Koi Aap Sa Part 16 Pg No. 25

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi guys,

I have been a silent reader for a long time and after reading so many stories, I though of writing one myself as well. This is my first attempt to write something. So I am just giving a brief outlet of my story and if you guys like it I will be writing it further.

Prolouge

This is the story of three friends ? Yash, Aarti, and Arpita. They have as much fun fighting as they have making up. Their lives are full of fun, frolic and in Yash's case ? football. Yash is basically a fun loving and sporty guy. He doesn't have a worry in the world! However, during the course of the story, other sides to his character are revealed.

Yash loves Arpita and his best friend Aarti is forever giving him tips on how to woo the pretty miss. However, the fact that most of these tips backfire is another reason for Yash and Aarti to fight some more. But matters soon get sorted out once Aarti's fianc, Prashant arrives on the scene.

Now there are four instead of three of them having fun together. But one terrible night shatters Aarti's life forever she loses her laughter. It is at this juncture that Yash and Aarti's existing relationship develops into something much deeper.

I will be waiting for your comments criticism is also welcomed. Please do let me know if you like the concept and wont me to continue the story.

Index
Character Sketch - Page No. 2
Part 1 - Page No. 4
Part 2 - Page No. 6
Part 3 - Page No. 7
Part 4 - Page No. 9
Part 5 - Page No. 9
Part 6 - Page No. 10
Part 7 - Page No. 12
Part 8 - Page No. 13
Part 9 - Page No. 14
Part 10 - Page No. 15
Part 11 - Page No. 17
Part 12 - Page No. 18
Part 13 - Page No. 20
Part 14 - Page No. 22
Part 15 - Page No. 24
Part 16 - Page No. 25

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Leevi05 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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welcome to pv forum
waiting for chap 1😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey Prachi,
Welcome to the writers world 🤗

I loved the prologue and I'm interested to read further.

I might be a little late in reading and commenting as I'll be very busy till mid June, but I'd love to read this story.
Do send me PMs 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey Prachi... Kuch kuch hota hai...dear...loved the prologue and reminded me a bit of the said movie... and am a lover of sports ... so am sure...yours is going to be an interesting one with the trio Yash-Arpita-Arti.

Go ahead -- U will rock dear and count me IN.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey Prachi welcome to the Forum 😃

you will have lots of fun here, stay happy


waooo veryyy nice keep doing 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi Prachi,
As Nikki I also welcome you to the writers world.🤗

Oh I'm so much in love with the prologue and I'm waiting for the updates. Please update soon dear... We are waiting.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey Prachi Prolouge is very nice...concept is different, waiting for chpt - 1 continue soon...😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome start.. prologue is really intreasting.. continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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prachi i believe that evergreen interesting concept was a triangle love story ❤️😉
the prologue seems very very interesting 😃
i m very much in to read furthur...
thats great to know that we had know another writer to entertain us 👏

all the best 👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
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that's so intersting so excited to the update

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