Koi Aap Sa Part 16 Pg No. 25

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nirmala

@nirmalac99

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#61

OMG such a hilarious update...Enjoyed every bit of Aarti's carefree attitude....She didn care for a poor guy who fell in d floor....Had a hearty laugh....Thank u so much...

Edit:Take care of ur health 2

Edited by nirmalac99 - 11 years ago

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annirogc

@annirogc

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#62

wonderful update dear.. aarti is really cute.. waiting for next update..

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Sharlene1410

@Sharlene1410

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#63

Read 4 chapters one after the other must say you are a good writer this story is fun very enjoyable love Aarti to the max carefree very spoilt with yash their friendship is amazing.

PS read you said you were in an accldent hope all is well now.

Edited by sb1410 - 11 years ago

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roserosey

@roserosey

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#64

thats a hilarious part😆😆

aarthi...such a crazy girl😆😆... yash is too good as her buddy...

omg aarthi had yash in trouble... thats ok she herself will solve his problem😆

omg pari slapped prateik😲😲...

hilarious update😆😆

b/n hope everything is fine with u now...

take care ...

get well soon

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Folla

@Folla

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Posted: 11 years ago

#65

i hope your fine now amazing part so excited to next part

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Shashi1984

@Shashi1984

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#66

Superb update. Poor Yash, Aarti is bossing over him. She ruined his date with Arpita. Lovely friendship between the two. Loved Prateek and Pari too.

Hey! You met with an accident. I hope you are fine now. Take care.

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lovely_nikki

@lovely_nikki

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#67

Hey Prachi first of all, how are you? You said you were in hospital because of your accident. I hope it was something small and you didn't got hurt much.

Secondly I'm sorry for the late comment. Read last 2-3 chapters in one go. I'm loving this story so much. It's totally different from what I've read so far on AarYa.

I'm in love with your writing style. You've defined Every character so beautifully. While reading the story, I can visualize them in front of my eyes.

The Hindi words/ dialogues gives it a different feel which is so much enjoyable. I'm enjoying Aarti's more enjoyable with Hindi dialogues.

She was so desperate to get ragged, poor Yash. And Pari's ragging added fuel to fire. 😆. Aarti is real JKR here. Now Arpita is upset, wonder how will Yash manaofy her now.

Yash and Aarti's friendship is so innocent. Wonder how will they come together and fall in love.

Take care of yourself Prachi. And once again sorry for the late commenting.

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prachidalmia

@prachidalmia

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#68

NOTE

Thank you for you well wish and concern for my accident. I am still in the recovery stage and still in hospital and my updates will be bit irregular till the time the fracture in my hand is completely healed as it pains a lot when I am trying to type for a long time. But once I recover the updates will be more frequent and quick.

However I have almost partly completed typing the next part only the last bit is left so will be updating is by today evening or tomorrow.