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jhil

@jhillyarya

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: RA17
Hey dear i have read first time your work
and i can its simple, sweet , lovely and heart warming like we human are

no twist but adorable one and the understanding, sharing, care and concern turn out to be true love its blissful dear

really liked it a lot

thanks for penning down for us👏

thanx dear..

i also get ur cmmnt 1st time. i am nt so new, have one FF ongoing but like this first attmp.

glad to know u liked the simple plot..

thanx once again😊

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Shashi1984

@Shashi1984

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Hey! It's superb! A sweet, romantic treat for the weekend. Thanks for this beautiful OS.

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RIYA

@RA17

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: jhillyarya

thanx dear..
i also get ur cmmnt 1st time. i am nt so new, have one FF ongoing but like this first attmp.
glad to know u liked the simple plot..
thanx once again😊

well hopefully will come at your ff too 😉

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Pankhudi

@..Pankhudi..

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Hey Jhil 😃,

You write so well ...loved it ..do come up with more . I would love to read them .😳

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Mahalakshmi

@maha9

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Awesome OS dear 🤗
simply super with small and neat yet you gave the romantic feel through it dear
so a smile has played this much role in our arya's life how sweet dear !!!!

thank u so much for giving me a chance to read such a nice story dear
do more okie 😉

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Sweetu

@SwtuAryan_Ishra

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

awww..thats superrbbb update meri pyaari jhil..😳
Spicy and salty..🤢
So,yash have to eat sweet things before romantic session..😆
then,aarti wont arise questions..
Awesome update..loved it baby..😛

Edited by SweetyAaryan - 11 years ago

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Chitra_11

@Chitra_11

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Language of smile -- a smile that created an instant bond that later turned into feelings to further convey their expression -- ARYA used that very smile as language of love...with a salt touch. Fab work Jhil...u rocked😃