happen now

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ksen

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Posted: 8 years ago

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very nice update

felt bad for aarti

she has gone through so much

yash met with accident

wonder what happens now

waiting for the next part

thanks for the pm

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Lovely and full of emotions ! Aarti',s soul is badly damaged by her past. Yash instead of helping to overcome and ' heal' her soul , he decides to leave her. Yash made a mistake of not knowing her past , a mistake done unknowingly ! He is further ' messing' her life by deciding to leave her. You don't run away from problems but face it and overcome it !!! Yash must wake up and realise this. Well written update. Thanks

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Seing Aarti shakiness, fear and torn by the hurt created by Yash for his forceful actions is as painful as the first time she relieved the horror 😕but at least now the healing can start. With Vidhi and Mansi help and of course her darling children she'll get there. She still love Yash, she hurt for him too even defend him to Mansi; and will probably always do but for now love is not enough. 😔

Well everything I anticipated Yash would feel, he is feeling it by tenfold. That sentence said it all; "he got swallowed by a storm of emotions stabbing at his heart and burning his head". As a man he contributed to her humiliation, as a husband to her mistreatment and disrespect, especially when they were married and he wasn't defending her to his parents because deep down he doubted her. The relationship was indeed destined to fail somewhow the first around; he may not have raped her but his action spoke of some level of abuse and that is eating at him now after hearing her confession. His descent into self loathing and hell is really well described.

You know, I wasn't prepare to forgive Yash, at all despite his remorse because he treated her cheap and in away worse than her father in-laws because she loves him and entrusted herself to him. Aarti unfortunately took it all until she couldn't and left. Would that have changed if she had confess to him I don't know , still he does not fully excuses everything. No he does not deserve her but I suppose he has to seek redemption and ask for forgiveness.I wonder what the accident impact will be now asuming its bad of course... Very well written chapter culminating to that last dramatic scene of Yash spining out literally and figuratively. 👏

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