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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: caller123
Nikki I read all. what to say ya. You are awesome. Again you proved us you are a marvelous writer. I love the way how you described Aarthi and Yash so nice.
Yash wants Aarthi. Wonder who will become puppeteer.
Will Aarthi become a puppeteer in Yash. I saw your replies to one of comment that you will give us a hint in next chapter. I'll wait for that then.

Thanks so much Kate for another beautiful and encouraging comment from you.

I wanted to show their characters and their feelings for each other in an different way. And I loved this way better than the original cliched one.

Yash's want and desire to have Aarti was increasing day by day. Her presence in his office and around him was a sheer torture for him. And when he finally saw the same attraction from Aarti's side also. He couldn't hold it any longer and took this step.

Anyways he was a Casanova, a womanizer. So he knows very well how to make women dance at his tune like a puppet.

So we will have to see if Aarti dances at his tune and becomes his puppet or not? 😉

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: AnushaGK
I LOVED IT.
When is the next part coming?

Thanks Anusha.

The next part will come on Monday. I'll PM everyone 😊

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: kratzyfan
Nikki dear...what have u done😳😳...in the story, aarti is driving yash crazy..n here u r driving us crazy😆😆...this isn't that explicit as u have mentioned..but seeing the sample,i'm☺️🤢...n i think that update really need a warning😆😆...( may be nikki's first bold update😉😆)...

Anu dear I've started to love to kill you all by giving you such surprises 🤗

In the story Aarti is driving Yash crazy. 😡

And in the forum I'll drive you all crazy 😳

And Anu the Explicit part will come next week, as per the promo 🤢. Then you tell me how explicit it was 🤢

And I'll have to raise the warning level on that one 😆. OMG I'm scared as its really my first bold attempt 🤢

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: jayshu17
Lovely OS dear😳You are driving me crazy😉😆Your simple sample made me☺️🤢waiting for next update😳

Thanks Jayu 🤗

And I'm not at all sorry to drive you all crazy. I'm enjoying it 😈 😆

Even my sample made me 🤢

Next update on Monday 😳

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: lovely_nikki

Anu dear I've started to love to kill you all by giving you such surprises 🤗

In the story Aarti is driving Yash crazy. 😡

And in the forum I'll drive you all crazy 😳

And Anu the Explicit part will come next week, as per the promo 🤢. Then you tell me how explicit it was 🤢
And I'll have to raise the warning level on that one 😆. OMG I'm scared as its really my first bold attempt 🤢

looking forward to die🤢🤢...😆...

don't worry...we have full confidence on u..u r the best in whatever u do👍🏼...😃...

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Aisyah Abdul

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

OMG !! ☺️ I don't have any words to be written.. This is something new and different from you, Di !! ❤️ Nicely written !! 👏👏

Let see how our Aarti will handle our Casanova ! 😆 😉 😳

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roserosey

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

di omg u r awesome ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
great try on boss-secretory relation u know i love that boss-secretory love u know di that was gurmeet s previous show this is the reason i liked his show then and now ur os...
omg u r writing something out of ur safe zone and u did it perfectly so far...👏👏👏👏👏

hmmm...good to see yash attracted to aarthi despite of her simplicity😳😳want to aarthis pov 😉😳😳

awaiting with bated breath to know aarthis answer to yashs bold wish😳
as the title says puppet becomes puppeteer di my guess was aarthi gonna become puppeteer asshe is the puppet now obeying all the commands of yash as he is the boss...now when it comes to yash wanting aarthi...may be aarthi make him dance to her command now😆

Edited by roserosey - 12 years ago