Punar Vivah FF My Version AarYa's story49 Page 102 UPDATE 12/5/18 - Page 12

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: cuteariya

oh hell I just want to kill that rahgu deyal 😡
how dare he talk abt aarti & ansh like that 😡
good that aarti slap that cheep jerk 👏
uff that maya bua want that ishita for yash
awe yash follow aarti till her home
he just want make sure that aarti is save 🤗
I just hate that aarti still thinking that jerk prashant will come back to her
why cant she get over with that beast even after he hurt her badly
continue soon




Thanks for such an enjoyable comment I loved reading it 😆
Ragu Deyal behaved like a wounded animal striking back in his defence 😡 😆 He did not expect to opposed by our JKR 😆

Maya is annoying 😡 she wants another peeping tom in the family 😆 she really don't care about the family's happiness why should they be happy when she is not 😆

Yash is a darling ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Busi

Still waiting for your master piece dear


😛 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: suhaaana

part 1
just superb
yash showered petals on aarti much to aarti's aanoyance loll
its fun to read this



Thank you my dear 😊 I wanted to keep some aspects of the show 😊 😉 happy you like my ff
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Fandu

Superb update. Brought all the scenes from the show back. Thank you,


Thank you my dear for enjoying and commenting😊🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Tessaloni

wow this was my fav update of this ff by far! "rose petal girl" "arrogant man" had me laughing hard! that and Yash's self-thoughts were my fav! can't wait for the proposals and their reactions to them!

update soon pretty please Sharlene!


thanks so much Tessa 🤗 I had fun writing it😆 I hope i will be able to do justice to their proposal reactions hope i don't disappoint 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: suhaaana

part 2&3

amazing
aarti blasted at yash and he is in his dreamland
god he is thinking if he had met her earlier she could be his wife
not bad yash
yash is still in arpita but he needs to get out pretty soon


Thanks dear yes Yash wants to stay loyal to Aripta🥺, but Aarti has made her appearance in his life😉❤️, his heart recognize her ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: suhaaana

fab parts
loving the flow of the story
prashant as usual good for nothing
yash is concerned for his daughters but still wants t live in past
his and aarti's talks were too good and prateek's meeting with gundi's loll

pocket size gundi lolll
it was too good
ragu is a rogue good aarti slapped that good for nothing



Thanks dear for reading and enjoying 🤗 I enjoyed writing these updates😆 I wanted to keep some of the elements from the show and shape them my way 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Lincy_Lins

Beautiful Update Dear 👏

Eagerly waiting for AarYa's reaction, what will be there reaction
Can't wait continue soon dear 😳



Thanks for you support🤗 I hope i am able to bring a smile to your face with that update😆
will update soon😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: suhaaana

part 8
amazing
I love prateeks little scheming and making aarti his bhabhi
that's so cute yr
loving this version a lot

I was thing what is MBKK now I get it its mere bhagwan Ki kasam right

thanks for all the PMS
I hope u don't mind me getting late in readimg



Thanks dear your comments make me happy😃

Yes you are correct MBKK means mere bhagwan Ki kasam 😆
Maya bua's favourite line 😆
Prateek kill two birds with one stone he got his Pari😆, and Yash got a wife his maji should be very happy 😆

I don't mind you take you time😆 read and comment when ever you have time I will be here, I like comments😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Busi

Superb update dear. A am speechless a cat caught my tongue and my stomach still hurt from laughing. I feel like am watching married again the second time.


Thanks Busi for your nice comment 😳 😃 I am happy you like 😆

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