AarYa OS 'Open and Closed Door' My Anniversary Gift

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roserosey

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Posted: 10 years ago

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 10 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: roserosey
firstly ...a very happy second anniversary di 🤗🥳...
wishing u many more anniversaries in this lovely place !!😃...

and the surprise treat was fantastic 👏...such a lovely treat on aarya ⭐️

what amazed me more was its aaryas twentieth anniversary wow !! they r evergreen and everyoung couple ...and two musketeers with palak being naughty like aarti and ansh being haha embarassed like yash 😆...aarthi is all mushy...blushy ☺️...

the entire concept was interesting ...as here all the characters included r so positive and all that is transpired is love care and friendship...and we got to see prasanth in a different light he is so friendly and supportive ...and m glad that he found his true love in life and was very happy with his love ...

yash is always an amazing personality...the best husband one could wish for...and he is so sweet , what he showered over aarti was his love ... he always gave aarti the love the support she could ever wish for ...with her he found what true love is... .

aarthi... though she was forced in this marriage... she is so truthful and loyal towards yash and his caring and supportive nature made her fell in love with him...

and the romance part ...woh tho speechless tha ...no words only imagination ☺️😉...

and the symbolisms r perfect di...one symbolised love and another friendship...which r the two most driving factors of life...and here everyone is lucky to get that...

really it is such a lovely treat di 🤗
thank u so much for this...and yes as always will wait for more from u ...
love u di...🤗

Rosey 🤗

Thank you thank you thank you for all your Love and Wishes ❤️

You are so right, our AarYa is an evergreen couple.

At first I was not sure whether I should show twentieth anniversary or not? I thought to go for tenth. But then I would've to show kids staying with them. Which I didn't want.

Also I wanted to show, how with age and time, a relationship strengthens? How maturity, trust and understanding are important in any relationship.

Had Yash reacted angrily (which is such a cliched thing), then it would've ruined two marriages and lives of so four people, not to forget their kids

Rosey I've did it so many times that Yash has always been my favorite character. I love to write on his character. So here also I loved writing on him. It showed so many different sides of him.

Aarti wss young and immature when she was in love with Prashant. After her marriage, when she saw Yash's caring and loving nature, she was able to forget all about her past. Her honesty is what won Yash's heart. On their first night he saw, despite her being forced into this marriage, she trusted him. Which was another thing that made him fall in love with her. He never broke that trust of her. And she was always honest with him.

That's what this OS is all about.

And thanks for helping me in this. Love you too ❤️

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roserosey

@roserosey

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Posted: 10 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: lovely_nikki

Rosey 🤗

Thank you thank you thank you for all your Love and Wishes ❤️

You are so right, our AarYa is an evergreen couple.
At first I was not sure whether I should show twentieth anniversary or not? I thought to go for tenth. But then I would've to show kids staying with them. Which I didn't want.
Also I wanted to show, how with age and time, a relationship strengthens? How maturity, trust and understanding are important in any relationship.

Had Yash reacted angrily (which is such a cliched thing), then it would've ruined two marriages and lives of so four people, not to forget their kids

Rosey I've did it so many times that Yash has always been my favorite character. I love to write on his character. So here also I loved writing on him. It showed so many different sides of him.

Aarti wss young and immature when she was in love with Prashant. After her marriage, when she saw Yash's caring and loving nature, she was able to forget all about her past. Her honesty is what won Yash's heart. On their first night he saw, despite her being forced into this marriage, she trusted him. Which was another thing that made him fall in love with her. He never broke that trust of her. And she was always honest with him.

That's what this OS is all about.

And thanks for helping me in this. Love you too ❤️

🤗

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cuteariya

@cuteariya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#44

awesome OS
arya was so cute ❤️ ❤️
awe aarti was blushing thinking abt passionate night with yash 😳 😳
palak & ansh wish her so many time for their parent wedding anniversary 🥳 🥳
so yash invite his new friend for dinner
when yash came he couldn't take his eyes from aarti 😉 😉
but aarti got shocked to see prashant there even he got shocked to see her after 20 years 😲 😲
arya kitchen romance was cute 😉 😉
first aarti & prashant felt awkward with each other but after they start to talk it was easy
OMG aarti & prashant were in love & they wanted to get married 😲 😲
but aarti parent force her to marry yash
yash knew everything but still didn't say anything
aarti thought that he don't believe her
but yash explain everything
yash is so understanding caring lovly person & husband 🤗 🤗
he love & trust aarti so much ❤️ ❤️
prashant was also told abt his & arpita's story
how he married her in the first he didn't accept her as his wife
but she always care abt him & his famlys never complain abt anything
prashant realize his feeling when arpita saved his mom & almost lost her own life 🤗 🤗
after prashan left arya moment was emotional & passionate 😳 😳

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kmfan_2

@kmfan_2

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Posted: 10 years ago

#45

Hi Nikki,

Wishing you a very happy anniversary here!🤗

You must have wondered why do I keep my comments short for most of your fictions especially MTB which you call as your heart and soul. Well, some stories are great but hard for me to comment as I can't by nature be aggressive towards the characters...so I just comment to the point to keep you encouraged. Also I started reading MTB much later so never got myself fully involved in it.

This OS I must confess has been one of my most brilliant reads lately.👏

Why? First and foremost I was reminded of Kabhie Kabhie the most fantastic mature film ever made with Amitabh and Shashi Kapoor at their best!⭐️

So many times, one gets married and moves on in life thinking it was "a crime" to be in love when young which is a folly according to me...It is very natural for one to be attracted or in love as the case may be at that time but some convert it into marriage and some let go of it trusting their parents' decision as the one right for them .

What a beautiful way to show that when individuals are mature --- friendships between past couples can be maintained without the passions in their present lives decreasing after all ---- both couples here in question have wonderful children of their own ---so "doubt" has no place to enter here!

I simply loved the focus you gave on romance throughout their lives which most people feel subsides with years in marriage. It may not be steamy at all ---but the small gestures say a lot about the closeness in a couple as was seen between Prashant and Arpita...telephone conversations!

Nikki -- I think I'll end up writing an essay on this story ---that's the extent to which I loved it.

Thank you dear and many good wishes to you always!

God bless you!

Edited by kmfan_2 - 10 years ago

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Lincy_Lins

@lovemoon_003

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Posted: 10 years ago

#46

Awesome Update Nikki di... 👏 👍🏼
Different Story...Loved it a lot.. 🤗
Ansh and Palak are teenage Children 😛
wow thatz nice Prashant and Arpita are Pair in this OS...I loved Prashant and Arpita's Love Story... 👍🏼
Our AarYa is always Fantastic 😳 no one can beat our AarYa's romance ☺️
I loved Title a lot "Open and Closed Door" di u very nicely written title's explaination...
Totally Enjoyed Surprise Update a lot 😳

Edited by Lincy_Lins - 10 years ago

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lovely_nikki

@lovely_nikki

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Posted: 10 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: caller123
Oh this is wonderful gift for us on your anniversary Nikki..
It was a different concept and here you made Prashanth marry Arpitha.😉
Yash really understand his wife. The way he brought Prashanth and let the things happen prove it.
Can't blame Aarthi too. Every girl would go through the same if it happened to her. But how each thing solved was treat to read.
Aarpitha and Prashanth were meant to be as much as Aarya. So the things happened that way. Aarthi met Yash her soul mate who made her forget Prashanth and moved on and Prashanth met Arpitha who made him forget his past though she had to go through rejection some time unlike Yash.
Though I do not like this forced marriages I can see here this forced marriages made Prashanth and Aarthi meet their soul mates.
I can see that both couples are so much in love.
Oh these Aarya🤢
Palak is so naughty. Wonder what will she say after Ansh gets married.😆

Thank you so much for this lovely OS. It's just brilliant and I'm sorry for the late comment. I just got some time free now only.

Kate last year I gave you all the OS "Passionate Encounters", which was a romantic one. This one is a bit mature type. So I wasn't sure about the response that I'll get. But I'm loved the response that I got from the readers.

Yes I made Prashant marry Arpita. Now our AarYa can live happily ever after 😆

Yash had seen the guilty look on Aarti's face on their wedding night itself. So he sort of knew how she will react. To make both Prashant and Aarti comfortable he took this step. He knew that now they both don't have any feelings left for one another, so why to afraid to face the past?

Yes we can't blame Aarti also. She was forced to marry him. She was lucky that she got such and loving, caring and understanding husband, who made her forget her past.

The same goes for Prashant and Arpita also. They all were Meant to Be.

Thanks so much for all your, wishes, love and support ❤️

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lovely_nikki

@lovely_nikki

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Posted: 10 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: cuteariya
awesome OS
arya was so cute ❤️ ❤️
awe aarti was blushing thinking abt passionate night with yash 😳 😳
palak & ansh wish her so many time for their parent wedding anniversary 🥳 🥳
so yash invite his new friend for dinner
when yash came he couldn't take his eyes from aarti 😉 😉
but aarti got shocked to see prashant there even he got shocked to see her after 20 years 😲 😲
arya kitchen romance was cute 😉 😉
first aarti & prashant felt awkward with each other but after they start to talk it was easy
OMG aarti & prashant were in love & they wanted to get married 😲 😲
but aarti parent force her to marry yash
yash knew everything but still didn't say anything
aarti thought that he don't believe her
but yash explain everything
yash is so understanding caring lovly person & husband 🤗 🤗
he love & trust aarti so much ❤️ ❤️
prashant was also told abt his & arpita's story
how he married her in the first he didn't accept her as his wife
but she always care abt him & his famlys never complain abt anything
prashant realize his feeling when arpita saved his mom & almost lost her own life 🤗 🤗
after prashan left arya moment was emotional & passionate 😳 😳

I love to read your point to point comments. There's hardly any scene that you miss. Thanks so much 🤗

It was AarYa's 20th anniversary. Yet their romance is fresh as a newly married couple. AarYa's kids are the naughtiest. 😆

Yash regretted his decision to bring his friend, the moment he saw his gorgeous wife. But he wanted to make them comfortable in each other's company, that's why he invited Prashant. He wanted to prove that he was fine with their friendship. That proved the immense trust he have on Aarti.

Prashant's side of the story was also necessary to show that he too have moved on in his life and is happy with Arpita. 😳

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lovely_nikki

@lovely_nikki

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Posted: 10 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: kmfan_2
Hi Nikki,
Wishing you a very happy anniversary here!🤗

You must have wondered why do I keep my comments short for most of your fictions especially MTB which you call as your heart and soul. Well, some stories are great but hard for me to comment as I can't by nature be aggressive towards the characters...so I just comment to the point to keep you encouraged. Also I started reading MTB much later so never got myself fully involved in it.

This OS I must confess has been one of my most brilliant reads lately.👏
Why? First and foremost I was reminded of Kabhie Kabhie the most fantastic mature film ever made with Amitabh and Shashi Kapoor at their best!⭐️

So many times, one gets married and moves on in life thinking it was "a crime" to be in love when young which is a folly according to me...It is very natural for one to be attracted or in love as the case may be at that time but some convert it into marriage and some let go of it trusting their parents' decision as the one right for them .

What a beautiful way to show that when individuals are mature --- friendships between past couples can be maintained without the passions in their present lives decreasing after all ---- both couples here in question have wonderful children of their own ---so "doubt" has no place to enter here!

I simply loved the focus you gave on romance throughout their lives which most people feel subsides with years in marriage. It may not be steamy at all ---but the small gestures say a lot about the closeness in a couple as was seen between Prashant and Arpita...telephone conversations!

Nikki -- I think I'll end up writing an essay on this story ---that's the extent to which I loved it.

Thank you dear and many good wishes to you always!
God bless you!

Hey Shanti, 🤗

Now I will end up writing a essay on your comment.

First of all Thank you so much for your wishes. And your love and support. 🤗

I can understand what you mean about MTB. It's ok if you can't get that involved in it. I won't even mind if you can't and won't comment in it. Your love and support will always be there for me.

I know in MTB many scenarios might look unrealistic. Like Prashant killing himself. Or all that physical and mental violence and Aarti bearing it quietly, without protesting. Not everyone can read and react on such type of stuff. Everyone has different perspective on different things. That's why I said that I won't mind if you can't comment.

Now coming to this OS. Well I will have to tell you a secret. I don't know how you and other writers gets inspirations for their stories? How they get their scenes, but in my case sometimes I see a scene sequence in my dream. If I immediately get up, I'll remember it. Most of the time I don't remember it by the time I wake up.

Couple of weeks back, the dining table scene from this OS had come in my dream. But in there, the actual scenes was that Aarti and Prashant are busy chatting, when Yash says that it's looks like you two were more than just friends. Then Aarti tells him about Prashant's reality.

Prashant goes out and leaves the door slightly open. Yash is sitting with an angry face. That's when Aarti tells him about the open door and it's symbolism. Yash then gets up and opens the door.

Luckily I remembered it when I woke up. I immediately wanted to write an OS on it. Then I thought that it's so cliched that husband will get angry after learning about his wife's affair in the past.

I wanted to show maturity and trust in a couples relationship. I wanted to show that if there is trust and understanding, no past can come in between a couple. That's when I decided to show it this way.

Yes it took Prashant a year to accept Arpita as his wife, but once he did, he never stopped loving her. In both couples marriage, they have immense trust and love for each other. That's why Yash said that if you don't have any such feelings then why afraid to renew the old friendship?

Shanti thanks for reminding me of Kabhi Kabhi movie. I love all the songs from that movie. I hated it when Amitabh's character is not ready to forgive Waheeda for she had an affair and had an child from that affair. He forgot his own past. On the other hand Shashi Kapoor trusted his wife..

Regarding romance in this OS. Well with age love blossoms. Romance has no age. Even a 70 year old couple can romance if they feel young at heart. And here AarYa are only in their forties. After so many years of marriage, there is no inhibition, no shyness between them. They know and understand each other's wants and needs and desires so well.

Yet I was not sure how the readers will react to the romance of a couple who are married for 20 years? But they loved it.

I know I have thanked you a million times, yet I still want to thank you for all your love and support. Always stay blessed and be what you are. Don't ever change for anyone or anything. Love you for what you are. ❤️

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lovely_nikki

@lovely_nikki

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Posted: 10 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: Lincy_Lins
Awesome Update Nikki di... 👏 👍🏼
Different Story...Loved it a lot.. 🤗
Ansh and Palak are teenage Children 😛
wow thatz nice Prashant and Arpita are Pair in this OS...I loved Prashant and Arpita's Love Story... 👍🏼
Our AarYa is always Fantastic 😳 no one can beat our AarYa's romance ☺️
I loved Title a lot "Open and Closed Door" di u very nicely written title's explaination...
Totally Enjoyed Surprise Update a lot 😳

Lincy 🤗

This is a mature story of a middle aged couple. That's why our AarYa kids are grown up kids in this OS. But they are still the same naughty kids. After all they are AarYa kids, na? 😆

To show that Prashant too has moved on in life, I had to show his story in detail.

AarYa and their evergreen romance . Wait till you read their mature and naughty romance in MTB 😳

Lincy, even I love the title of this OS. It's so symbolic for this OS.

I enjoyed writing it, as much as you enjoyed reading it 😳