OS 'Puppet Became Puppeteer', Chapter 3,page 24... - Page 16

Originally posted by: lovely_nikki

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Billie since everyone wants me to convert it into SS, I'll have to make some changes in the next part, so it'll take me time to update it. But you'll get it before the end of the next week 😃

Originally posted by: billieberry

even me want d ss😳, so take ur time dear no prob😃

Originally posted by: lovely_nikki

Naughty girl 😆

Originally posted by: billieberry

everyone wants it why not me hehe😆

Originally posted by: lovely_nikki

Intelligent girl 😉

To tell you a secret even I want to convert it into an SS😆

Originally posted by: nusratjahan505

First of all I am really very very sorry Nikki for being so late in giving comments on your OS PBP( I dont have any idea what should I tell it (outstanding...mind blowing..fantastic ...fabulous...rocking ...Dhasuu..Raapcheek...chummeshwari...what else yaar as nothing is enough to praise your skill as a writer.).

Even I've no idea what to call it. But your RaapCheek words said it all. 😉

But I am really very happy and proud that you have made attempt to write this os which was so different from other Arya works.👏.It was totally different from the concept of PV and Arya's character are also different for which I give you standing ovation dear.Hats off to you..👏👏👏

Mukti this indeed is different from my other works. In fact the writing style is different in the first two parts. 😳

The way you have described Arti's character was awesome.It was like a perfect description for a perfect Lady...⭐️.I just loved the representation of her character...👏

I had an image in my mind when I was writing Aarti's character and I'm happy I found the exact words to describe that image. 😳

What to say about Yash...i am just speechless.I wanna show you something...

Lately all He wanted to do was smell Her intoxicating fragrance. He wanted to remove the clip from Her hair, let it loose and play with it.

He wanted to remove Her thick glasses from Her eyes and get Himself drown in them.

He wanted to kiss and taste Her luscious lips, especially the lower one that She subconsciously chewed or nibbled on whenever She was in deep thinking.

U even cant imagine what I felt reading this part.My heart was beating fast and mind was going wild and all because of you Nikki...😆

WHen Yash locked the door of his cabin and kept moving towards her with his evil but extremely passionate intention I was just like 🤢.And to make my condition like this I am giving you this torture..

And you can't even imagine my condition while writing those scenes. 🤢. And this torture is nothing in front of what I gave you 😆

ANd when he said Arti "Arti I want to see you" I was totally dead Nikki.I was blushing so badly coz I could see his gaze on Arti...you wont believe me na ..then watch it

Now you can feel what was the impact of your writing on me dear...😉
And here Arti is also burning in the sensation of desire and it was quiet obvious coz who can be escaped from his charm...😳😳😳.

But what I loved the most was Yash's respect for Arti's honor...though he was desiring her but in spite of that he was waiting for her constant and it was so great to read Nikki.

Mukti, Yash knew that if went any further than kissing and touching, Aarti will also give into temptation. But then she'll regret it later and she'll hate herself for it. He wanted her for more than one time. So he stopped as he had promised. 👏

COz I have read FF on other forums and I can imagine what could be the sequence there.But you have maintained the passion between Arya without boldness and for this you deserve a huggyyy from me sweetheart...🤗🤗🤗

Mukti even I've read so many stories. Though I don't mind reading such bold scenes, but I personally can never write them. Even this was a little out of my comfort zone. But I still gave it a try. And I'm happy with the response that I got. 😳

When She still didn't moved, He went to Her and placed His one arm on Her stomach from the behind, hugging Her tightly. His touch on Her was electrifying for Both of Them.

She gasped and closed Her eyes. She started to feel weak at knees. Was finding it difficult to stand straight, so She clutched His arm tightly.

Niw tell me how did you exact feel writing this part and when you got such ideas and expressions..( Jiju should take you to more holiday trips so we can get such writing from you)😉😉😉

Ma'am this idea came to me before going on the vacation. So Jiju has nothing to do,with it. 😆

Finally Arya kissed and Yash said to Arti "

He touched His own lips and said " You taste like Chocolate"😉

I am totally speechless again...😳

And finally Yash said

"He hugged Her tightly and said in a husky voice " Marry Me". It was Not a Question. It was Not a Plea.
And Arti The puppet had no option but to say of Yes to her Puppeteer...⭐️

Really Nikkii you have lefy me speechless with your amazing OS dear.It was romantic...hot...sensual...but in a decent way..so what I can say is just...👏

Uff now you've left me speechless, with your Hot and Sweet Comment🤗

Originally posted by: billieberry

haha i know right, d idea is flowing just spit it nd share with us😉😆
btw i have edited my post on YAMR😃 do check😉

Originally posted by: lovely_nikki

My mind has become over active with thousands of ideas 😆

Ok Billie I'll check it but I'll reply on it later😳