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Posted: 11 years ago

#481

Hello Nikki... a big hug from me dear...🤗 Hope life is treating you fine and keeping you healthy and smiling. Warm welcome...😃

Determination and manipulation are the words for this episode. It is sheer determination of Gayathri Ma to fight for right for Arti in her own way...though she was fooled by Prashant's sweet and nice act. A war she fought alone ( not to forget my salute to - Ram Dhulare - loyal servant of G3).

The reasons of Yash not responding to G3's call and later Yash to G3's call --- was reasonable and sad. How one's pressure/conditions can harm one's life...wish Surajji didn't react the way he did -- the scenario would have been different and most of all -- for what reason he was fighting for -- the very reason he blocked on his own...ofcourse without understanding the situation and emotions of G3...A man who can lend his ear to Ma didn't bother to be patient with G3's side of explanation...his anger and ego ruined it all.

Beautiful flashback of childhood memories :

No person is born bad...it is the weak who gets pulled by manipulation and Ammaji's tricks worked on Prashant - an age where the mind is free of corruption but affection won the manipulation. To be honest - I did feel bad for Prashant as well as G3 Ma..for no mother would like to see his well behaved son growing rude day by day...felt bad for Prashant -- for he became the victim of manipulation and wish he didn't get influenced by the tricks of Ammaji but that doesn't stop one from hating the way he became.

Nikki - Nicely written and one could see - that you take extreme care and effort in trying to bring out the exact emotion of every characters involved..👏

Waiting for your next update and me - buying time. Thanks for the sincere effort as the result is brilliant. Take care...will read as and when I get time.😃

Edited by chitsri65 - 11 years ago

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#482

Originally posted by: RA17
oh it seems P end is like sab kisi cheez ki aati hoti hai tab tab uss chiz ka khatam hona zarrori ho jaata hai
hmm i guess im getting into right direction
yeah even me too now start making visit too other forums as well n now gc n ks too move on but aaarya is n will always be spl so is this story to us so no probs i have all the time n you hhave few loyal reader who is looking foreard till end
thnaks love you so much
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Yes it'll be like that only. The whole actual truth is related to that one incident. I've heard or read somewhere, that when a persons end is near, they'll either do something good before dying or something extremely horrific. This is what I'll show here.

It'll all be out on 31st chapter. I'll be posting chapter 30 after replying on these last few comments.

I stalk other forums but none seem to impress me. I don't have time to read stories from other forums, so I just go to read updates on the episodes.

Like you said AarYa will always be special and so will this forum, as long as it's still running.

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#483

Originally posted by: roserosey
hola...nikki di🤗 welcome back to the forum ...i guess i m the last one to welcome u officially😕.hope u had a great time with ur family...
i kept on reading all ur stories back to back when u were not there in the forum but when u were there i m almost missing... i think this is the first time i m commenting this late that too on MTB which was the reason of all this journey so far...i m so sorry for that ...i dont lie i m here in this forum since three days but couldnt catch up some time to comment coz firstly i got lost talking to all i missed out here all these days... and secondly i need to get into the feel of the chapter to comment which i had long back...i m so sorry di...

and and this much awaited chapter was no way less than all ur intense updates on MTB (u r feeling that it didnt come out as u want) let me tell u di...how matured u r as a writer now...u already brought up many issues into light which were still bothering in this so called technologically advanced new age world...and u justified all the issues in such an amazing way and u r still doing it...👏

only thing i can say after reading this MTB so far...is... noone should be as unlucky as aarthi and no one will be as lucky as aarthi(as i have an idea what u r making her life to be...)

regarding an update now :😳
fantastic update di...
i always felt that apart from yash and aarthi as prime focus and most of the story revolves around them ... gayathri was the backbone of the story as she had her strong presence in everyones life...firstly salute to that strong lady who very gracefully protected her family from all the major storms though her most loved people(aarthi and yash ) r hurt to such an extent that broke her...she always justified her role as a best mother one can ever get (her motherly love could be felt when she cares for aarthi , care for yash, even now she cries for prasanth after all he was her son...who was spoiled to no extent infront of her own eyes still she couldnt do anything... she became a helpless mother in many situations still she managed somehow to face the truth of the life...
the way she stood for aarthi...supported her loved her cared for her when noone i meant noone was there for her ...everyone showed their back when she really needed one...i m glad that even with all the tragic storms aarthi had to go through in her since childhood she is atleast that lucky to have gayathri on her side in some major storms of her life...

and ammaji she is the worst of a human...even though she had her issues with her bahus or something like that ...but then out of her anger and her dominating ego she shouldnt have spoiled that child s mind...that was the reason of all that happened... sadly she didnt yet realize that what her doings spoiled the life of three people... i just hate her 😡😡...i hust only pray 😡that soon she will realize what she did...and repent for her lifetime

and that was the beautiful relation yash and gayathri shares👏... and truly they r bound by heart rather blood...they relation is divine... any mother-daughter/son relation is divine but its just that prasanth spoiled all that ...
but u see if i think now prasanth had his set of issues so he became like that but that is inexcusable to play with the life of an innocent girl that to just he needs to satisfy his ego of defeating his bro... 😡😡

and SP i think his behaviour is never justified towards gayathri... he never actually underst
ood her nature he only cared for her as he though she is taking good care of their family...when he felt that something is wrong he just lashed at her 😡😡...
i hope SP should apologise to gayathri for his inexcusable behaviour when he should be her biggest support😳

really a fantastic writeup di👏...
hope to read next one soon di...it doesnot matter which one of ur story u gonna update
have a great week di...
takecare...🤗

Thanks for welcoming me 🤗

My trip was excellent 😛

Rosey there was a time when you were the first one to reserve and comment. And now you are the second last one. But I totally understand. We all have become busy with our personal lives.

Btw how was the wedding? Hope you didn't ate too much sweets 😆

Thanks so much for reading my stories again in my absence. Most of the threads are closed. Even MTB's third thread is closed.

Rosey as I was not in touch with the story when I was away, I forgot so many original things. Luckily I had outlined Important points that's why I was able to work on it. But I lost the feel and essence of the whole chapter. Now I'm happy that those who read this chapter loved it, as many things came out in the open.

Aarti's reason for marrying Prashant and many more will be revealed in the next chapter, that I'll post after replying to Chitra's comment.

Regarding Gayatri, I feel that she's the main protagonist and Ammaji is the main antagonist in this story. 😆. Ok jokes apart, it's sort of true, cause everything is linked to these two characters. One turned out to be a true home maker and the other turned out to be a home wrecker.

@Bold

I loved what you wrote about Aarti. Yes she is the most unluckiest person right now. Soon she'll become the luckiest person. Yash will make sure about it, along with the help of the whole family.

Gayatri-Yash equation and Yash-Palak equation is the same. They are bonded by heart and not blood.

Suraj's side is coming up next. So get ready for it 😳

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#484

Originally posted by: chitsri65
Hello Nikki... a big hug from me dear...🤗 Hope life is treating you fine and keeping you healthy and smiling. Warm welcome...😃

Determination and manipulation are the words for this episode. It is sheer determination of Gayathri Ma to fight for right for Arti in her own way...though she was fooled by Prashant's sweet and nice act. A war she fought alone ( not to forget my salute to - Ram Dhulare - loyal servant of G3).

The reasons of Yash not responding to G3's call and later Yash to G3's call --- was reasonable and sad. How one's pressure/conditions can harm one's life...wish Surajji didn't react the way he did -- the scenario would have been different and most of all -- for what reason he was fighting for -- the very reason he blocked on his own...ofcourse without understanding the situation and emotions of G3...A man who can lend his ear to Ma didn't bother to be patient with G3's side of explanation...his anger and ego ruined it all.

Beautiful flashback of childhood memories :

No person is born bad...it is the weak who gets pulled by manipulation and Ammaji's tricks worked on Prashant - an age where the mind is free of corruption but affection won the manipulation. To be honest - I did feel bad for Prashant as well as G3 Ma..for no mother would like to see his well behaved son growing rude day by day...felt bad for Prashant -- for he became the victim of manipulation and wish he didn't get influenced by the tricks of Ammaji but that doesn't stop one from hating the way he became.

Nikki - Nicely written and one could see - that you take extreme care and effort in trying to bring out the exact emotion of every characters involved..👏

Waiting for your next update and me - buying time. Thanks for the sincere effort as the result is brilliant. Take care...will read as and when I get time.😃

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Thanks so much for the warm welcome.

I was waiting for your comment. I used to check the thread daily to see whether you've commented or not? As you were late, I sort of guessed that you too must've become busy with personal stuff. It's ok take your time to read. As long as you're still interested in it and will comment, I won't mind late comments.

Now coming to the main comment.

OMG I think this is the longest comment from you on MTB. So you can imagine how happy I'm right now.

Gayatri though being such a strong woman, finally became helpless when, on one side her son fooled her and on the other her husband accused her.

Chitra RamDulare's main part will come when Aarti's whole truth will come out. That time you'll know how loyal he's to Gayatri. He can do anything for Gayatri.

I wanted to show valid reasons for Gayatri not being able to reach or contact Yash. Why Suraj reacted the way he did, is coming up next. Whether his actions were justifiable or not, I don't know. I want to show (as I believe) that sometimes humans become helpless in front of circumstances. Either we emerge as a strong person. Or we might succumb under pressure or misconceptions and become weak. Suraj was angry and he reacted in anger. Not giving Gayatri any chance to defend herself.

Another thing that I strongly believe is that no person is born bad. Circumstances and then later their own choice makes them bad. Ammaji instigated Prashant. He had so many chances to reform, yet he choose to go on that destructive path. Which ultimately lead to so much destruction. In all this, Gayatri is the one, who lost her son. She saw him drifting apart. Tried to help him, but couldn't do it.

Now also she's alone and suffering as her husband is not with her. Their story will be shown in the first part of the next chapter, which I'll post after replying to you.

Yes this time I'm giving an early update 😆

Chitra as this story is my first fiction and is very close to my heart, I want to focus and give proper justice to each characters that I've shown in this story. No extra or unnecessary characters are there. The names mentioned in the character list, will all have an important part to play.

Thanks so much for everything. Will wait for your comment on the next updates. Take your time to comment. I'm ready to wait for as long as it takes, just like you guys wait for the updates.

Take care and see you soon 🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago

#486

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caller123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#487

👏👏Nikki first part..😭

It's true it all happened because of their less communication..Yash is right.

This Ammaji's taunts made their lives hell.😡😡

I think this ammaji was jealous with Radha as she got the love of her son but G3 she hated hated her because she didn't get SP's love as a wife. It seems ammaji couldn't bear to see the love he got from SP as a mom to share with someone..

She was insecure and she created scenes. She was greedy for SP's love and she thought if they stay together as a happy family no one will listen to her and she will not get the love of Sp anymore.

How selfish is this Ammaji and how cruel. She gave a bad impression of mothers. Mothers happiness lies on children's happiness but for her😡😡😡

So at last SP accepted his love for G3 .. Oh what a confession in front of his children😆😆😆

SP and G3😳😳

hmmm if he became numb after hearing what happened to Aarthi after her marraige .. then what would have to the one who went through all that daily.

If.. he was ready to see what amma is doing at that time innocent girl would have been saved.

Prashanth.. Was he blind?? How could he do to this t an innocent girl just to get revenge from his brother.. Is he a man? If he had revenge with Yash he could have face him rather than who is weaker than him..

Nikki I really hate him.. His hatred ruined a girls life and this ammaji.. her jealousy ruined Aarthi's life..

SP .. His blindness and jumping to conclusions without going through the facts ruined Aarthi's life.

Nikki awesome part.. This part was much needed dear... much more than anything else.. This gave the reasons for the questions we had.

👏

Hats off to you Nikki for the job well done⭐️

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caller123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#488

Part 2

Nikki, I don't know what to say.

This Prashanth rascal has done so much to her.. 😡 Which I was afraid😭

So those photos are of Yash's... His accident... How much hatred he had for Yash and those seeds were planted by tat stupid Ammaji..

don't know whom I hate most Prashanth or that Ammaji...😡😡😡

I hate them to the core..

Aarthi is pure at heart.. she did so much for Yash, G3 and her kid sister whom she loved most in her life.

She gave up her life her soul for them.

giving up life is easier than soul and dignity..

😭 What a life😭

Good thing is Prashanth dead.. Otherwise who are reading this would have killed him. Why he got an easy death?

He should have suffered and died..

What he knows about a girl's life and her dreams?

He snatched away something we most value from Aarthi.

How could h abuse her like this?

He is not a man but a coward.. Coz whenever he fights with Yash he took revenge from someone weaker than him..

I really HATE him HATE him.

I wonder how many girls are going through this each day?

Nikki this is a much needed FF. I know I told you earlier and I'm repeating it.

Nikki, I wonder whether I will have courage to read the next. If Yash dropped his tea cup hearing those it means it's so scary

I think even Yash will need time to come out of that past..

All the family members will need time to come out of their guilt...

But whatever happened to Aarthi is cannot be repaired.

Nobody can give her back those days and what she lost.

They only can repent. I wish no girl ever go through this in their lives. I wish and I wish

Awesome work Nikki. I know what must you have of gone through to write this and I know you need time to write the next..,Even you must have broken when you were writing this.

HATS OFF NIKKI for this work.👏

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roserosey

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Posted: 11 years ago

#489

u know di the first update gayathri broke down finally and letting her grief for once and all...is a one of its kind update...u really touched various zones which was amazing 👏...thats a marvellous job ⭐️...

finally gayathri let out all her grief she kept to herself all this years,...all this years till prasanths death she was fighting a lost battle...supporting an innocent girl who happened to be her dearest daughter in law through all the hardships she experienced ...only hardships...u know di more than gayathri-yash relation i feel extreme pride and reverence for gayathri-aarti s relation...

she hardly known aarthi but the support and strength she had given to her in the initial days till now... and tried as much as possible to protect her from the demon acts of her own son...she was aartis only confidant till now...

i salute the strength of this woman...to face it ...

do u know how much u r showing woman power... their strength their capabilities👏👏

and finally that was much needed talk b/n suraj and gayathri and the amazing part is everything happened infront ofeveryone now...including amma...she needs to realize atleast now what her antics made this family into...

thinking from surajs POV ...he is not alll wrong but the thing that went wrong is lack of communication, his blind rage when he felt that his wifes decisions r collapsing his sons life... (lack of trust for a certain moment) ...

confession of his love ...apologising to his deeds...with that he regained his respect atleast from me ...

ammaji s behaviour towards radha yash and gayathri...ahh she is getting onto my nerves now sick lady... i want to beat the hell out of her

now yash is all decided to protect palak from what all he endured... but the decision he took was not justified ...so i m waiting for aarthi to take a step forward after all her pain gets healed ( atleast she finds some peace now)...

marvellous job di 👏

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roserosey

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Posted: 11 years ago

#490

coming to the second update:

heart breaking update... so heart breaking... all i felt was kash wo maar deta aarti ko uusi din jis din usne use barbaat kar diya hain...she would not have to spent her life with all this grief... with all this what not...i dont have any words now...

but kudos to her strength ...she survived after all this ... after all she had to take care of her angel...and give her enough strength to face this somewhat cruel world...

i had tears di when she said that when she came to know the news abt her pregnancy...she wanted a girl child... mujhe hila diya...for this i can admire her forever...at that moment of time she herself is in dire need of support strength but still she collected all her strength to give birth to that angelic baby and raise her...

she loves yash ...dont even fathom to understand how deep it is how mad it is how pure it is... kya pyaar aisa hota hain...she is an epitome of unconditional love...

i couldnot understand... i need to pity for yash or aarthi...both r sailing on a same boat but i knew yash and aarthi will help each other...to ..to move on in life ...as past cant be rewritten but with all their tries future can be made in which ever way they want it to be...

swati...the way she broke her all ties with her di was one way of expression of her disappointment for her di who is ruining her life...for such a selfish mean people... kash isko batadiya hota sabkuch aarti ne...

hoping for the reunion of the sisters...

and regarding dubeys...umeed hi nahi hain mujhe ki woh realize honge...just forget them...

prasanth...dont want to waste my words and time for him... go to hell...oops... already went to hell...

i had a strong suspicion regarding what would have happened on that horrible night...let me see whats the actual truth is...

and another most important character Dr.Kiran...as a mentor she was alwaysthere for gayathri...and the support given by her to two helplesswoman is ...amazing...

overall ur hardwork paid off di... in a way we r getting involved in the feel of the characters while reading it...

wonderful job...specially for the second update...for showing aarthi as a strong woman👏

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