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lovely_nikki

@lovely_nikki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#141

Originally posted by: alekhika20
Nice os

Thanks 😛

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Mahalakshmi

@maha9

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Posted: 11 years ago

#142

First of all so sorry for the late reply sweetu 😊

wow i cant believe its my sweetu with such superb sensuous romance aww !!! i am loving it so much dear

yash.. yash scindia the handsome man possessing the power to make beautiful ladies dance as his puppets is attracted towards arthi 😳
and it is so true that the far end arthi avoids him yash will get the longing to have her in his arms 😉

also to say the truth it is no wonder a simpke beautiful girl like barthi will make a man crazy for her 😆 so is the state of yash now !!!!
also she u r so true in saying arthi has every specilaity being so different from other women who r ready to spend time with yash 😳

so here comes my uncontrollable scindia handsome 😉 to take control of his lovely PA 😛
and she is a really a blessing to his company for getting such a big profit 👏👏👏
and the order of yash to arthi shows his eagerness to feel her in that dashing costume ☺️

wow both arthi and yash had the same yearning for each other but the time has now come to get into feelings and so when yash asked arthi to leave if she is disturbed .. arthi did not go 😳

each and every words that came from his mouth with husky voice sure would make her get beetroot red and wow what a sensuous romance u gave sweetu !!!

i was having tickling feeling reading your awesome update 😃 really there is no vulgarity in this but super cool update for romance of arya 😉

and your precap made me restless sweetu so it is better for you to continue it soon else i dont know what i will do 😆 samjee

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bilqeesbint Nazeer

@billieberry

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Posted: 11 years ago

#143

edited post @pg 14😳

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Taahir

@taahir004

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Posted: 11 years ago

#144

Yash left to become a puppet ... well well

all good men to end up becomming puppets

awesome update

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lovely_nikki

@lovely_nikki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#145

Originally posted by: billieberry
Part 2
Beautifully wriiten nikki di👏⭐️
Love it..❤️
Mr. Boss only gives order, what can Aarti do obey😛
She hid herself in her dressing so she can hid from d predator😆
But she is a prey now😳
Ahoo! Ahoo...precap waiting dear🤢
Thanx for d pm😊

Thanks Billie 🤗

Oh Yeah Mr. Boss is Very Good in Giving Orders and like an Obedient P.A She listens to and follows all Orders so Seriously 😆

Poor girl tried so hard to hide herself from Mr. Boss but he finally found her 🤢

We will see who is the prey and who is the predator in the next chapter 😉

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Nusrat Jahan Mukti

@nusratjahan505

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Posted: 11 years ago

#146

First of all I am really very very sorry Nikki for being so late in giving comments on your OS PBP( I dont have any idea what should I tell it (outstanding...mind blowing..fantastic ...fabulous...rocking ...Dhasuu..Raapcheek...chummeshwari...what else yaar as nothing is enough to praise your skill as a writer.).But I am really very happy and proud that you have made attempt to write this os which was so different from other Arya works.👏.It was totally different from the concept of PV and Arya's character are also different for which I give you standing ovation dear.Hats off to you..👏👏👏
The way you have described Arti's character was awesome.It was like a perfect description for a perfect Lady...⭐️.I just loved the representation of her character...👏
What to say about Yash...i am just speechless.I wanna show you something...

Lately all He wanted to do was smell Her intoxicating fragrance. He wanted to remove the clip from Her hair, let it loose and play with it.

He wanted to remove Her thick glasses from Her eyes and get Himself drown in them.

He wanted to kiss and taste Her luscious lips, especially the lower one that She subconsciously chewed or nibbled on whenever She was in deep thinking.

U even cant imagine what I felt reading this part.My heart was beating fast and mind was going wild and all because of you Nikki...😆

WHen Yash locked the door of his cabin and kept moving towards her with his evil but extremely passionate intention I was just like 🤢.And to make my condition like this I am giving you this torture..

ANd when he said Arti "Arti I want to see you" I was totally dead Nikki.I was blushing so badly coz I could see his gaze on Arti...you wont believe me na ..then watch it

Now you can feel what was the impact of your writing on me dear...😉
And here Arti is also burning in the sensation of desire and it was quiet obvious coz who can be escaped from his charm...😳😳😳.But what I loved the most was Yash's respect for Arti's honor...though he was desiring her but in spite of that he was waiting for her constant and it was so great to read Nikki.COz I have read FF on other forums and I can imagine what could be the sequence there.But you have maintained the passion between Arya without boldness and for this you deserve a huggyyy from me sweetheart...🤗🤗🤗

When She still didn't moved, He went to Her and placed His one arm on Her stomach from the behind, hugging Her tightly. His touch on Her was electrifying for Both of Them.

She gasped and closed Her eyes. She started to feel weak at knees. Was finding it difficult to stand straight, so She clutched His arm tightly.

Niw tell me how did you exact feel writing this part and when you got such ideas and expressions..( Jiju should take you to more holiday trips so we can get such writing from you)😉😉😉

Finally Arya kissed and Yash said to Arti "

He touched His own lips and said " You taste like Chocolate"😉

I am totally speechless again...😳

And finally Yash said

"He hugged Her tightly and said in a husky voice " Marry Me". It was Not a Question. It was Not a Plea.
And Arti The puppet had no option but to say of Yes to her Puppeteer...⭐️

Really Nikkii you have lefy me speechless with your amazing OS dear.It was romantic...hot...sensual...but in a decent way..so what I can say is just...👏

Edited by nusratjahan505 - 11 years ago

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bilqeesbint Nazeer

@billieberry

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#147

Thank you nikki di for the response🤗
waiting for d next update😳

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lovely_nikki

@lovely_nikki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#148

Originally posted by: billieberry
Thank you nikki di for the response🤗
waiting for d next update😳

🤗

Billie since everyone wants me to convert it into SS, I'll have to make some changes in the next part, so it'll take me time to update it. But you'll get it before the end of the next week 😃

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lovely_nikki

@lovely_nikki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#149

Originally posted by: maha9
First of all so sorry for the late reply sweetu 😊

wow i cant believe its my sweetu with such superb sensuous romance aww !!! i am loving it so much dear

yash.. yash scindia the handsome man possessing the power to make beautiful ladies dance as his puppets is attracted towards arthi 😳
and it is so true that the far end arthi avoids him yash will get the longing to have her in his arms 😉

also to say the truth it is no wonder a simpke beautiful girl like barthi will make a man crazy for her 😆 so is the state of yash now !!!!
also she u r so true in saying arthi has every specilaity being so different from other women who r ready to spend time with yash 😳

so here comes my uncontrollable scindia handsome 😉 to take control of his lovely PA 😛
and she is a really a blessing to his company for getting such a big profit 👏👏👏
and the order of yash to arthi shows his eagerness to feel her in that dashing costume ☺️

wow both arthi and yash had the same yearning for each other but the time has now come to get into feelings and so when yash asked arthi to leave if she is disturbed .. arthi did not go 😳

each and every words that came from his mouth with husky voice sure would make her get beetroot red and wow what a sensuous romance u gave sweetu !!!

i was having tickling feeling reading your awesome update 😃 really there is no vulgarity in this but super cool update for romance of arya 😉

and your precap made me restless sweetu so it is better for you to continue it soon else i dont know what i will do 😆 samjee