New Beginnings - chapter 13- page 16 (Epilgue)

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Fandu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#41

Awesome update. Don't know where to start to comment, so all I am going to say is that your are very good at storytelling and I am impatient for the next update. Keep writing.

Edited by Fandu - 9 years ago

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lassekool

@lassekool

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Posted: 9 years ago

#42

Miss B, you are doing it again. The story is superb. Hats off to you. I am feeling so sorry for how Aarti's life turned out to be. Her parents disowned her and her pregnancy was difficult. With knowledge about the present, no celebratation about the marriage either. Thank God both she and the babies are doing well. She is indeed a strong girl. Please continue soon.

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annirogc

@annirogc

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Posted: 9 years ago

#43

yash was realy a dumb.. he used aarti and her love for his pleasure

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ksen

@ksen

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Posted: 9 years ago

#44

just read all the parts

very different and nice story

loved it

waiting for the next part

Edited by ksen - 9 years ago

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Jocelyn Phumla

@duloharaes

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Posted: 9 years ago

#45

poor aarti suffered becoz she loved yash .. she lost her parents .. no support system for her jst mansi... Yash has build a wall around himself using his callous attitude as a shield ...making himself blind to the obvious love she has for him because he is scared to love

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Busi

@BusiMusi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#46

I feel like kicking yash via Bluetooth. Amazing updt love it.

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Tessaloni

@Tessaloni

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Posted: 9 years ago

#47

😭😭 how much Aarti suffered! so inconceivable! she is so strong to have come out of all the emotional and physical trauma in one piece! both lived in the moment and allowed themselves to love yet Yash was still blind! he wanted her to stay but was not willing to give into her wishes, ugh! seriously what a big baby! moaning about all those loving him leaving him when he runs for the hills at the first sign of love. at least he stepped up although he ironically ended doing the very thing he was against just as Aarti observed. the way they got married already spelled disaster! no wonder it fell through! he could not stand up to his own family and introduce his daughters yet he wanted to take them from her??? yes yes I know I should try to understand him but I just get so angry at him! but he does have a point in having tried to protect her from them until she was strong enough at least! his parents sound like a pair of vultures!

another awesome one B! you know it! please update the soonest of soon! 😆

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roserosey

@roserosey

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Posted: 9 years ago

#48

Fantabulous B ...⭐️

i just cant get enough adjectives to appreciate u ...u r one of the writer who has the capability to write intensely whichever might be the plot i can feel the intensity of the love in all of ur writings 👏

Oh this yash such a dumbo he didnt realize what he is feeling for aarti since he met her he wanted only her and wanted all of her and that too only for him but he is turning deaf and blind to see what is right infront of him his love ... in the process intentionally and unintentionally he hurted her so much to much to take for her 😭 poor gal she doesnt have anyone anymore in her life glad that she has her angels to take care off as u said thats the only good thing out of their relationship 😕

oh so after all the mess he made his life and her life and allowed everyone to mess her life now finally he is willing to marry arpitha ...God he doesnt deserve her and her love 😡😭

Interesting turn of events though much of them r not good to take in aarti s life ...but i hope she just get what she desreve 😳

B...100 stars👏

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Alamelu

@Alamelu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#49

fantastic...felt real bad for arti and the kids and yash too to an extent...i guess he did not want marriage hmm wonder why...knowing how he came about. thought he would want it for sure...anyways he wanted it at the end as he did not want his kids to be called illegitimate...