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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: nan0102
love it..very interesting OS,,will be waiting for the next part😳

Thanks Nan for reading it.

I'll post the next part next week, by Monday 😳

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bilqeesbint Nazeer

@billieberry

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Awesome nikki di,👏⭐️

love d way u portray a shy and simple Aarti's character.👍🏼

Yash scindia a womanizer wow!😆

I love d way u described yash feeling superb👏! Aarti also got some feelings for him too?😕 i guess so😉

Boss nd PA lol!😆

Great pairing😃

This part was okay for me waiting for d next one😳

Let see who became puppeteer, who is puppet😛

Great job dear, continue soon 😳

thank you for d pm and comeback surprise OS

really love it, continue soon😊

And take care!..🤗

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Leevi05
continue nikki...

Will do it next Monday 😳

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palbhar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Oh wow Nikki 😛😛!!!!!! What a great comeback present for all of us!!!!!!

Goosebumps dear...Yash is sooo...yummy 😳😳!!!!!! Real M&B hero and Aarti is going to have a tough time keeping him away 😉😉!!!!

But the title says puppet becomes puppeteer so is Aarti the puppet or puppeteer?!!!!!

Can't wait for next update!!!!

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: palbhar
Oh wow Nikki 😛😛!!!!!! What a great comeback present for all of us!!!!!!
Goosebumps dear...Yash is sooo...yummy 😳😳!!!!!! Real M&B hero and Aarti is going to have a tough time keeping him away 😉😉!!!!

But the title says puppet becomes puppeteer so is Aarti the puppet or puppeteer?!!!!!

Can't wait for next update!!!!

Thanks Bharathi for such a beautiful comment 😳

You've no idea how many goose bumps I got while writing this, especially the next part which will come next week. I almost 🤢. Even I'm in love with this Yash. He's so dreamy and so 🤢

And that's the secret, who is the puppet and who is the puppeteer? 😉

You'll get a glimpse of it in the next chapter, on Monday 😉

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: vinnas

Wow nikki you drive me crazy by this story. its very enjoyable to see such type of writings from you .this two char are enough to this story I think but dnt know wats in ur thoughts to make us crazy. lets see in next update .any kind of story u make judgement to it perfectly soo plzz continue .waitin fr next week fr ur beautiful write ups ...
I hope u enjoyed ur vacation very well, happy to see come back with this beautiful surprise for us
Have a great time dear

Thanks Chandu once again for your heartfelt beautiful comment.

I've never written anything like this so was a bit scared. But now I'm relieved after reading the few comments.

And I had fun on my vacation. Now I'm back to normal so decided to give you all this surprise, till I work on my other updates 😳

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caller123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Nikki I read all. what to say ya. You are awesome. Again you proved us you are a marvelous writer. I love the way how you described Aarthi and Yash so nice.

Yash wants Aarthi. Wonder who will become puppeteer.

Will Aarthi become a puppeteer in Yash. I saw your replies to one of comment that you will give us a hint in next chapter. I'll wait for that then.

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Anusha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

I LOVED IT.
When is the next part coming?

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ANU

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Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Nikki dear...what have u done😳😳...in the story, aarti is driving yash crazy..n here u r driving us crazy😆😆...this isn't that explicit as u have mentioned..but seeing the sample,i'm☺️🤢...n i think that update really need a warning😆😆...( may be nikki's first bold update😉😆)...