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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sorry for the delayed comment sharlene honey.awsm concept.so the real heiress has turned up as d maid of the house.that s a pity.and yes d most awaited part of our hero heroine meetng.hmm so d wealthy yash sindhia is smitten by d charm of a maid much to the dismay of d so called hi profile girls arpita n witchita.to hell with both.hmm saviour yash as usual n aman adds yet another feather.suprb.continue soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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interesting start
nice concept
loved it
excited for the next part
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 2

Flash back twenty five years ago

"Hello Mr Scindhia and how are you doing?" said Vijay playfully slapping his best friend since childhood on the back. "Very good Mr Singh and yourself?" answered SP with a smile "Not bad not bad at all" Vijay answered his friend.

"HI!! Gentlemen how are you keeping and what is the plan for tonight?" asked a young lady with too much make up on she was in a group of six ladies and three boys. They were the rich spoilt brats of the Bhopal society "Gaytri what about a party at your house your parents are not home so we will be undisturbed " suggested SP "Yeah why not?" said a boy named Raj "If you don't mind the company of my plain jane, book worm cousin Radha then no problem lets party" said G3

Raj and their friend Vickram volunteered to bring the drinks {alcohol}

"I think we should invite some more a few of the wannabe to our crowd" said SP" What poor kids with their middle class ways why do you want to spoil our fun I mean SP you will be leaving for London soon why spoil our fun?" said Meera G3 best friend.

"Why not we can have fun at their expense" said Pooja another mean girl "I agree my darling they are so easy to use "laughed Karen who considered himself a ladies man.

Same collage another group of kids

"Radha why so quite" asked her friend Shoba "Leave her nah Shoba you know it is our last days in collage and her folks are planning to marry her off soon" said Savitri She continued "look over there its Vaneesha that girl is so different from her snobbish twin brother she is coming over" "Hi there ladies may I sit with you?" asked a beautiful simply dressed girl "Sure Vaneesha how is it going " "Fine where is Satyendra and Saagar still in the examination room" she asked "Yeah they are doing the last one for today. It is weekend why don't we go out for something to eat later if your parents don't mind" said Savitri

Walking towards the group of friends were the rich snobs who heard their conversation and they decided to faked concern for them; they invited these girls and told to bring their male friends along to their party at G3's and Radha's home their rational being since G3 and Radha are cousins sisters and Vijay and Vaneesha are twins why can't they have fun together with their friends.

Later that evening the party was in full swing the snobs were all drunk and paired out, dancing seductively they had invited a few more boys who wanted to hang on to their group. Radha and her friends were out in the garden talking and laughing the scene inside was too much for them.

Present Day

Vijay had married Savitri and their daughter whom was kidnapped from them seventeen years plus two months ago had found her way back to them. Both parents had their plan to prove that this girl is their child.

If she is my Aarti then SP my friend your bahu is back laughed Vijay to himself, your father refused my sister for your wife I will make sure he don't refuse my daughter this time.

Vijay loved his daughter so much both he and his wife were devastated when she was kidnapped and when the police and his parents had given up hope of ever finding her again they felt like their world came to an end. But his beautiful wife Savitri never give up hoping now god has smile on them and this girl could be their child he looked up to the heavens god I have prayed for all these years to find my child too return my baby back to me please god let this girl be my Aarti. Tomorrow I will put my plan into action if she is our daughter this will be the best gift I can give my Savi he said to himself.

In a room downstairs the housekeeper her husband the oldest driver of the family and daadi were talking that this girl looks like her saas could she be the one the grand child of the family." When my husband ordered you to get rid of the girl what did you do?' asked daadi Kamala started to cry "madam we could not kill the baby or abandon her at the roadside as you all ordered we are parents too and we loved little Aarti so we took her to the government orphanage and left her there with her birth chart I took from your cupboard. I never thought that she would end up here on day back into her home" "When my husband comes back he will deal with you two but for now no one must know of what we did do you understand!" daadi sternly told the couple "madam ji we kept your secret for so many years and have been your loyal servants we will continue to do so "said the driver.

In Vijay's and Savitri's room she was afraid to bring up the topic of their lost baby and the resemblance of this new maid to his daadi ji; she was scared of being yell at and call a fool for hoping and seeing thing that are not there so she decided that she will speak to her doctor in the morning how she wished she knew where her best friends from collage were Shoba and Radha they could of help her. In all these years she never forgot them or the sisterly love they had for each other.

If this girl is indeed her child then she will fight to get her married to Yash Radha's and SP's son.

In the servant quarters Aarti had her shower and washed her clothes Aarti smiled to herself no fighting to use the shower or toilet here; this is the first time she had a room for herself and a bed yes it was small and the mattress thin but it was comfortable. It was a very long time since she slept on a mattress at the orphanage it was who got to the bed first slept there and she always give her place to a sick child or to the younger children.

This was the third night she had a good meal at the orphanage she had little food and she shared with the other children especially the sick or younger ones she thought about them back there when she saved some more money she would visit and carry food stuff for them.

Aarti was tired but when she tried to sleep the vision of the handsome boy Yash Scindhia came to her eyes he is handsome and kind she said to herself and the way he spoke to those clowns [the girls Ishita, Aripta] made her laugh they deserve it those B***hs I like him, Aaman and Mansi are not bad either. Aarti fell asleep with the image of a smiling Yash introducing himself to her.

In SM

"Dadaji guess what happened to me today" said Yash they were in his dadaji's room talking this was a nightly routine since Yash was a little boy.

"What my naughty beta" replied his dadaji

."I met my future wife today" said Yash

"Great my child tell me who is she and who are her parents?" asked an excited older man

"Dada ji relax I will tell she is a maid in the Veer Singh's house and her name is Aarti Sharma and she is an orphan who grew up in the government orphanage" Yash explained looking at the old man carefully

"Well thank god I have a strong heart otherwise the shock would of kill me" he smiled back

"Are you serious beta a maid you want to marry"

"Yes dadaji she is the one" replied Yash

"Okay then but you know your father and mother may have a heart attack." Said dadaji

"MY Stepmother and I don't care if she dies but papa I would miss" he answered.

"Yash have some respect for your elders" dadaji scolded him

"Dadaji please let's not talk about that evil witch Dadaji I like this girl she is so simple and beautiful, her eyes big and expressive, she has a long neck, her voice husky and sexy. Dada ji Aaman and Mansi said she resembles their great grand nani dadi ji." expounded Yash.

This last piece of information came as a shock to the old man could she be the lost child of that family he always suspected that there was more to that kidnapping he thought.

"Well beta if you are sure you know you have my blessings" to himself I can't wait to see the expressions on my son and that B***h of a bahu my darling wife will surely get a heart attack or may be a stroke.

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Edited by Sharlene1410 - 9 years ago


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: B-onesie

Very interesting.

Soon after she leaves the orphanage she meets all the people that will impact her life in a big way. I can't wait to see how it unfolds. I can't wait to see her reaction when she finds out who she really is, and how her relationship with Yash will work out, and how her relationship with his biological mother will bring his family together.
There is just so much to explore in this story. Very exciting. Already there is a connection between Yash and Aarti. And he doesn't care what he status is. I hope they find their families and their happiness soon. Or do I? I don't know. I'm just super excited for this plot.👏
Loved it and I really can't wait for the next chapter.⭐️


Thanks so much my friend B 🤗 i love your comment Yes there is a lot to explore in this story 😆
this revolves for the time being around three generations 😆 rich and poor 😆 betrayal, love for materialist things, and status. just plain normal human struggling to survive with what they have, trust, understanding. support, friendship, and love

Thanks again B 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jodhu

Sorry for the delayed comment sharlene honey.awsm concept.so the real heiress has turned up as d maid of the house.that s a pity.and yes d most awaited part of our hero heroine meetng.hmm so d wealthy yash sindhia is smitten by d charm of a maid much to the dismay of d so called hi profile girls arpita n witchita.to hell with both.hmm saviour yash as usual n aman adds yet another feather.suprb.continue soon.


Thanks Jodhu my friend 🤗 i enjoyed your comment 😆 Yes the heiress has returned to her real home and family 😆 and Yash is struck by strong electric current 😆 those girl are to full of themselves the world only revolves around the wealthy 😆 rest are the dirty slaves 😆 aman and mansi are here as the best friends 😆

Thanks my friend 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ksen

interesting start

nice concept
loved it
excited for the next part
thanks for the pm


Thanks my buddy 🤗 and you are welcome 😊 i hope you continue to enjoy my humble offerings 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome update
so everyone were at the same collage & radha maa & that bitch gayetri r cousin
bad luck of radha maa & yash bcoz they related to that bitch gayetri
OMG that so called dada dadi want to kill aarti 😡
hope Vijay & savitri will find the truth & hope aarti is their daughter
loll yash is so fast forward already decided that he will marry aarti 🤣
dadaji also no less then yash 😆
after hearing abt aarti even he doubt abt aarti being Vijay & savitri daughter
continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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amazing update... yash liked aarti in first meeting itself..their past is mystery.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very interesting and the story is getting more exciting.
Waiting for the next update.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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oh my! what an evil daadi to have her own grandchild kidnapped, did she say if her husband comes to know? they wanted to kill their won grandchild? 😲 but why would they plan something so evil? whoa Didi you have opened a can of worms which resulted in a lot of questions!
I love that AarYa made an impression on each other. Aarti even went to sleep thinking of him; little does she know that not only those around her but he too is planning to marry her. I wonder just how she would react when she hears that! and this Yash who decides in just one encounter that she will be his! oh wow! oh dreamy!

I also love that Aarti is not only appreciative of having a roof over her head but also has not forgotten the conditions of those she grew up with. she even plans to take care of them when she is able to. what a charitable heart she has despite how she grew up. I love her already!

please continue soon Didi love ❤️

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