AarYa OS 'Sinful Night'. Chapter - 4, Page - 14 - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Oh I like this nterpretation of why Yash thought that Arti had betrayed him. It was all because of the conversation he overheard wonder what will happen when Arti tells about her past yo yash
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12
I so loved Yash's anger but now how will he carry himself forth
what about Aarti
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Posted: 9 years ago
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What an interesting take on the post Mumbai track. I think we were all disappointed in Yash's irrational behaviour and there was never really any closure.

Here he confronted his feelings on paper but he still couldn't speak to her about it. He had to come to terms with his feelings for her and what that meant for his self imposed loyalty for his deceased wife. And because he loves so intensely I can understand his complete feeling of betrayal for his perception of her deceit. For him, he had given her his heart, body and soul but she had given herself to him for reward and as a promise to his mother. And as we all know, for Yash there is only black and white, lie or truth. Nothing in-between. But instead of confronting her, he acts like a maniac and then runs away to Mumbai.
But it is still all about him, He even doubts whether he can accept a possible child of theirs, as if there was a choice. He still is pretty egotistical in my opinion.
I am so happy that Aarti told the truth to his family. Their response was as expected. I am glad that she did not give the Dubey's a chance to use their emotional blackmail again. She has bared all, she is prepared for the consequences, no matter what that might be, to the point of giving up her children.
The only thing that is disappointing is that I am going to wait so long for the second part. 😭
This was an awesome read, Thank you and I hope you enjoy your travels🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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this is a very interesting interpretation of the post Mumbai tract you used the forgotten conversation between Aarti, and G3, also the the scene where they spoke in private where G3 requested from Aarti to help bring forth her old Yash her happy son back to his family.
Yes Yash is suffering from illusions he is experience his own ego trip, why did he not stay and fight for Aarti to give him answers instead of running away he claims that he loves her then why doubt her?? why accuse her of tricking you using Aman help? because of a conversation he overheard, be a man and ask her outright about the conversation just don't judge

.Nikky you did a remarkable job in keeping with Yash character all quick to jump to conclusions hurting aarti in the process. his parents never liked them their meddling always looking for some excuse to drive Aarti away as if they are so good without any sin you also kept their characters intact just like in the show.😆😆😆



Overall Nikky wonderful job you made me miss Pv and wanting to hit those dumb people hey that was thrilling part and parcel of watching the soap opera with my family 🤣


Nikky don't get me wrong I loved this update very much 👏 just i feel like slapping Yash senseless 😈😆


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Posted: 9 years ago
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This was an amazing update. Totally enjoyed reading it especially Yash's innermost thoughts. I was glad Aarti got a chance to read them and decide immediately to come clean with him about her past. Fantastic job as always.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16
awesome OS
god how could yash think abt that low 😡
if he have any doubt he should talk to aarti not to push her away
aarti also felt guilty after whatever happen between them
yash notepad was really shocking
he confess his love for aarti but not ready to forgive her for lie
even in the show aarti never voice out her hurt not even when yash hurt her after their Mumbai trip
I want in this OS she would do it
after all yash families especially yash parents & bua did really bad to her 😡
tried to change her identity tried to keep ansh away from her making yash daughters hate her 😡
so many wrong they did to her & ansh 😡
now again they want to throw aart & ansh out of the home bcoz she told them abt prashant 😡
hope this time aarti will not compromise with her self respect
continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Congratulations on the new OS Waiting for Aarya meeting
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18
Nikki thank you for the new OS. I like it. Anxious to see Yash's reaction when Arti meets him in Mumbai to reveal the truth about her being divorced. Waiting to see how this will all unfold. I feel for Arti and Ansh. Let's see what happens next.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Tnx 4 the pm. Wow nikki Di the updt was amazayn.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing part of the os,lvd it.
Waiting 4 nxt part.

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