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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sharlene1410

I enjoyed the update i have to say this B Aripta can go to hell I don't like her Yash and Aarti love each other Just because she is poor she must all accept second best and because Aripta is rich she must get Yash Aripta can commit suicide for all i care

yes let her rot in hell because of her people who loved each other couldn't be 2gthr because of her. She is shameless after all. Am hurt and happy at the same time Aarti got beaten up. I enjoyed the updt. Plz continue soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I just hate that aarti force yash to be with arpita
I mean what kind of love she have for yash that so easily leave him
When aarti know that she & yash love each other
Even they made love
I hate aarti so called families they r so disgusting
Always hurt & torture aarti badly
Even this time they blame aarti spending time with yash
Thank god yash came on time & took her to the hospital
Yippee yash told those monsters that he is going to marry aarti
Now arpita going hate aarti
Hope this time aarti won't force yash to leave her
Continue plz
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Posted: 9 years ago
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B what an emotional update. Hate Arti's uncle for beating her up and being such beasts. After reading this I can understand why Arti would feel that she can't have Yash as she feels she is nothing. I am glad that Yash has acknowledged in front of all of the people including Arpita that he is willing to mary Arti and no one can stop him. Maybe God has strange way of uniting ArYa. Impatiently waiting to find out Arpita's reaction and how will Yash's family deal with this situation. Hopefully Arti doesn't get further wrath of this latest situation. Really feel for Arti. Waiting to see how it unfolds from here.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice part, they are very brutal.. what was aarti fault they beat her up..now yash announced to marry her..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tessaloni

I'm so tired and it's past eleven but I just had to read this! I loved it but I'll comment tomorrow...

before anything else, before any marriages or engagements, someone please get Aarti to a hospital! that's all I could think in that moment! 😆
on a serious note though, I have stopped choosing a favorite because just when I think I have one you come up with another amazing concept! ⭐️
I love this story, not only for AarYa but also for Aarti and Aaman's bond. He is like her guardian angel always there to bring even a tinge of sweetness to her otherwise miserable existence. what deplorable relations she has, making a poor child pay for no fault of hers. How is Aarti to blame for how she was conceived? her so called mama ji and naani should actually be locked up for child abuse as well as domestic abuse for now beating up the grown up woman. my heart broke at the thought that she was made to starve and would have had it not been for Aaman; she would not even have had an education had it not been for him 😭. I don't really blame Aarti's mother for having been knocked up the way she was if that is the kind of life she had to lead! Aaman loves her so much that he even agrees to marry her without any hesitation, disregarding his love for Mansi, just to ensure she is okay ❤️ I am curious about Aarti's father too. was he a louse who used her mother or was he in love with her mother and never found out that she was pregnant?

coming to AarYa offf firstly what a hot first encounter! wait, even before that just the two of them in the farm house without any revelations, you feel the charge, the tension, the underlying passion. and then we learn a bit more and my heart breaks for them 😭. Yash is desperately in love and just wants to marry her. Aarti loves him too but what happened that first time reiterates to her what her relations had been taunting her for all her life, she is her mother's daughter. she is confused because she too has fallen in love yet she has acted in what she perceives as shameful. that and her inferiority complex makes her push him away and into Arpita's arms. poor girls do not deserve rich guys, especially poor girls whose very existence is a subject of shame. . I really get where she is coming from, had Yash not have been so hasty and desperate to make her jealous he may have broken down her defenses sooner. She does not love Prashant but his parents are a possibility for a loving home she never had so she accepts him despite her deep love for Yash. As for Arpita that last bit made me realize that she may have suspected AarYa's love but chose to be blind and now he proclaims he will marry Aarti at an event at which he was suppose to get engaged to her. if she reacted with shock initially and not such open hatred I would have given her the benefit of the doubt; now just like didi says she can rot for all I care! I wonder how Prashant will react to all these but I hope Yash won't change his mind. he needs to make her his legally first and then work on the emotions with time 😳.

now really though, someone please get Aarti to a hospital! 😆

update soonest, of soonest, of soon, please B! don't blame me, you have spoiled me 😛😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tessaloni

before anything else, before any marriages or engagements, someone please get Aarti to a hospital! that's all I could think in that moment! 😆
on a serious note though, I have stopped choosing a favorite because just when I think I have one you come up with another amazing concept! ⭐️
I love this story, not only for AarYa but also for Aarti and Aaman's bond. He is like her guardian angel always there to bring even a tinge of sweetness to her otherwise miserable existence. what deplorable relations she has, making a poor child pay for no fault of hers. How is Aarti to blame for how she was conceived? her so called mama ji and naani should actually be locked up for child abuse as well as domestic abuse for now beating up the grown up woman. my heart broke at the thought that she was made to starve and would have had it not been for Aaman; she would not even have had an education had it not been for him 😭. I don't really blame Aarti's mother for having been knocked up the way she was if that is the kind of life she had to lead! Aaman loves her so much that he even agrees to marry her without any hesitation, disregarding his love for Mansi, just to ensure she is okay ❤️ I am curious about Aarti's father too. was he a louse who used her mother or was he in love with her mother and never found out that she was pregnant?

coming to AarYa offf firstly what a hot first encounter! wait, even before that just the two of them in the farm house without any revelations, you feel the charge, the tension, the underlying passion. and then we learn a bit more and my heart breaks for them 😭. Yash is desperately in love and just wants to marry her. Aarti loves him too but what happened that first time reiterates to her what her relations had been taunting her for all her life, she is her mother's daughter. she is confused because she too has fallen in love yet she has acted in what she perceives as shameful. that and her inferiority complex makes her push him away and into Arpita's arms. poor girls do not deserve rich guys, especially poor girls whose very existence is a subject of shame. . I really get where she is coming from, had Yash not have been so hasty and desperate to make her jealous he may have broken down her defenses sooner. She does not love Prashant but his parents are a possibility for a loving home she never had so she accepts him despite her deep love for Yash. As for Arpita that last bit made me realize that she may have suspected AarYa's love but chose to be blind and now he proclaims he will marry Aarti at an event at which he was suppose to get engaged to her. if she reacted with shock initially and not such open hatred I would have given her the benefit of the doubt; now just like didi says she can rot for all I care! I wonder how Prashant will react to all these but I hope Yash won't change his mind. he needs to make her his legally first and then work on the emotions with time 😳.

now really though, someone please get Aarti to a hospital! 😆

update soonest, of soonest, of soon, please B! don't blame me, you have spoiled me 😛😆

Tessa, I am not heartless. Don't worry I will get the poor girl seen to.
Seriously, your comments are just the best. 😆
I think you've just inspired me to carry on writing tonight. Even if it is just a short update.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Fantastic one B...👏
thats why yash was flirting with aarti regarding dessert oh no i m with yash poor guy he has to suffer unnecessarily with an uncertainity and finally what he got was nothing ...i dont understand why did aarti gave up on him didnt she trust him enough??...she is hurting herself and also him
things werent improved even after years they r hopelessly in love with each other

now oh god all turned upside down ...Now aarti still will marry yash and she will get what she feared of hatred from her own best friends

oh poor then ...i m so sad for them
where is prasanth ...?? oh my god i hate aarti s relatives for doing her this always humiliated her but to this extent i cant take it anymore 😡 ...i really do hope arpitha and the pthers to understand yash and aarti and their circumstances 😳

hopelessly very much waiting for the next one B 😛 though u update to the soonest 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: B-onesie


Tessa, I am not heartless. Don't worry I will get the poor girl seen to.

Seriously, your comments are just the best. 😆

I think you've just inspired me to carry on writing tonight. Even if it is just a short update.


Yay yippy yay! I will be waiting! 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 4

(For Tessa) She woke up in hospital with a pounding headache. She saw Yash, Aaman and Mansi sitting worriedly around her. She attempted to lift her head and immediately fell back, feeling dizzy.

"Aarti" they said almost in unison.

"Aarti, how are you feeling" asked Mansi.

"Ok, I suppose. I will feel better if I can lift my head."

"I'm so sorry. Aarti. I should never have let you continue living there. Look what they did to you. It's all my fault" Aaman was in tears.

"Aaman, it's not your fault that my family is abusive. And I am not your responsibility. Look at me at me now, well not literally now, but look at what I have achieved in my life so far. Despite everything they did, I am educated and I have my dream job. And that was all you. Everything good in my life was all you. The only love I knew was all you. Please promise me you won't blame yourself for this and please don't even try and sacrifice yourself for me like you did earlier. You will only marry Mansi, do you hear me!" she said sternly.

He could not utter a word as he was still so overcome with emotion and tears still streaming down his face.

"And Mansi, please look after him for me. Else I don't what he will get up to next."

"I will" she said. "But Aarti, you can't leave things like this. You have to take action against them.

"No, Mansi. Leave them. This will be the last time that they have a chance to abuse me. And Karma is a you know what. I am will never go back there."

"I love you Aarti" Mansi said and hugged her. But it was too painful.

Up until then Yash didn't say anything. He just stood there. He wasn't even looking at her.

"I have to go" he said. "Will you stay with her Aaman. Please don't leave her alone"

"Of course"

"Yash" she said but he didn't acknowledge her, he just left.

She had slight concussion and bruised ribs, not to mention the swelling and discoloration of her face. She was to stay in hospital for a few more days. She could not move around much, he body was too sore.

After she passed out, Yash had picked her up and started to carry her out the door.

"Yash, where are you going? You can't just leave like that. It is your engagement." his father said

"I'm taking Aarti to the hospital. Please make my apologies to Arpita, her family and all the guests." and he left.

Now he would be seeing his parents for the first time after "the incident".

He walked in the door and they were all sitting in the lounge.

"Yash, finally!" his mother said.

"Yash, you walked out on your engagement, after announcing that you are marrying that girl. I hope you have come to your senses by now. The Guptas are still prepared to let Arpita marry you, even after you humiliated her like that."

"Bauji, please I meant every word that I said. I am marrying Aarti. I will go to Mr Gupta and apologise to him and Arpita. But my decision has been made."

"Yash, you are not thinking clearly!" his mother said.

"Yes, mother, I am. You talk about Arpita's humiliation. What about Arti's? She was beaten and brought before everyone here, being accused of things that she is not guilty of. And because of me. I was implicated with her and I have to make it right. And just so you know, I am in love with her. I've been in love with her for long time and she didn't want me so I settled for Arpita. So I am not walking away from her again. We were meant to be together and this is not the way it was supposed to have happened but it is clearly our fate."

"Yash, she is not of our status. She won't fit in."

"She can fit in Ma, if you allow her to. If she doesn't, then we will live somewhere else. We don't have to live at home with you. You can be part of my life or not, that is entirely up to you. I really hope that you choose to be with me because I would be lost without you, but even so, I won't give Aarti up."

"Yash, you are willing to give up your family and home for this girl? Have you gone mad? Have you even thought for a moment what Arpita is going through?"

"I haven't been thinking about anything else, Bauji. I will face her family and I know there is nothing I can do to make up for it, I will explain everything. That is my last word on it.

Aarti was discharged and went to stay at Mansi's house. She didn't see Yash again since he left the hospital. She was desperate to see him. She wanted to tell him not to call off his wedding with Arpita. She knew from what Aaman said that he still intended to marry her.

She was feeling stronger and better every day. It was her second day at Mansi's house when Arpita came to visit. She was glad because she wanted to explain everything to her and that she was not going to marry Yash.

"Arpita, I'm so glad you came. I'm so sorry that you're engagement was ruined because of me. I never thought that my uncle would do something like that."

The look on Arpita's face astounded her.

"You can fool Yash and Arpita and Aaman. But you can't fool me. I know exactly the kind of person you are. I know you planned all this to steal my man!"
"Arpita" both Mansi and Aarti said in shock.

"Don't Arpita me. I know you always wanted him. You are exactly what your uncle said. You are a little s**t. You staged it all so that you could have Yash. After all I have done for you. I befriended you, you low class b***h when no one would touch you poor ass with a stick when we were at school and this is the thanks I get."

"Arpita, you know that's not true. Do you really think that I would allow myself to get beaten up like this just to get Yash. Please, I love you, I would never do anything to hurt you."

"Love? Love? What does a bas***d know about love? Your mother was cheap like you and that is probably why your father didn't want to marry her.

"Arpita, not another word about my mother. I can forgive you anything, but not that!"

"What are you going to do?"

"Stop it Arpita" Mansi said.

"You think I don't know what happened that night that we met Yash. Do you think I don't know where you were when you pretended to be sick? You were with him. From that first night, you threw yourself at him. And that night you spent with him. Try and deny it?"

"Arpita, you knew?"

"Of course I knew. And that is why I told you how I felt first before you could tell us about your night. You are so pathetic and so desperate for my approval and my friendship that you gave him up. You played right into my hands."

"You knew" Aarti said again softly.

"You manipulative b****h" Mansi said and she wanted to go for Arpita.

"No Mansi", Aarti, held her arm and she continued.

"Arpita, if you knew about that night, then you must surely realise that he came after me. He came after me when I was outside and asked me to dance. He came after me when I left. I tried to get away from him and that was why I left. He followed me. How could you do that Arpita. How could you manipulate the situation to your advantage like that when you knew that we were interested in each other? I thought we were friends."

"Friends. Yes, it suited me to have low class friends. You people are so much easier to manipulate than my own class."

"I suppose you are right. We are easy to manipulate because we have values and morals, we value things because it doesn't come easy to us. We have to work for it. So now you have one all of this and you have still lost. I fell in love with Yash that night and he with me. Do you know he asked me to marry that very first night, but I stepped back for you. I thought he would be happier with you, that you two were a better fit. And you let me believe that I was right. So now tell me Arpita, tell me how it feels to know that you lost to the bas***d daughter of a poor family with no status. How does it feel to know that Yash fell in love with me the first day we met? How does it feel to know that after 5 years, despite your manipulation and scheming, he still loves me and wants to marry me? You are the one who is pathetic. Running and scheming for a man that doesn't love you and doesn't want you."

"You b****h," Arpita screamed and advanced towards Aarti, but suddenly her arm was held from the back. No one had noticed that Yash and Aaman had entered the bedroom.

"Yash, did you hear how this low class thing is speaking to me. She is manipulating you. She always wanted you and now she has finally found a way to make you hers. Yash, don't fall for her tricks. Please."

"Arpita, I heard everything. EVERYTHING. Because of our past relationship I will let go that you raised a hand to my wife. And if you try to do anything to stop this marriage or to harm Aarti, I will ruin not only you but your entire family and you know I can and will do it. Now leave before I change my mind. Aaman, please see her out."

"My pleasure" he said. And Mansi followed them.

Yash and Aarti stared at each other.

"How are you Aarti?"

"Fine."

"I've come to tell you that the wedding will take place as soon as you are well enough and you face has healed. I'm sure you don't want to have wedding pictures with your face bruised and swollen."

"Yash, you don't have to do this. I will be ok."

"Dammit Aarti, we are getting married and that's it. I won't accept any more excuse from you."

"Your parents? Surely they are not happy with this. I have no dowry."

"Anything else?"

"What?"

"Any more excuses you'd like to give."

"Prashant..." she said

Edited by B-onesie - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ooh my god that bitch, s**t, hoe, gold gigger she knew all along that aarti and yash loved each other. I should shove my foot up her ass. I hate hate hate her to the core. What wrong with this tubelight she should learn to think about herself for once and i think loonprashant and tht bitch, s**t, gold gigger worked together to keep Aarya away from each other i so hate them.

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