Arya SS ~ The Unexpected Gift ~ pt 8 ON PG 36 -updated 15/8/16

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saf24

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Posted: 10 years ago

#121

Superb update. Love the detail and the mixture of memories with the present. Fantastic job as always and looking forward to what isin store next.

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Lincy_Lins

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Posted: 10 years ago

#122

Awesome Awesome Awesome update Maha Chellam 😉

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 10 years ago

#123

Maha sweetie I think you started this OS when I was not active on the forum. And later I couldn't read it. Now I am happy that I started reading it or else I would've missed on such a sweet and beautiful and heart touching story.

Chapter - 1

I don't know what was the reason for Yash to leave his pregnant wife and his parents like this. But he sure is regretting now. His guilt is quite evident. You have described Yash's guilt and Palak's innocence and her naughtiness so nicely and so precisely that one can feel those emotions. Hats off to you. ⭐️

Radha Ma's anger is justified. What Yash did was despicable. He needs to apologize to his wife and daughter and pay and repent for his mistakes.

Loved the first meeting of Yash and Palak. 😳

Will read the second chapter soon as I want to read about AarYa's first meeting after four years.

Sorry for the delay in reading this OS. Now that I have started reading it, I will read it till the end. But please bear with me for my late comments.

Love you sweetie 🤗

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 10 years ago

#124

Chapter - 2

Once again 👏

The emotions were strongly felt in your words. ⭐️

Finally Aarti saw Yash. I can understand what she went through after seeing him in front of her after so many years. Her hurt and rejection and aloofness is justified. Yash deserves it.

I wonder what agreement he made her sign on their wedding day? I am sure it must be related to him going to America. You have done a great job in keeping the suspense in why Yash left them. 👏

Palak is such an innocent soul. My heart went out to her when I saw her yearning for her father. I am so happy that her wish got fulfilled on her birthday.

How did she found out the truth about Yash being her father? Well I think Yash didn't tell her. Their maid or someone else must've told her. Or she must've heard some kind of conversation between someone.

Once again amazing job with chapter - 2. 👏

Will read the next one soon 😛

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lovely_nikki

@lovely_nikki

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Posted: 10 years ago

#125

Chapter - 3

Another bittersweet update. 👏

Loved Palak's birthday party. She was feeling on cloud nine that she got her Papa on her birthday. God made sure that Palak find a way to learn about the identity of her father.

Aarti's insecurities is understandable. Till now she has raised Palak alone. Now all of a sudden Yash is back and making a place in her life. Aarti's fears are justified.

She is so jealous of Priya 😉. Priya has made an entry at the right now. Because of her now Aarti is in Yash's room, in his bed, in their bed 😳

So Yash first became her friend then her husband. I loved this 😳. Waiting to see how he became her husband and what promoted him to leave such a loving and caring life partner?

Once again brilliant job Maha ⭐️

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 10 years ago

#126

Chapter - 4

Awesome update 👏

Yash's efforts in pacifying Aarti are increasing, while her fears and insecurities are increasing. She's scared that is she goes close to him again, he will leave her again. She won't be able to take the second heartbreak.

But Yash won't leave her now. He will do everything in his power to make her forgive him and accept him.

Loved the bus ride and also loved AarYa scenes with Palak. Shobha Ma's scene was emotional and touching. But her demise brought AarYa closer.

Priya and Palak are playing Cupid. 😳

Waitimg to see what Yash has planned for Aarti and how she will react to it? 😃

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nirmala

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Posted: 10 years ago

#127

Super update Maha...

Loved d way u tried to bring Aarya together through Palak...Waiting 4 wat did Aarti hear....

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Keerthana_KSian

@Keerthana_KSian

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Posted: 10 years ago

#128

Wonderful update. Loved the bus travel, the flash back made me sad and atlast ended with a smile. Would like to see more scenes of aarti's jealousy. Left me with guess what happens to aarti. Update soon i'm waitinggg...